1.0 核心表現力397Please respect copyright.PENANAZPyy28RwOP
以懸念型的小說為例,核心表現力是:397Please respect copyright.PENANAzt0lU59VOJ
a. 過去(日常):簡單的細節入手,塑造環境不安全397Please respect copyright.PENANABjHBXBj2wx
b. 現在(懸念):不安全的異常描述397Please respect copyright.PENANAx0mZI73ZvP
c. 未來(心理):探索人的身邊和心理,各種荒誕的可能性
2.0 爽感397Please respect copyright.PENANAR0HKEv0oc9
表現力的最終目標,是帶給讀者爽感。397Please respect copyright.PENANAHPgUXHnskt
如果單純只有爽點,而沒有爽感,那麼這種表現力是錯誤的。397Please respect copyright.PENANApxvmT5OTN3
常見的爽點雷區:397Please respect copyright.PENANAMwD2uZIYIn
a. 俗氣,如亂葬坑,紅高跟鞋,紅嫁衣,笑聲,哭聲,水聲397Please respect copyright.PENANA8Bv0Nqrv6G
b. 虛假,如靈力捉鬼,寶石,水晶,這些是都市爽文,而非懸念397Please respect copyright.PENANARASmx0vNCr
c. 空洞,如鬼手突然出現,缺乏了像環境、推理、心理這些表現力
3.0 主線劇情397Please respect copyright.PENANAcDwZl5h2AW
首先必需理解表現力和爽感,之後才能懂得設計好看的主線劇情。
3.1 人設+三條主線397Please respect copyright.PENANAxOwcFoLwIR
以【治癒】和【惡夢】兩書作為藍本,它們的架構有相似之處。397Please respect copyright.PENANAFNBVTSLDng
a. 賣人設(不會有恐懼/社恐)397Please respect copyright.PENANA0lNbDcB2zT
b. 功法線(開局比別人強,裝備,夥伴,天賦,等級)397Please respect copyright.PENANAegNJeNXGyq
c. 刷副本地圖線(幸福社區,益民社區)397Please respect copyright.PENANAtMEMcBdM5e
d. 世界觀歷史線(惡夢病毒,大boss蝴蝶的)
3.2 主線劇情服務於表現力,目標是給讀者爽感397Please respect copyright.PENANAEjr5fexmu4
首先,人設+三條主線,設定了故事的賣點(長篇架構)397Please respect copyright.PENANATRhvOnBqm2
然後,用釣子懸念設立期待感(懸念)397Please respect copyright.PENANA4HCE8MhRft
接著,完成任務和探索地圖的表現力(核心爽感)397Please respect copyright.PENANAVgtPD6ATgI
最後,才是傳統意義上的爽點(榮譽感,越級挑戰,獲取裝備夥伴功法,升級,打臉)397Please respect copyright.PENANALogzo19aSW
這是一個累進過程,像上圖中的三維空間會愈來愈大,而架構則幫助了小說不易寫崩。
3.3 功法線的表現力 397Please respect copyright.PENANA5OPTbrC8ZW
主角的功法線有四個維度,包括:397Please respect copyright.PENANAAWMkFzGtah
a. 裝備:397Please respect copyright.PENANAU9z0twefar
裝備必需有限制性,如時間限制、消耗品,而絕不能是無敵流裝備397Please respect copyright.PENANAIyNy7IgVq4
攻擊裝備:主角用作關鍵尾刀397Please respect copyright.PENANAth2CFTPJSy
防禦裝備:主角前期太弱,需要消耗型防裝397Please respect copyright.PENANA0JKyk1ZM9I
b. 寵物:(加成型)397Please respect copyright.PENANAjhpzkHAbSx
c. 夥伴:(法師範圍型,戰士物傷型,刺客偷襲型)397Please respect copyright.PENANAX6p51rIMYs
d. 天賦:(成長型)
397Please respect copyright.PENANAqKVgzAKkmD