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應該關於寫作方法?大家的文筆怎麼來的?
#1
單純
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1 day ago
我小時候上課學過一些動詞變名詞,婉轉,比喻之類的修辭手法。也開始分析看過的作者文筆背後的公式。
但長大後接觸到米蘭昆德拉,完全沒有修飾,可以說是平鋪直敘但卻有種樸實得震耳欲聾的感覺。自此就開始模仿米蘭昆德拉 對庸俗的 千篇一律的修飾很不屑,但又退一步想,這樣刻意避免豈不是另一種庸俗嗎?
創作,應該怎麼寫呢?有沒有人會有一樣的困擾,修飾嫌自己庸俗,樸實,直說背後想法,又顯得過於單調。
另外就是問問大家的文筆一開始是從哪裏學的
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商澐
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1 day ago
@單純, 就……直接寫了啊,沒有特別學,想太多反而會沒有自己的風格,名著的文筆可以借鑑但可以發展自己的筆風啊
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#2
鞏毓靈
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1 day ago
我自己是不太會深化感覺的人(我不知道怎麼說 反正就是不會用寫作文那種方法去形容一件很簡單的事 覺得沒必要)
啊我這樣 偶爾會覺得我文筆不太好 所以我一直都(自認)專注於故事本身而非描寫
關於文筆,就是多看。我以前就認識一個文手,常常看他的文,漸漸就發展成現在這樣的文風
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商澐
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1 day ago
@鞏毓靈, 的確,看別人的書確實會影響,但我覺得去學就太刻意了,反而沒辦法更好的呈現,看很多書就是在潛移默化影響,在這樣的過程中會加入自己的東西,最後形成的文風就是自己的了
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#3
falabilaba
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1 day ago
我可以分享我的技巧,只是內容會有點長
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單純
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1 day ago
@falabilaba, 這正是我想聽的 ,願聞其詳 🙏
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falabilaba
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1 day ago
@單純, 核心主旨是:引導你的讀者產生想像。
例如:由上到下,由近到遠,從頭到腳,由濃到淡。
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falabilaba
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1 day ago
@falabilaba, 例如這樣https://www.penana.com/story/171720/%E5%8F%88%E5%B8%B6%E9%98%BF%E5%A7%A8%E4%BE%86%E9%80%99%E7%A8%AE%E6%B2%92%E6%9C%89%E4%BA%BA%E7%85%99%E7%9A%84%E5%9C%B0%E6%96%B9/issue/30
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單純
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1 day ago
@falabilaba, 聽起來蠻有電影感的 ,謝謝你的示範
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#4
靈貍莊缺看板娘
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1 day ago
關於與技巧方法相關的問題,我的答案向來是照著你喜歡的作品去寫
你喜歡歐美小說就學歐美小說,你喜歡日輕就照著日輕寫,喜歡中國日更那類的就去看他們怎麼寫,喜歡什麼就寫什麼
就像你喜歡這個題材去寫這個題材的故事,也會有人喜歡這個題材去看你的故事
硬要去學不只會破壞你原本的寫作節奏,也未必能討好讀者
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單純
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1 day ago
@靈貍莊缺看板娘, 謝謝,我也同意, 不過我也是真的喜歡才學昆德拉的。 只是心態有點矛盾。
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靈貍莊缺看板娘
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1 day ago
@單純, 一點也不矛盾 喜歡就照著寫就好
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#5
鏡花水月
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1 day ago
看寫作時在看哪本小說,就會帶一點(非常一點)類似的感覺,像用詞之類的
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