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角色塑造
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詩妍妍
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1 month ago
如題,大家在角色塑造時會怎麼讓他不過於扁平?
上面是一個問題,這裡也有一個問題,就是如果你不想讓角色說話的話呢?
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商澐
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1 month ago
@詩妍妍, 超酷的想法,應該會用其他人的視角塑造吧?
他沒有台詞,是活在回憶裡,還是不能說話,還是其他?
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詩妍妍
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1 month ago
@商澐, 了解,是一個方法呢
主要是想要凸顯出那個角色在結尾講的唯一一句話,讓結尾的餘韻悠長~回味無窮。
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商澐
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1 month ago
@詩妍妍, 那是要一句很有意義的台詞,但如果他平時有出現,可能就要用其他人的視角,大概這樣吧
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寒天七舞
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1 week ago
@詩妍妍, 透過劇情衝突 讓他做出不同的選擇 似善4️⃣惡 似好似壞 然後透過內心的描寫 了解他抉擇的理由
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#2
子不語
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1 month ago
賦予角色內在的衝突。
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靈貍莊缺看板娘
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1 month ago
@子不語, mujica很衝突
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詩妍妍
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1 month ago
謝謝你的回答,感覺角色活起來了,我去嘗試看看。
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#3
若婆.璃
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1 week ago
代入一下 其他角色之間互相檢視的視角 幫助應該就很大了
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#4
免役迷彩
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1 week ago
我的話是注重情感描寫,雖然我是寫二創同人。
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#5
月見雪下
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1 week ago
不想讓角色說話的話,可以用心理描寫,如果都不想用就要用一些細緻的行為描寫了。
或者要不要試試,全部都用旁敲側擊,某某A說這個人是一個乖巧的小孩,他是我的兒子;某某B說這個人說這個人是個天才,他是我的未婚夫;某某C說這個人是我的愛人;某某D說他是爸。
他都不用說話了,但是你只會記得他。
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#6
貓,貓貓
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1 week ago
像是齊木楠雄的災難那樣的感覺嗎?
雖然平時話很多但全部都是心靈感應,真的開口只有在最後一集的時候
然後大家還吐槽為什麼好像第一次聽到他說話XD
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#7
零
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1 week ago
如果有內心戲的話,可以著重情感描寫
想保持神秘感可以試著靠肢體語言和言行舉止的細微變化
要突顯一個人的性格,動作比言語更有說服力呢
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#8
咯艇
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1 week ago
側面描寫,從他人角色去看待,就好像孔明,寫劉備自己人怎麼看他,周瑜怎麼看他,甚至後人怎麼看他。
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#9
Hong Wa Tsang
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5 days ago
喬幫主和慕容家登場前的描述就很經典的人未登場令人神往
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