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新手求評價/可改進的地方
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木南
木南 ⋅ 6 days ago
https://www.penana.com/story/187316/雷霆雨露-皆是君恩

我剛開始寫宮廷/宮鬥的，想看看有沒有人可以幫我評價一下。
-人物塑造和鋪墊方面各位會不會有些建議？

多多指教！！
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