My story, Night of Flames has gotten a lot of attention recently, which I love, but at the same time, nobody has answered my call for feedback there. If there are any beta readers who could point out inconsistencies or provied example paragraphs they think could be fine tuned, I would love to chat with them.
Night of Flames is a Sci-Fi novel with roots in Greek Mythology. I hope to officially publish this story one day, but it needs to go through a lot of editing. I'm not even sure where to focus my energy at this moment. I think the story could use some fresh eyes.
Tyasm