1. 講故事的差異489Please respect copyright.PENANA4L5wwtdRI7
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡489Please respect copyright.PENANAOC3eouIbrP
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)489Please respect copyright.PENANAusqWusPsN7
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色489Please respect copyright.PENANAHECWJtpK78
看點:489Please respect copyright.PENANAO9Z1Xualrh
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動489Please respect copyright.PENANALYBypDnWpH
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀489Please respect copyright.PENANA34dyZjEuzK
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅489Please respect copyright.PENANAp1KUkuHvLy
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力489Please respect copyright.PENANAGACVfq5NdF
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾489Please respect copyright.PENANAxLWmmjeGwq
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)489Please respect copyright.PENANAe0zSaq3ZNM
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點489Please respect copyright.PENANApJQ2bAhZkf
看點:489Please respect copyright.PENANA4PPQ31m9Zs
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼489Please respect copyright.PENANAhLaYgzTTGk
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事489Please respect copyright.PENANAPktgEpUw14
c. 有趣的劇情489Please respect copyright.PENANAwrZGVLDRwq
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意489Please respect copyright.PENANArj3p5csASN
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾489Please respect copyright.PENANA7coQmibSd2
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇489Please respect copyright.PENANAVH0RV280jW
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。489Please respect copyright.PENANAtK6nF8V6Ax
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:489Please respect copyright.PENANAi3sq7Cywwa
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。489Please respect copyright.PENANAQdmWhvLH9d
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。489Please respect copyright.PENANAuLluLIwXHj
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷489Please respect copyright.PENANAp6BGC74NqJ
曾經搞錯過的賣點:489Please respect copyright.PENANA4KhwPaGMQ8
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。489Please respect copyright.PENANAEBOG8I9C0p
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。489Please respect copyright.PENANA1SBUEVrvC3
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。489Please respect copyright.PENANAV7pZ8wgCu9
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。489Please respect copyright.PENANAhT9X0kIr4p
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。