1. 講故事的差異492Please respect copyright.PENANA8gdUbQ9MSp
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡492Please respect copyright.PENANATxGbfKJYL8
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)492Please respect copyright.PENANANmBajYfBoI
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色492Please respect copyright.PENANA5XKqqWIOfg
看點:492Please respect copyright.PENANAWgQ4yiw7UB
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動492Please respect copyright.PENANALDZgKHsgKX
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀492Please respect copyright.PENANAXA2o5EsQyJ
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅492Please respect copyright.PENANAQt561Vy8ba
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力492Please respect copyright.PENANAvlDYexRsPt
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾492Please respect copyright.PENANA3OE9JqJAZb
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)492Please respect copyright.PENANA3XJyHxXLtO
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點492Please respect copyright.PENANAoCcEoIZlxc
看點:492Please respect copyright.PENANA0Bzb9GX7JC
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼492Please respect copyright.PENANAS0gcPCxRFc
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事492Please respect copyright.PENANANd0ukZ2ERC
c. 有趣的劇情492Please respect copyright.PENANAZb4BppvGDT
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意492Please respect copyright.PENANADrajpVuJd4
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾492Please respect copyright.PENANAFQjxyaPIep
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇492Please respect copyright.PENANADl19jN5YuY
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。492Please respect copyright.PENANAigUYOZiuTU
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:492Please respect copyright.PENANANPlNkkNpZ7
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。492Please respect copyright.PENANAebbc56CqIq
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。492Please respect copyright.PENANASbfRqaptsE
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷492Please respect copyright.PENANAYPPbQAK54G
曾經搞錯過的賣點:492Please respect copyright.PENANATggJDhkods
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。492Please respect copyright.PENANAy3sqDyTtq2
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。492Please respect copyright.PENANAlbl2Dxc6IO
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。492Please respect copyright.PENANATdYAZjInrc
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。492Please respect copyright.PENANAJZeScIZ7xW
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。