1. 講故事的差異486Please respect copyright.PENANAbMm6yFvCxc
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡486Please respect copyright.PENANANulZ2r06yX
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)486Please respect copyright.PENANAWRE0CZviEJ
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色486Please respect copyright.PENANAcxHHobli6q
看點:486Please respect copyright.PENANACGPU9cirRY
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動486Please respect copyright.PENANAHNAzTnDLqQ
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀486Please respect copyright.PENANA8WPhEhaCAJ
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅486Please respect copyright.PENANAunOR7YzX0d
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力486Please respect copyright.PENANAlATOJP7ZY9
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾486Please respect copyright.PENANAYXhMlq9lR1
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)486Please respect copyright.PENANAEBzJKWSHJ3
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點486Please respect copyright.PENANAhTQ9LCv6oG
看點:486Please respect copyright.PENANAbW9WJLRyIY
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼486Please respect copyright.PENANASeHD0BQetp
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事486Please respect copyright.PENANA9skMC9GHR4
c. 有趣的劇情486Please respect copyright.PENANAwMsXp7DTg8
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意486Please respect copyright.PENANA2iLnzpr9Vr
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾486Please respect copyright.PENANAVB9Y52wsUW
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇486Please respect copyright.PENANAZU3Pl0qWf9
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。486Please respect copyright.PENANAefknyIOdbL
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:486Please respect copyright.PENANAHtX4ZVM0pl
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。486Please respect copyright.PENANAa5VHSmWZyN
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。486Please respect copyright.PENANAETwKM88748
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷486Please respect copyright.PENANAENa1EbZ4LL
曾經搞錯過的賣點:486Please respect copyright.PENANAh31xqIXzZy
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。486Please respect copyright.PENANAv1JMB4patr
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。486Please respect copyright.PENANAESYPjddxiV
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。486Please respect copyright.PENANAcoozdNCKWX
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。486Please respect copyright.PENANA9uaRdCIHgt
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。