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２. 評論章節：第一章到第八章（目前只更新到第五章，但我不確定嵐斕開始看時會是什麼時候，就用字數粗略來算）8964 copyright protection45ＰＥＮＡＮＡRn8ExVf85e 維尼
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３. 評論方向：想知道簡介的吸引度（自認很不會寫簡介）、劇情節奏和吸引度、角色塑造。49Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡduxVTC9P2o
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