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《電車》461Please respect copyright.PENANAkDW7gk6rXG
在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。461Please respect copyright.PENANASkUvaQN1C2
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。461Please respect copyright.PENANAq9OP3pmtdX
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。461Please respect copyright.PENANAJ4ht5nrN0D
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。461Please respect copyright.PENANAhYcAG7A65A
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。461Please respect copyright.PENANAVpMI3hwdbW
「叮……叮……」的聲音靜止了,世界靜默了。461Please respect copyright.PENANAvhZatZkO9G
鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。461Please respect copyright.PENANAwq1D8wxETT
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。461Please respect copyright.PENANAHH6bxuFBSW
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。461Please respect copyright.PENANAix2vbJRr4q
可是,她抓不著我。461Please respect copyright.PENANAIVRPSPfOWz
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