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首先,本人在此代表淡趣兄弟,向寂魚致上謝意。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAq1ntHI7ID7
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我們絕對不敢自稱是前輩,但是能夠在進駐penana的一年後收到寂魚的邀請,是我們的榮幸。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAM0orpjgIdF
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接下來的內容,我們兄弟會分別對各位新人們,從心態上跟寫作的大方向上做建議,希望能夠幫到各位來此尋求答案的新人。 564Please respect copyright.PENANA1L3SPejkPh
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淡趣兄弟-小威 564Please respect copyright.PENANAKrSNrESfXB
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「為什麼我之前也都是想寫出一篇好看的小說,但是辛苦的更新了好幾個章節,卻都沒有什麼人讀我的作品呢?」 564Please respect copyright.PENANAU8e28Kwzfp
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這類問題,是我私訊裡收到最多大同小異的問題,在收到這種問題的時候大部分我都會反問他們一個問題: 564Please respect copyright.PENANADIuyRVxr0A
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你們為什麼會想寫作呢? 564Please respect copyright.PENANA2fHUnKgaZT
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而大部分的朋友都會回答我,因為興趣,因為覺得能夠寫出一個作品感覺很屌。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAo0jCt4RPO4
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後來我又會再問一個問題: 564Please respect copyright.PENANAzq24FqhFtA
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你們寫作的動機是什麼?是什麼動機會讓你們想要打開word檔來進行寫作這個動作? 564Please respect copyright.PENANAwcllBWVEqT
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這個問題我大概問了不下十五位發問者,十五位的回答大同小異,統合下來說就是,因為我們看了很多好看的作品,覺得那些作者都可以寫出這麼猛的作品了,我們也可以!!所以就立刻到了電腦桌前,打開了word開始撰寫故事。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAKlmkCbr0Vl
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聽完這個回答後,我一般都是選擇暫時性已讀,原因是因為我需要時間思考我究竟該不該說實話,隨著時間推移,我發現到了今天為止,這類對於作品沒人看的問題是每天都有。 564Please respect copyright.PENANA2dKmJCudkf
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所以左思右想過後,我決定還是告訴各位我自己的看法與自身經歷,給各位參考參考。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAiS69f1T6gk
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我發現我自己喜歡寫作的時候,其實是在國中的時候,對,各位沒聽錯,國中的時候我就發現我喜歡寫作,在國小國中的時候,任何造句或是作文,對我來說都不困難,我還記得國小3年4年級的時候,我的造句還常常被班導寫在黑板上作為優良造句參考。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAWn3kdOBBcG
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到了國中的時候,有一次在國文課的時候,老師給了我們一個主題讓我們寫作文,結果到了繳交日當天剩下我沒有交而已,而老師來跟我要作文的時候,卻發現我桌上擺了大概3~4張的作文紙,而我在埋頭寫著第五張作文紙,老師一問才知道,我一直寫一直寫,最後生出了一個乾脆寫成一個小說的想法。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAPvrJLFFoei
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最後在同學跟老師的勸說下,我選擇交出了這篇已經不是作文的作文,到現在9年過去了,我依然對我當時寫的東西有印象,不過實話實說…現在想起來我真的很想打死我自己,因為我真的寫得超級破爛XD 564Please respect copyright.PENANAkobXksbfsp
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在國中畢業後的這段時間,我在家休閒的時候如果不想打電動,我就會翻開我爸買的各種小說出來看,所以可以說閱讀的這個習慣在我小的時候就培養出來了。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAyrIYdjXZpf
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後來上了高職接觸到了跳舞,我的心力一瞬間都投注在了學校跟跳舞上面,寫作這個興趣就被我深埋於心裡,不過閱讀跟練習的習慣依然不減,再不跳舞的時候,我也會打開word檔坐在電腦前打打自己心裡的故事或是短篇文章,雖然最後都被我刪掉了,隨著時間的流動,我慢慢開始把我自己看到的遣詞用句,開始融進我平日練習的文章短句裡面。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAceBo5FoEyg
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就這樣一有空閒不跳舞,又不想玩遊戲時,就一直練習看書,看了又寫寫了又丟,我一個人的時候不跳舞,就是抱著好幾本書在看,不知不覺到了大四,我好死不死得了氣胸,因此暫時失去了動這個能力,於是我就把心思投入在靜這一方面,那時我又重新開始嘗試創作一篇小說,於是開始在摯友文宣傳自己的最後一個練習作品,魏武魂。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAzhSguNjioa
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當然,最後這個作品也被我關起來了,畢竟只是練習用,問題也很多,也沒什麼讀者,最後在一次畢製的放假期間,我花了將近一天的時間去思考這幾年寫作下來的心得,並且打了出來私藏在電腦裡,最後我拉著我最好的朋友,一起跟我討論了一個屬於我自己內心的一個世界跟故事,也就是淡趣兄弟的第一部作品:雲中遊龍。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAYR9gjFnX7A
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它不只是一個我心裡的故事,更是我這9年下來,經歷無數閱讀跟無數寫作練習所產生的精華,所以裏頭的一字一句,劇情走向,都是我經過深思熟慮後去撰寫出來的,只要寫了我自己看了都覺得不好看,我就會重新去思考該怎麼更改該怎麼重新寫作。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAFO1aYajbxJ
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說到這裡,我相信有部分朋友已經明白我想表達什麼了。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAeGqfV53JtP
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寫作並不是一朝一夕,並不是憑著一腔熱血或是心血來潮就可以做到好的東西,這9年來,在雲中遊龍出世以前,但凡是任何我有po上過網路的作品,觀看次數幾乎為0~10之間,跟各位一樣,我也是一直在納悶跟挫折中一直不斷練習著自己的寫作跟看書。 564Please respect copyright.PENANA5sQ03lWvCV
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跟每個事情一樣,跳舞需要花大量時間體力去練習,聽音樂,不斷追求上進,吸取老師給的經驗意見,寫作亦是如此,沒有經歷過各種寫稿棄搞,沒有看過無數別人寫作的作品,沒有足夠的經驗累積與學習,想要寫出一個好的作品基本上是不可能的事情。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAR5O0TVo0UO
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我不是什麼寫作大師,也不是什麼厲害的小說家,但是一個作家該吃的苦,該做的事,我自認都經歷過了,看完這篇後,我希望朋友們在私訊我上述類似的問題時,好好靜下心來想想,以上這些該做的事,該看的書,該進行的練習,你們確實做到了嗎? 564Please respect copyright.PENANAxzYWLhzSsh
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以上,感謝各位耐心看完~ 564Please respect copyright.PENANAbpZoI4S4ET
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淡趣兄弟-彥安 564Please respect copyright.PENANAw1DULHv8Lq
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個人寫作的經驗大多都是落在寫劇本,所以在小威拉著我要一起寫小說時,其實我也是蠻錯愕的,不過這也是個挑戰,跟著他寫到現在,才發現劇本跟小說的描寫方式雖然不一樣,但是內容,方向,該怎麼創作,卻與劇本大同小異,在此列舉幾個寫故事的大方向,希望能幫到各位。 564Please respect copyright.PENANABlXKgpCJrG
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關於人物: 564Please respect copyright.PENANAyCgHHVbdLW
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如果要描繪人物形象,人設非常重要,是基本中的基本,所以在寫故事前,要先列出這個角色的形象,個性,身高,曾經發生的事,你給這個人的人設,一生的經歷是什麼。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAgRUrgEUaDB
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舉個例子:這個人是個惡人,但是他的故事可能是因為,本來是個善人,後來在他身上發生了什麼毀滅性的打擊,才導致他變成這樣的一個悲劇人物,或是他在故事中是一個好人的話,那他為什麼會是個好人。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAvT3Z7aSsOf
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再來在寫作之前,人物之間的關係也要在寫小說之前都先設定好,先行畫出人物的關係樹,這樣自己在寫作時就不會在人物出場愈來愈多時而忘記哪個人物跟人物的關係,進而大大影響後續劇情的發展。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAEcXGa8AWUr
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關於:故事內容 564Please respect copyright.PENANAuhidrifQtN
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「劇情大剛」是每個人在創作故事前,都必須要先想好的一個非常重要的東西,太多太多人都是忽略了故事大剛,而是先寫,寫到後面自己都沒發現自己的故事愈寫愈偏,寫到後頭連自己都不會寫了,大剛之所以重要,就是給你一個從頭至尾的方向,讓你不會跳脫本來該有的框架,進而讓故事歪掉。 564Please respect copyright.PENANA7G071YKrF5
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而過於重視故事的開頭,而輕視故事的內容描寫,也是非常多新人會犯的錯誤,故事的開頭往往都只是舖層,而精彩的點往往都在內容都是結尾,開頭固然重要,但是如果內容與開頭相差甚巨,那這個作品就是一個容易被讀者棄讀的作品,虎頭蛇尾是新人最常犯的錯誤,與禁忌之一。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAbA5DLq4HuW
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關於心態: 564Please respect copyright.PENANA8T3y1cTIfe
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在心態上,不要力求完美,因為沒有人起步的作品就是神作,不要一開始就認為自己的作品一定很好看,當這個心態成立時,自己的作品觀看次數一旦不理想,就很容易崩塌。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAdLort8PbRY
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我個人認為,心態最重要的另一點,就是要永遠能夠接受他人的批評,我們兩兄弟看過的很多例子,都是分享了自己的故事,卻沒有招來想像中的稱讚,反而是迎來同為創作者的一些建議,指教,最後因為不能接受而跟其發生衝突,最後自己的作品既沒人願意觀賞,自身給人的第一印象也一落千丈。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAYWXQUpBw62
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請記得,觀看人數再多,稱讚再好的作品,終究有人會批評。 564Please respect copyright.PENANAnxv3xsq0kC
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以上,是淡趣兄弟在此次「魚魚創挑第四期,前輩!請你指導我的製作」給出的建議與方向,希望能夠實質幫助到各位新人們~ 564Please respect copyright.PENANAtZcMirggxa
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在此,再次感謝寂魚~ 564Please respect copyright.PENANAgExujd80rh
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