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高中生墨守晨遭遇獸人襲擊，并被砍斷手腕，卻突然覺醒成半蟲戰士。8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡwethZudsAU 維尼

從此開始，他結識了白蝶姬、人魚妹、狼男、蘭花螳螂姬、岩石弟、藍銀狐女、白鳳女和死神女等同伴。8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡOaqtiYsFVD 維尼

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夢中的他，是一名跟機械災害對抗的英雄。8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1BHI1mkY4N 維尼

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他將邊忙著戰鬥，邊忙著應付吃醋發火的女主，並找出世界的真相。8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡpZkZSicwHY 維尼

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1）最有印象的初登場角色？8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡKuR47IpBpx 維尼

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2）簡介跟前25章的故事貼切嗎？8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡvv6FB7bp43 維尼

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第一章是主角墨守晨蟲化後的第二天，第二章才倒敘回蟲化第一天，會否覺得混亂？8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡWcc6MLofmu 維尼

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（之前已收過十多篇書評，已知缺點有一開始登場角色太多，劇情進展緩慢，以上兩點可以不用再提，省下寶貴的時間。）8964 copyright protection204ＰＥＮＡＮＡmISgHcJqEz 維尼

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