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① 玩一下漢俳：「五、七、五」的句式，韻腳可押可不押，不像日本俳句要求放「季語」(和季節有關的語句)，感覺較為寬鬆。8964 copyright protection184ＰＥＮＡＮＡMi7d2Le1WV 維尼
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② 這組詩作稍微用典，精確來說，是用了一些知識，這裡先不說破，如果有興趣，在留言區討論吧。8964 copyright protection184ＰＥＮＡＮＡOjCUKOQA7r 維尼
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③ 因為我這篇是「非參賽作品」，所以題主無須點評；有空再留言，不留言也無妨——我知道被「待回覆」追著跑的感覺，會心累。188Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOuPFKiZDVc
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感謝你辦這個新詩創挑，我覺得不用硬撐，逼自己非要寫出什麼精闢的評論不可，有多少時間，就做多少事，加油加油！8964 copyright protection184ＰＥＮＡＮＡWSfQ5hCZol 維尼
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