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① 玩一下漢俳:「五、七、五」的句式,韻腳可押可不押,不像日本俳句要求放「季語」(和季節有關的語句),感覺較為寬鬆。8964 copyright protection243PENANAXOsVPJo6Qu 維尼
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② 這組詩作稍微用典,精確來說,是用了一些知識,這裡先不說破,如果有興趣,在留言區討論吧。8964 copyright protection243PENANA1XHmhX6FSl 維尼
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③ 因為我這篇是「非參賽作品」,所以題主無須點評;有空再留言,不留言也無妨——我知道被「待回覆」追著跑的感覺,會心累。247Please respect copyright.PENANAkvY2bfZ2aE
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感謝你辦這個新詩創挑,我覺得不用硬撐,逼自己非要寫出什麼精闢的評論不可,有多少時間,就做多少事,加油加油!8964 copyright protection243PENANAfxoMZykQD2 維尼
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