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NPC默颺的話—鼓勵在開始進入故事前留意的讀前通知
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#2
第零章----命犯天剎孤星
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#3
一、命運交錯的一天
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#4
選擇A:直接帶張許可證出發,去許可證上面嘅地址搵張月星。
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2 Comments
#5
A. 用錢解決問題,截的士
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3 Comments
#6
A. 直接原地大叫「張月星」
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1407 Reads
5 Comments
#7
C. 打俾張月星
32 Likes
1293 Reads
3 Comments
#8
B. 支持女神,入去
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1292 Reads
4 Comments
#9
B. 四季酒店自助餐
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1321 Reads
5 Comments
#10
A. 襯衫
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1239 Reads
5 Comments
#11
C. 偷老豆套西裝
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1289 Reads
3 Comments
#12
B. 係囉,點解嘅?
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1198 Reads
5 Comments
#13
C. 點解你會知有間四季茶餐廳?
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1362 Reads
5 Comments
#14
E. 講翻頭先同婆婆嘅小學回憶
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1218 Reads
2 Comments
#15
A. 應承
34 Likes
1595 Reads
2 Comments
#16
C. 自打十巴
34 Likes
1172 Reads
3 Comments
#17
D. 接受現實,破財擋災
38 Likes
1141 Reads
5 Comments
#18
D. 一人之境(尹光版)
36 Likes
1227 Reads
4 Comments
#19
C. 拎阿爸啲衫落街洗
37 Likes
1156 Reads
2 Comments
#20
D. 用平淡嘅語氣
36 Likes
1090 Reads
2 Comments
#21
A. 求佢收平啲
37 Likes
1174 Reads
4 Comments
#22
A. 問佢到底想要啲咩先可以平
34 Likes
1180 Reads
5 Comments
#23
B. 大聲呼喝:「男子漢,賣藝不賣身!」
33 Likes
1101 Reads
3 Comments
#24
A. 接受建議,留低幫手
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1197 Reads
2 Comments
#25
A.  出100%力做
38 Likes
1106 Reads
1 Comment
#26
A.  聽首歌
36 Likes
1086 Reads
4 Comments
#27
C.  中文書
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1082 Reads
3 Comments
#28
A.  修改表格
36 Likes
1080 Reads
2 Comments
#29
C. 搵張月星做幫手
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1062 Reads
4 Comments
#30
D. 搵副班長王君婷幫手
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1053 Reads
2 Comments
#31
C. 問下想塊board點整
33 Likes
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2 Comments
#32
B. 午餐B:西炒飯 $40 + 例湯 $3
38 Likes
1069 Reads
2 Comments
#33
A. 認低威,求休息
38 Likes
1177 Reads
4 Comments
#34
A. 接受建議
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1090 Reads
2 Comments
#35
B. 遞紙巾俾莫浩倫
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1070 Reads
2 Comments
#36
B. 再遞紙巾俾佢
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1093 Reads
5 Comments
#37
B. 我想搵你幫手做board
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4 Comments
#38
B. 張月星喜好
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1170 Reads
3 Comments
#39
D. 求其照住Board上有嘅草稿開始住先
37 Likes
1027 Reads
4 Comments
#40
A. 提議一齊去食飯
39 Likes
1032 Reads
1 Comment
#41
A. 贊成莫浩倫
37 Likes
997 Reads
4 Comments
#42
C. 不插嘴,等張月星回應
37 Likes
989 Reads
3 Comments
#43
C. 同兩個都分享
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1043 Reads
5 Comments
#44
A. 叫王君婷幫手刺探軍情
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1090 Reads
3 Comments
#45
C. 上前同張月星純傾計
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1138 Reads
3 Comments
#46
問Physics
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1083 Reads
3 Comments
#47
B. 認真做埋淨低一半board
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1028 Reads
1 Comment
#48
A. 認真做埋淨低 1/4 board
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1000 Reads
3 Comments
#49
B. 去男廁
34 Likes
1366 Reads
2 Comments
#50
A. 急速離開
35 Likes
949 Reads
4 Comments
#51
B. 上前對話
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1027 Reads
2 Comments
#52
A. 接受英姐贈票
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1338 Reads
3 Comments
#53
B. 自己+張月星+王君婷+莫浩倫
31 Likes
974 Reads
3 Comments
#54
A.  張月星
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997 Reads
3 Comments
#55
D.  現場有好多攤位遊戲玩,好似Aia咁㗎!
33 Likes
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3 Comments
#56
D.  威脅(英姐點名要你去喎)
33 Likes
971 Reads
4 Comments
#57
D.  等一陣,然後追上去
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942 Reads
3 Comments
#58
B.  大叫張月星個名
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973 Reads
3 Comments
#59
B.  中文科壁報
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1002 Reads
4 Comments
#60
B.  哦,莫浩倫係我隔離位,搵佢都好正常
37 Likes
975 Reads
3 Comments
#61
C. 刷牙洗面洗頭
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995 Reads
3 Comments
#62
C. 出街買衫(將會進入形象大改造的支線)
34 Likes
1004 Reads
3 Comments
#63
D. H&M
31 Likes
999 Reads
4 Comments
#64
D. 成熟風深色衫+褲 ($250)
28 Likes
947 Reads
5 Comments
#65
C. 去洗衣店搵外快
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984 Reads
3 Comments
#66
B.  出70%力做
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963 Reads
4 Comments
#67
D. 攤位遊戲
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965 Reads
3 Comments
#68
B. 扔波入桶
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#69
扔波入桶遊戲區
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977 Reads
12 Comments
#70
獲得禮物
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#71
選擇:應該
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#72
拋波入桶遊戲區
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#73
遊戲結果:空手而回
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#74
A. 太空人孔子
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1005 Reads
3 Comments
#75
C. 你想走?
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3 Comments
#76
A. 同意去
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#77
C. 不交待直接離去
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996 Reads
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#78
A. 點解你會知學校冇閂?
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906 Reads
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#79
A. 聽張月星講,安靜聽讀信
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1016 Reads
3 Comments
#80
1500 likes獎勵篇章---選擇獎勵
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5 Comments
#81
D. 跑去聲音相同方向
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3 Comments
#82
B. Msg王君婷
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#83
回覆王君婷
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#84
【Ch 3 賣力上進篇 正式開始】
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930 Reads
4 Comments
#85
B. 聽莫浩倫講嘢
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961 Reads
6 Comments
#86
A. 點解你要搵我呢?
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3 Comments
#87
D. 接受借出名字,但係有要求
25 Likes
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1 Comment
#88
D. 記住數先,之後諗到話你知
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927 Reads
6 Comments
#89
D. 向身邊同學(鄭冠佑)打聽下咩事
29 Likes
896 Reads
6 Comments
#90
A. 自願上場
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875 Reads
5 Comments
#91
A. 王君婷
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918 Reads
3 Comments
#92
C. 幫手防守陳伊人
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940 Reads
4 Comments
#93
B. 跟住球隊嘅人走
31 Likes
926 Reads
6 Comments
#94
B. 等班上面嘅人走晒再執張紙
31 Likes
897 Reads
5 Comments
#95
A. 唔好理佢哋,執起張紙先
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952 Reads
5 Comments
#96
特別公告:關於訂閱讀者福利擴展至十篇領先閱讀
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813 Reads
0 Comments
#97
A. 即刻衝出班房幫張月星
30 Likes
1133 Reads
5 Comments
#98
B. 將肥姜手指公轉翻向上,然後同樣伸出手指公,同佢做錫錫動作
32 Likes
976 Reads
3 Comments
#99
C. 邀請埋王君婷佢哋一齊走
33 Likes
1044 Reads
7 Comments
#100
A. 我會去啊!
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1187 Reads
8 Comments
#101
B. 約定莫浩倫聽日會去練波
31 Likes
1127 Reads
6 Comments
#102
A. 睇今日執翻嚟張紙
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1067 Reads
8 Comments
#103
A. 外線三分波
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1014 Reads
5 Comments
#104
D. 後面,唔敢亂咁改名費事俾人以為係歧視嘅黑人隊
28 Likes
987 Reads
6 Comments
#105
B. 上場認真打
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952 Reads
5 Comments
#106
A. 答應邀請
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945 Reads
8 Comments
#107
A. 張月星可能想自殺
28 Likes
924 Reads
4 Comments
#108
B. WhatsApp張月星
28 Likes
926 Reads
5 Comments
#109
B. 吹水口吻,求其搵啲嘢講吓
33 Likes
1006 Reads
8 Comments
#110
D. 防守
26 Likes
893 Reads
4 Comments
#111
B. 小心行事,繼續做好防守
28 Likes
926 Reads
5 Comments
#112
B. 小心前進,傳畀隊友
30 Likes
924 Reads
8 Comments
#113
B. 笑住講唔緊要
29 Likes
928 Reads
5 Comments
#114
C. ⋯⋯我哋可以一齊慶祝!
38 Likes
961 Reads
9 Comments
#115
B. 70% 防守,30%傳球控球,0%射波
38 Likes
1305 Reads
6 Comments
#116
A. 同佢講一句嘢
31 Likes
907 Reads
7 Comments
#117
B. 細心觀察比賽
30 Likes
1013 Reads
9 Comments
#118
A. 熱身
32 Likes
882 Reads
8 Comments
#119
補圖解釋
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866 Reads
5 Comments
#120
B. 預備擋左邊
33 Likes
935 Reads
7 Comments
#121
B. 向後追住肥姜
30 Likes
1007 Reads
8 Comments
#122
D. 向上跳,試下有冇可能攔阻個波
31 Likes
972 Reads
6 Comments
#123
A. 單手向橫飛撲
29 Likes
935 Reads
10 Comments
#124
B. Chok聲走埋去講「我哋贏咗啦」
29 Likes
953 Reads
7 Comments
#125
A. 維園花燈會,再去草地坐下玩燈籠傾偈
30 Likes
1344 Reads
4 Comments
#126
D. 自由填充
31 Likes
914 Reads
8 Comments
#127
B. 髮型
33 Likes
927 Reads
13 Comments
#128
B. 問徐一一意見
29 Likes
900 Reads
11 Comments
#129
B. 同徐一一同行
26 Likes
855 Reads
9 Comments
#130
C. 電車(大概30分鐘)
30 Likes
966 Reads
10 Comments
#131
A. 你有咩想試啊?
30 Likes
858 Reads
6 Comments
#132
B. 其實我明
32 Likes
846 Reads
8 Comments
#133
A. 同你一齊去參加試鏡
31 Likes
793 Reads
12 Comments
#134
A. 叫埋莫浩倫
28 Likes
821 Reads
6 Comments
#135
A. 接受建議
28 Likes
875 Reads
7 Comments
#136
A. 紙燈籠
28 Likes
993 Reads
7 Comments
#137
B. 講吓自己出門口之前想帶月餅,緩和氣氛
30 Likes
928 Reads
7 Comments
#138
A. 頂硬上,猜吓先,最多揀個容易啲嘅。
26 Likes
990 Reads
6 Comments
#139
A. 紅;一齊估
28 Likes
1022 Reads
4 Comments
#140
估燈謎
25 Likes
878 Reads
6 Comments
#141
B. 先估燈謎,之後再試下搵人
26 Likes
860 Reads
1 Comment
#142
估燈謎
24 Likes
977 Reads
6 Comments
#143
C. 望吓對面估中燈謎嘅係咩人
27 Likes
861 Reads
5 Comments
#144
D. 係啊,因為你估得中個燈謎。
25 Likes
966 Reads
8 Comments
#145
B. 同馬尾女交換電話
27 Likes
862 Reads
7 Comments
#146
D. 提出一齊行吓維園
26 Likes
906 Reads
10 Comments
#147
D. 你通常中秋節會做啲咩㗎?
27 Likes
891 Reads
9 Comments
#148
A. 我有時都會唔開心㗎,不如大家都分享吓。
23 Likes
858 Reads
5 Comments
#149
回答張月星
24 Likes
949 Reads
5 Comments
#150
E. 改變命運
23 Likes
867 Reads
8 Comments
#151
B. 等完咗活動,返嚟公園攞返個燈籠
22 Likes
914 Reads
7 Comments
#152
A. 同佢坐巴士翻去,然後自己再出過嚟
25 Likes
974 Reads
9 Comments
#153
延續前篇
29 Likes
951 Reads
9 Comments
#154
A. 聽電話
30 Likes
864 Reads
6 Comments
#155
A. 約佢聽晚再傾過
28 Likes
826 Reads
8 Comments
#156
B. 二人限定故事(lolly talk)
30 Likes
879 Reads
8 Comments
#157
A. 睇手機
25 Likes
840 Reads
5 Comments
#158
C. 停一停等一等,睇吓邊個send嚟
26 Likes
884 Reads
9 Comments
#159
B. 答應莫浩倫

26 Likes
948 Reads
4 Comments
#160
A. 即刻翻去溫書
26 Likes
916 Reads
9 Comments
#161
B. 英文 
24 Likes
999 Reads
5 Comments
#162
溫英文結果
27 Likes
908 Reads
7 Comments
#163
溫習數學
25 Likes
927 Reads
9 Comments
#164
溫習數學結果
27 Likes
900 Reads
8 Comments
#165
D. 打電話俾雲宛澄
29 Likes
1011 Reads
12 Comments
#166
B. 轉落去街跑步
27 Likes
872 Reads
8 Comments
#167
B. 行去側邊啲長凳坐低思考人生
26 Likes
866 Reads
7 Comments
#168
A. 聽電話先
27 Likes
836 Reads
9 Comments
#169
B. 打俾張月星講我星期三去唔到溫書
23 Likes
922 Reads
9 Comments
#170
B. 因為我要陪徐一一去試鏡
28 Likes
855 Reads
7 Comments
#171
B. 放一份做好嘅高分past paper喺佢枱面
28 Likes
1063 Reads
2 Comments
#172
【Ch 4 命運交疊篇 正式開始】
23 Likes
972 Reads
6 Comments
#173
D. 教其他人做卷
25 Likes
870 Reads
6 Comments
#174
D. 唔出聲走埋去同佢一齊收拾試卷
28 Likes
850 Reads
7 Comments
#175
D. 回到班房
26 Likes
842 Reads
3 Comments
#176
D. 睇老師檯
25 Likes
940 Reads
6 Comments
#177
C. 放棄睇file離開
23 Likes
850 Reads
8 Comments
#178
C. 少林足球
24 Likes
1025 Reads
6 Comments
#179
A. 靜靜雞行埋去佢背脊後面一齊望
21 Likes
884 Reads
5 Comments
#180
A. 無論結果係點,試咗再講啦
26 Likes
945 Reads
8 Comments
#181
A. 接受小角色
22 Likes
919 Reads
6 Comments
#182
B. 我都話努力嘅人一定有回報㗎喇!
22 Likes
890 Reads
5 Comments
#183
C. 買盒朱奶俾大家,飲下定驚
22 Likes
946 Reads
7 Comments
#184
B. 自己追上去
19 Likes
884 Reads
3 Comments
#185
A. 追徐一一
21 Likes
920 Reads
9 Comments
#186
D. 大聲話俾佢知我其實都係夢入面見過佢
22 Likes
883 Reads
9 Comments
#187
A. 話佢知要補完課之後先得
24 Likes
887 Reads
8 Comments
#188
C. 你都唔厭棄我毒,我厭棄你啲咩?
23 Likes
933 Reads
4 Comments
#189
譚仔點餐
21 Likes
831 Reads
4 Comments
#190
B. 不如你介紹吓自己
21 Likes
904 Reads
6 Comments
#191
A. 上前向張月星Say hi
23 Likes
825 Reads
6 Comments
#192
B. 問張月星係咪搵徐一一
27 Likes
892 Reads
8 Comments
#193
B. 一齊去探徐一一
22 Likes
901 Reads
9 Comments
#194
B. 繼續去探徐一一,婉拒張月星
22 Likes
909 Reads
6 Comments
#195
D. 喺門外等一陣
23 Likes
894 Reads
7 Comments
#196
B. (認真)我知錯,我之後會認真。
22 Likes
1110 Reads
6 Comments
#197
B. 去搵徐一一
22 Likes
1008 Reads
7 Comments
#198
A. 先幫張月星
21 Likes
929 Reads
7 Comments
#199
C. 即刻聽Canon in D
21 Likes
945 Reads
6 Comments
#200
A. 同佢講拜拜
22 Likes
974 Reads
7 Comments
#201
D. 去洗衣店搵佢
24 Likes
911 Reads
9 Comments
#202
D. 我有個秘密想話你知。
22 Likes
828 Reads
9 Comments
#203
D. 其實你有冇聽過yoasobi 夜に駆ける?
25 Likes
881 Reads
8 Comments
#204
B. 立即去搵徐一一
25 Likes
894 Reads
1 Comment
#205
D. 上網尋找張月星資料
24 Likes
972 Reads
5 Comments
#206
A. 打俾張月星
25 Likes
1014 Reads
8 Comments
#207
A. 答應出席
24 Likes
970 Reads
7 Comments
#208
猜測張月星的破綻
25 Likes
949 Reads
11 Comments
#209
A. 張月星筆記簿
22 Likes
1020 Reads
8 Comments
#210
B. 中頁
22 Likes
963 Reads
9 Comments
#211
A. 拎
23 Likes
1013 Reads
7 Comments
#212
B. 先睇電話
23 Likes
987 Reads
8 Comments
#213
D. 致電王君婷
27 Likes
1042 Reads
2 Comments
#214
接續前話
26 Likes
1061 Reads
9 Comments
#215
A. 打俾張月星,和盤托出
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1031 Reads
8 Comments
#216
A. 我想知
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1045 Reads
7 Comments
#217
A. 火腿炒雙蛋套餐
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1089 Reads
10 Comments
#218
Choice A
27 Likes
1041 Reads
11 Comments
#219
延續前話
26 Likes
1047 Reads
10 Comments
#220
C. 咁本筆記簿同你有咩關係?
30 Likes
1045 Reads
11 Comments
#221
延續前話
33 Likes
1126 Reads
9 Comments
#222
延續前話
27 Likes
979 Reads
5 Comments
#223
自由發問
25 Likes
945 Reads
7 Comments
#224
B. 點解要為我犧牲咁多?
24 Likes
959 Reads
9 Comments
#225
B. 溫書
20 Likes
880 Reads
6 Comments
#226
A.硬着頭皮打一場
25 Likes
897 Reads
6 Comments
#227
B. 陳伊人
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1011 Reads
8 Comments
#228
接續前話
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1067 Reads
5 Comments
#229
C. 年青人
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1052 Reads
6 Comments
#230
【CH5 最後逆轉篇】A. 直接衝過去,大大聲聲邀請張月星
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8 Comments
#231
接續前話
15 Likes
948 Reads
7 Comments
#232
A. 自己過去傾偈
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880 Reads
8 Comments
#233
接續前話
17 Likes
760 Reads
8 Comments
#234
B. 你仲有冇啲咩心願未完成?
20 Likes
716 Reads
6 Comments
#235
B. 邀請雲宛澄工人幫手
22 Likes
680 Reads
9 Comments
#236
接續前話
20 Likes
664 Reads
10 Comments
#237
A. 談及未來
21 Likes
607 Reads
4 Comments
#238
C. 探望雲宛澄
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624 Reads
8 Comments
#239
C. 約佢行下聖誕市集
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665 Reads
13 Comments
#240
24/12
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644 Reads
13 Comments
#241
續24/12
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666 Reads
9 Comments
#242
續 24/12 (二)
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630 Reads
12 Comments
#243
續24/12 (三)
31 Likes
627 Reads
17 Comments
#244
【最終章 未來未來篇】 25/12
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660 Reads
23 Comments
#245
B. 約張月星嚟醫院陪埋雲宛澄過
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600 Reads
8 Comments
#246
C. 五月天—倔強
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580 Reads
10 Comments
#247
D. 深水埗:嘉頓山
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595 Reads
12 Comments
#248
Option C
23 Likes
585 Reads
11 Comments
#249
接續前話
23 Likes
553 Reads
10 Comments
#250
Option A
21 Likes
598 Reads
13 Comments
#251
Option B
25 Likes
582 Reads
13 Comments
#252
接續前話
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656 Reads
23 Comments
#253
【未來未來篇】——— 結局篇
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695 Reads
14 Comments
#254
【張月星番外篇1】 難道我可以扭轉宿命 重遇你一次
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723 Reads
15 Comments
#255
【張月星番外篇2】 怎可接受到妳跟我無關 路線有界限 不等於要散
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655 Reads
16 Comments
#256
【張月星番外篇3】 如何回到當時 拿回時間逆轉的鑰匙
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18 Comments
#257
【張月星番外篇完】請記得 誰和誰掠過 請記得 還有一份愛 不怕什麼
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#258
故事Q&A及隱藏情節分享
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這是關於一個命犯天剎孤星,注定一輩子孤獨,

卻唯有在十八歲這一年可以改變命運的宅男的故事。


麥羊,一個小時候已經被批命必定會注定終生孤獨的孩子。

然而因為一次正確的選擇,

他得到了一個可能改變人生的啟示。


十八歲。

這是他人生中人緣和姻緣的高峰。

唯獨在這一年,

他有可能改變自己的人生。


選擇。


他知道,這一年他必須做對每一個選擇。

然而天生的自卑和內向,

卻成為了他最大的絆腳石。


而在他踏入十八歲的這一天,

他的命運,

剛好與女神——張月星巧妙地互相扣連上。


到底,這只不過是他再一次與緣分擦身而過的遺憾,

還是他踏上改變命運的第一步?


互動故事,

《一人一個追女心得 合力改變A0命運》。

由讀者在每個選擇面前投票或作決定,

讓我們的男主角走上大家鼓勵他走的路。


到底最後他是歸回宿命,

還是逆轉命運?


一切,皆是由你選擇。



故事每天更新,一天數更,歡迎加入追看故事,

把握機會為主角作好選擇,抱得美人歸!

若想追看更快,記得「讚好」每章,達成加更目標!



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【穿越/愛情】我同鍾意咗十一年嘅人表白,佢竟然跳海死咗
https://www.penana.com/story/63218
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或是用「打賞」為這故事打氣😎

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#1
NPC默颺的話—鼓勵在開始進入故事前留意的讀前通知
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2267 Reads
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#2
第零章----命犯天剎孤星
39 Likes
1901 Reads
0 Comments
#3
一、命運交錯的一天
38 Likes
1503 Reads
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#4
選擇A:直接帶張許可證出發,去許可證上面嘅地址搵張月星。
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#5
A. 用錢解決問題,截的士
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1332 Reads
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#6
A. 直接原地大叫「張月星」
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1407 Reads
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#7
C. 打俾張月星
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#8
B. 支持女神,入去
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4 Comments
#9
B. 四季酒店自助餐
33 Likes
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5 Comments
#10
A. 襯衫
34 Likes
1239 Reads
5 Comments
#11
C. 偷老豆套西裝
34 Likes
1289 Reads
3 Comments
#12
B. 係囉,點解嘅?
36 Likes
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#13
C. 點解你會知有間四季茶餐廳?
36 Likes
1362 Reads
5 Comments
#14
E. 講翻頭先同婆婆嘅小學回憶
35 Likes
1218 Reads
2 Comments
#15
A. 應承
34 Likes
1595 Reads
2 Comments
#16
C. 自打十巴
34 Likes
1172 Reads
3 Comments
#17
D. 接受現實,破財擋災
38 Likes
1141 Reads
5 Comments
#18
D. 一人之境(尹光版)
36 Likes
1227 Reads
4 Comments
#19
C. 拎阿爸啲衫落街洗
37 Likes
1156 Reads
2 Comments
#20
D. 用平淡嘅語氣
36 Likes
1090 Reads
2 Comments
#21
A. 求佢收平啲
37 Likes
1174 Reads
4 Comments
#22
A. 問佢到底想要啲咩先可以平
34 Likes
1180 Reads
5 Comments
#23
B. 大聲呼喝:「男子漢,賣藝不賣身!」
33 Likes
1101 Reads
3 Comments
#24
A. 接受建議,留低幫手
35 Likes
1197 Reads
2 Comments
#25
A.  出100%力做
38 Likes
1106 Reads
1 Comment
#26
A.  聽首歌
36 Likes
1086 Reads
4 Comments
#27
C.  中文書
35 Likes
1082 Reads
3 Comments
#28
A.  修改表格
36 Likes
1080 Reads
2 Comments
#29
C. 搵張月星做幫手
36 Likes
1062 Reads
4 Comments
#30
D. 搵副班長王君婷幫手
35 Likes
1053 Reads
2 Comments
#31
C. 問下想塊board點整
33 Likes
1091 Reads
2 Comments
#32
B. 午餐B:西炒飯 $40 + 例湯 $3
38 Likes
1069 Reads
2 Comments
#33
A. 認低威,求休息
38 Likes
1177 Reads
4 Comments
#34
A. 接受建議
38 Likes
1090 Reads
2 Comments
#35
B. 遞紙巾俾莫浩倫
37 Likes
1070 Reads
2 Comments
#36
B. 再遞紙巾俾佢
37 Likes
1093 Reads
5 Comments
#37
B. 我想搵你幫手做board
36 Likes
1130 Reads
4 Comments
#38
B. 張月星喜好
36 Likes
1170 Reads
3 Comments
#39
D. 求其照住Board上有嘅草稿開始住先
37 Likes
1027 Reads
4 Comments
#40
A. 提議一齊去食飯
39 Likes
1032 Reads
1 Comment
#41
A. 贊成莫浩倫
37 Likes
997 Reads
4 Comments
#42
C. 不插嘴,等張月星回應
37 Likes
989 Reads
3 Comments
#43
C. 同兩個都分享
36 Likes
1043 Reads
5 Comments
#44
A. 叫王君婷幫手刺探軍情
34 Likes
1090 Reads
3 Comments
#45
C. 上前同張月星純傾計
36 Likes
1138 Reads
3 Comments
#46
問Physics
33 Likes
1083 Reads
3 Comments
#47
B. 認真做埋淨低一半board
35 Likes
1028 Reads
1 Comment
#48
A. 認真做埋淨低 1/4 board
36 Likes
1000 Reads
3 Comments
#49
B. 去男廁
34 Likes
1366 Reads
2 Comments
#50
A. 急速離開
35 Likes
949 Reads
4 Comments
#51
B. 上前對話
36 Likes
1027 Reads
2 Comments
#52
A. 接受英姐贈票
34 Likes
1338 Reads
3 Comments
#53
B. 自己+張月星+王君婷+莫浩倫
31 Likes
974 Reads
3 Comments
#54
A.  張月星
32 Likes
997 Reads
3 Comments
#55
D.  現場有好多攤位遊戲玩,好似Aia咁㗎!
33 Likes
1346 Reads
3 Comments
#56
D.  威脅(英姐點名要你去喎)
33 Likes
971 Reads
4 Comments
#57
D.  等一陣,然後追上去
31 Likes
942 Reads
3 Comments
#58
B.  大叫張月星個名
34 Likes
973 Reads
3 Comments
#59
B.  中文科壁報
33 Likes
1002 Reads
4 Comments
#60
B.  哦,莫浩倫係我隔離位,搵佢都好正常
37 Likes
975 Reads
3 Comments
#61
C. 刷牙洗面洗頭
29 Likes
995 Reads
3 Comments
#62
C. 出街買衫(將會進入形象大改造的支線)
34 Likes
1004 Reads
3 Comments
#63
D. H&M
31 Likes
999 Reads
4 Comments
#64
D. 成熟風深色衫+褲 ($250)
28 Likes
947 Reads
5 Comments
#65
C. 去洗衣店搵外快
28 Likes
984 Reads
3 Comments
#66
B.  出70%力做
30 Likes
963 Reads
4 Comments
#67
D. 攤位遊戲
30 Likes
965 Reads
3 Comments
#68
B. 扔波入桶
35 Likes
1038 Reads
0 Comments
#69
扔波入桶遊戲區
27 Likes
977 Reads
12 Comments
#70
獲得禮物
29 Likes
990 Reads
1 Comment
#71
選擇:應該
28 Likes
1086 Reads
0 Comments
#72
拋波入桶遊戲區
26 Likes
1074 Reads
8 Comments
#73
遊戲結果:空手而回
30 Likes
989 Reads
2 Comments
#74
A. 太空人孔子
31 Likes
1005 Reads
3 Comments
#75
C. 你想走?
28 Likes
934 Reads
3 Comments
#76
A. 同意去
28 Likes
942 Reads
2 Comments
#77
C. 不交待直接離去
28 Likes
996 Reads
3 Comments
#78
A. 點解你會知學校冇閂?
26 Likes
906 Reads
2 Comments
#79
A. 聽張月星講,安靜聽讀信
28 Likes
1016 Reads
3 Comments
#80
1500 likes獎勵篇章---選擇獎勵
24 Likes
957 Reads
5 Comments
#81
D. 跑去聲音相同方向
27 Likes
979 Reads
3 Comments
#82
B. Msg王君婷
27 Likes
927 Reads
2 Comments
#83
回覆王君婷
31 Likes
948 Reads
0 Comments
#84
【Ch 3 賣力上進篇 正式開始】
28 Likes
930 Reads
4 Comments
#85
B. 聽莫浩倫講嘢
28 Likes
961 Reads
6 Comments
#86
A. 點解你要搵我呢?
26 Likes
912 Reads
3 Comments
#87
D. 接受借出名字,但係有要求
25 Likes
888 Reads
1 Comment
#88
D. 記住數先,之後諗到話你知
27 Likes
927 Reads
6 Comments
#89
D. 向身邊同學(鄭冠佑)打聽下咩事
29 Likes
896 Reads
6 Comments
#90
A. 自願上場
28 Likes
875 Reads
5 Comments
#91
A. 王君婷
28 Likes
918 Reads
3 Comments
#92
C. 幫手防守陳伊人
28 Likes
940 Reads
4 Comments
#93
B. 跟住球隊嘅人走
31 Likes
926 Reads
6 Comments
#94
B. 等班上面嘅人走晒再執張紙
31 Likes
897 Reads
5 Comments
#95
A. 唔好理佢哋,執起張紙先
29 Likes
952 Reads
5 Comments
#96
特別公告:關於訂閱讀者福利擴展至十篇領先閱讀
17 Likes
813 Reads
0 Comments
#97
A. 即刻衝出班房幫張月星
30 Likes
1133 Reads
5 Comments
#98
B. 將肥姜手指公轉翻向上,然後同樣伸出手指公,同佢做錫錫動作
32 Likes
976 Reads
3 Comments
#99
C. 邀請埋王君婷佢哋一齊走
33 Likes
1044 Reads
7 Comments
#100
A. 我會去啊!
30 Likes
1187 Reads
8 Comments
#101
B. 約定莫浩倫聽日會去練波
31 Likes
1127 Reads
6 Comments
#102
A. 睇今日執翻嚟張紙
31 Likes
1067 Reads
8 Comments
#103
A. 外線三分波
30 Likes
1014 Reads
5 Comments
#104
D. 後面,唔敢亂咁改名費事俾人以為係歧視嘅黑人隊
28 Likes
987 Reads
6 Comments
#105
B. 上場認真打
39 Likes
952 Reads
5 Comments
#106
A. 答應邀請
29 Likes
945 Reads
8 Comments
#107
A. 張月星可能想自殺
28 Likes
924 Reads
4 Comments
#108
B. WhatsApp張月星
28 Likes
926 Reads
5 Comments
#109
B. 吹水口吻,求其搵啲嘢講吓
33 Likes
1006 Reads
8 Comments
#110
D. 防守
26 Likes
893 Reads
4 Comments
#111
B. 小心行事,繼續做好防守
28 Likes
926 Reads
5 Comments
#112
B. 小心前進,傳畀隊友
30 Likes
924 Reads
8 Comments
#113
B. 笑住講唔緊要
29 Likes
928 Reads
5 Comments
#114
C. ⋯⋯我哋可以一齊慶祝!
38 Likes
961 Reads
9 Comments
#115
B. 70% 防守,30%傳球控球,0%射波
38 Likes
1305 Reads
6 Comments
#116
A. 同佢講一句嘢
31 Likes
907 Reads
7 Comments
#117
B. 細心觀察比賽
30 Likes
1013 Reads
9 Comments
#118
A. 熱身
32 Likes
882 Reads
8 Comments
#119
補圖解釋
30 Likes
866 Reads
5 Comments
#120
B. 預備擋左邊
33 Likes
935 Reads
7 Comments
#121
B. 向後追住肥姜
30 Likes
1007 Reads
8 Comments
#122
D. 向上跳,試下有冇可能攔阻個波
31 Likes
972 Reads
6 Comments
#123
A. 單手向橫飛撲
29 Likes
935 Reads
10 Comments
#124
B. Chok聲走埋去講「我哋贏咗啦」
29 Likes
953 Reads
7 Comments
#125
A. 維園花燈會,再去草地坐下玩燈籠傾偈
30 Likes
1344 Reads
4 Comments
#126
D. 自由填充
31 Likes
914 Reads
8 Comments
#127
B. 髮型
33 Likes
927 Reads
13 Comments
#128
B. 問徐一一意見
29 Likes
900 Reads
11 Comments
#129
B. 同徐一一同行
26 Likes
855 Reads
9 Comments
#130
C. 電車(大概30分鐘)
30 Likes
966 Reads
10 Comments
#131
A. 你有咩想試啊?
30 Likes
858 Reads
6 Comments
#132
B. 其實我明
32 Likes
846 Reads
8 Comments
#133
A. 同你一齊去參加試鏡
31 Likes
793 Reads
12 Comments
#134
A. 叫埋莫浩倫
28 Likes
821 Reads
6 Comments
#135
A. 接受建議
28 Likes
875 Reads
7 Comments
#136
A. 紙燈籠
28 Likes
993 Reads
7 Comments
#137
B. 講吓自己出門口之前想帶月餅,緩和氣氛
30 Likes
928 Reads
7 Comments
#138
A. 頂硬上,猜吓先,最多揀個容易啲嘅。
26 Likes
990 Reads
6 Comments
#139
A. 紅;一齊估
28 Likes
1022 Reads
4 Comments
#140
估燈謎
25 Likes
878 Reads
6 Comments
#141
B. 先估燈謎,之後再試下搵人
26 Likes
860 Reads
1 Comment
#142
估燈謎
24 Likes
977 Reads
6 Comments
#143
C. 望吓對面估中燈謎嘅係咩人
27 Likes
861 Reads
5 Comments
#144
D. 係啊,因為你估得中個燈謎。
25 Likes
966 Reads
8 Comments
#145
B. 同馬尾女交換電話
27 Likes
862 Reads
7 Comments
#146
D. 提出一齊行吓維園
26 Likes
906 Reads
10 Comments
#147
D. 你通常中秋節會做啲咩㗎?
27 Likes
891 Reads
9 Comments
#148
A. 我有時都會唔開心㗎,不如大家都分享吓。
23 Likes
858 Reads
5 Comments
#149
回答張月星
24 Likes
949 Reads
5 Comments
#150
E. 改變命運
23 Likes
867 Reads
8 Comments
#151
B. 等完咗活動,返嚟公園攞返個燈籠
22 Likes
914 Reads
7 Comments
#152
A. 同佢坐巴士翻去,然後自己再出過嚟
25 Likes
974 Reads
9 Comments
#153
延續前篇
29 Likes
951 Reads
9 Comments
#154
A. 聽電話
30 Likes
864 Reads
6 Comments
#155
A. 約佢聽晚再傾過
28 Likes
826 Reads
8 Comments
#156
B. 二人限定故事(lolly talk)
30 Likes
879 Reads
8 Comments
#157
A. 睇手機
25 Likes
840 Reads
5 Comments
#158
C. 停一停等一等,睇吓邊個send嚟
26 Likes
884 Reads
9 Comments
#159
B. 答應莫浩倫

26 Likes
948 Reads
4 Comments
#160
A. 即刻翻去溫書
26 Likes
916 Reads
9 Comments
#161
B. 英文 
24 Likes
999 Reads
5 Comments
#162
溫英文結果
27 Likes
908 Reads
7 Comments
#163
溫習數學
25 Likes
927 Reads
9 Comments
#164
溫習數學結果
27 Likes
900 Reads
8 Comments
#165
D. 打電話俾雲宛澄
29 Likes
1011 Reads
12 Comments
#166
B. 轉落去街跑步
27 Likes
872 Reads
8 Comments
#167
B. 行去側邊啲長凳坐低思考人生
26 Likes
866 Reads
7 Comments
#168
A. 聽電話先
27 Likes
836 Reads
9 Comments
#169
B. 打俾張月星講我星期三去唔到溫書
23 Likes
922 Reads
9 Comments
#170
B. 因為我要陪徐一一去試鏡
28 Likes
855 Reads
7 Comments
#171
B. 放一份做好嘅高分past paper喺佢枱面
28 Likes
1063 Reads
2 Comments
#172
【Ch 4 命運交疊篇 正式開始】
23 Likes
972 Reads
6 Comments
#173
D. 教其他人做卷
25 Likes
870 Reads
6 Comments
#174
D. 唔出聲走埋去同佢一齊收拾試卷
28 Likes
850 Reads
7 Comments
#175
D. 回到班房
26 Likes
842 Reads
3 Comments
#176
D. 睇老師檯
25 Likes
940 Reads
6 Comments
#177
C. 放棄睇file離開
23 Likes
850 Reads
8 Comments
#178
C. 少林足球
24 Likes
1025 Reads
6 Comments
#179
A. 靜靜雞行埋去佢背脊後面一齊望
21 Likes
884 Reads
5 Comments
#180
A. 無論結果係點,試咗再講啦
26 Likes
945 Reads
8 Comments
#181
A. 接受小角色
22 Likes
919 Reads
6 Comments
#182
B. 我都話努力嘅人一定有回報㗎喇!
22 Likes
890 Reads
5 Comments
#183
C. 買盒朱奶俾大家,飲下定驚
22 Likes
946 Reads
7 Comments
#184
B. 自己追上去
19 Likes
884 Reads
3 Comments
#185
A. 追徐一一
21 Likes
920 Reads
9 Comments
#186
D. 大聲話俾佢知我其實都係夢入面見過佢
22 Likes
883 Reads
9 Comments
#187
A. 話佢知要補完課之後先得
24 Likes
887 Reads
8 Comments
#188
C. 你都唔厭棄我毒,我厭棄你啲咩?
23 Likes
933 Reads
4 Comments
#189
譚仔點餐
21 Likes
831 Reads
4 Comments
#190
B. 不如你介紹吓自己
21 Likes
904 Reads
6 Comments
#191
A. 上前向張月星Say hi
23 Likes
825 Reads
6 Comments
#192
B. 問張月星係咪搵徐一一
27 Likes
892 Reads
8 Comments
#193
B. 一齊去探徐一一
22 Likes
901 Reads
9 Comments
#194
B. 繼續去探徐一一,婉拒張月星
22 Likes
909 Reads
6 Comments
#195
D. 喺門外等一陣
23 Likes
894 Reads
7 Comments
#196
B. (認真)我知錯,我之後會認真。
22 Likes
1110 Reads
6 Comments
#197
B. 去搵徐一一
22 Likes
1008 Reads
7 Comments
#198
A. 先幫張月星
21 Likes
929 Reads
7 Comments
#199
C. 即刻聽Canon in D
21 Likes
945 Reads
6 Comments
#200
A. 同佢講拜拜
22 Likes
974 Reads
7 Comments
#201
D. 去洗衣店搵佢
24 Likes
911 Reads
9 Comments
#202
D. 我有個秘密想話你知。
22 Likes
828 Reads
9 Comments
#203
D. 其實你有冇聽過yoasobi 夜に駆ける?
25 Likes
881 Reads
8 Comments
#204
B. 立即去搵徐一一
25 Likes
894 Reads
1 Comment
#205
D. 上網尋找張月星資料
24 Likes
972 Reads
5 Comments
#206
A. 打俾張月星
25 Likes
1014 Reads
8 Comments
#207
A. 答應出席
24 Likes
970 Reads
7 Comments
#208
猜測張月星的破綻
25 Likes
949 Reads
11 Comments
#209
A. 張月星筆記簿
22 Likes
1020 Reads
8 Comments
#210
B. 中頁
22 Likes
963 Reads
9 Comments
#211
A. 拎
23 Likes
1013 Reads
7 Comments
#212
B. 先睇電話
23 Likes
987 Reads
8 Comments
#213
D. 致電王君婷
27 Likes
1042 Reads
2 Comments
#214
接續前話
26 Likes
1061 Reads
9 Comments
#215
A. 打俾張月星,和盤托出
27 Likes
1031 Reads
8 Comments
#216
A. 我想知
26 Likes
1045 Reads
7 Comments
#217
A. 火腿炒雙蛋套餐
25 Likes
1089 Reads
10 Comments
#218
Choice A
27 Likes
1041 Reads
11 Comments
#219
延續前話
26 Likes
1047 Reads
10 Comments
#220
C. 咁本筆記簿同你有咩關係?
30 Likes
1045 Reads
11 Comments
#221
延續前話
33 Likes
1126 Reads
9 Comments
#222
延續前話
27 Likes
979 Reads
5 Comments
#223
自由發問
25 Likes
945 Reads
7 Comments
#224
B. 點解要為我犧牲咁多?
24 Likes
959 Reads
9 Comments
#225
B. 溫書
20 Likes
880 Reads
6 Comments
#226
A.硬着頭皮打一場
25 Likes
897 Reads
6 Comments
#227
B. 陳伊人
31 Likes
1011 Reads
8 Comments
#228
接續前話
19 Likes
1067 Reads
5 Comments
#229
C. 年青人
19 Likes
1052 Reads
6 Comments
#230
【CH5 最後逆轉篇】A. 直接衝過去,大大聲聲邀請張月星
23 Likes
1020 Reads
8 Comments
#231
接續前話
15 Likes
948 Reads
7 Comments
#232
A. 自己過去傾偈
21 Likes
880 Reads
8 Comments
#233
接續前話
17 Likes
760 Reads
8 Comments
#234
B. 你仲有冇啲咩心願未完成?
20 Likes
716 Reads
6 Comments
#235
B. 邀請雲宛澄工人幫手
22 Likes
680 Reads
9 Comments
#236
接續前話
20 Likes
664 Reads
10 Comments
#237
A. 談及未來
21 Likes
607 Reads
4 Comments
#238
C. 探望雲宛澄
20 Likes
624 Reads
8 Comments
#239
C. 約佢行下聖誕市集
24 Likes
665 Reads
13 Comments
#240
24/12
26 Likes
644 Reads
13 Comments
#241
續24/12
19 Likes
666 Reads
9 Comments
#242
續 24/12 (二)
24 Likes
630 Reads
12 Comments
#243
續24/12 (三)
31 Likes
627 Reads
17 Comments
#244
【最終章 未來未來篇】 25/12
30 Likes
660 Reads
23 Comments
#245
B. 約張月星嚟醫院陪埋雲宛澄過
20 Likes
600 Reads
8 Comments
#246
C. 五月天—倔強
19 Likes
580 Reads
10 Comments
#247
D. 深水埗:嘉頓山
24 Likes
595 Reads
12 Comments
#248
Option C
23 Likes
585 Reads
11 Comments
#249
接續前話
23 Likes
553 Reads
10 Comments
#250
Option A
21 Likes
598 Reads
13 Comments
#251
Option B
25 Likes
582 Reads
13 Comments
#252
接續前話
36 Likes
656 Reads
23 Comments
#253
【未來未來篇】——— 結局篇
29 Likes
695 Reads
14 Comments
#254
【張月星番外篇1】 難道我可以扭轉宿命 重遇你一次
27 Likes
723 Reads
15 Comments
#255
【張月星番外篇2】 怎可接受到妳跟我無關 路線有界限 不等於要散
23 Likes
655 Reads
16 Comments
#256
【張月星番外篇3】 如何回到當時 拿回時間逆轉的鑰匙
24 Likes
599 Reads
18 Comments
#257
【張月星番外篇完】請記得 誰和誰掠過 請記得 還有一份愛 不怕什麼
26 Likes
641 Reads
4 Comments
#258
故事Q&A及隱藏情節分享
6 Likes
510 Reads
0 Comments

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