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殷璃某天醒來發現自己穿越了,228Please respect copyright.PENANAScKzwEiWnt
而且還被告知228Please respect copyright.PENANAcRz4SHnfD8
必須和眼前這群美男們為愛鼓掌,228Please respect copyright.PENANAwjgUHF93Dq
否則就會小命不保?
天知道,她連個男朋友都沒交過!228Please respect copyright.PENANAnfoYzr5nxf
難道不能先從害羞地牽牽小手開始嗎?
突如其來且無限吃到飽的肉228Please respect copyright.PENANAK1JHfefXpp
根本就打算撐死她吧!?228Please respect copyright.PENANAFpVrJUkogW
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對這個創挑觀望好久後終於鼓起勇氣參加,228Please respect copyright.PENANAoSQpqs3Zm6
雖然碼字有段時間了,但今年才開始認真寫,228Please respect copyright.PENANAcpyUioJCum
也是六月時才成為蕉友,228Please respect copyright.PENANAOdO0wu2n2M
心態上還是把自己定位為初心者,228Please respect copyright.PENANALIHHBEun3W
希望可以得到前輩的一些指點。228Please respect copyright.PENANAZvWF8SyRZA
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自己覺得劇情和設定還算完整,228Please respect copyright.PENANA0oYUGJsR9p
但因為是大長篇,228Please respect copyright.PENANAmPqseqyyqK
為了鋪陳情節開頭敘事偏向緩慢,228Please respect copyright.PENANAW9GVwIeSFJ
也擔心自己是否有細節太多讓讀者不耐煩的情況。228Please respect copyright.PENANAYjE6Is5i3v
任何閱讀體驗或心得,228Please respect copyright.PENANAw2AZmkNwnv
都還請主辦大大和各方路人不吝點評指教 🙏228Please respect copyright.PENANAn76V9PFYR8
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感謝這個創挑的舉辦,228Please respect copyright.PENANAksMDGzDKtH
希望參加的大家至少都因為這個挑戰228Please respect copyright.PENANAeYPctni1p6
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