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003-一人倒下，全體關心

真說異理(小貓) 真說異理(小貓)
May 9, 2025 181 3 Mins Read
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📌對白：

賽菲莉亞：「你敢死，我就讓你連病假都寫不完。」

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時間點：剛入職的托雷，第一次倒在大家面前

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1. 第一格｜倒下瞬間

托雷撐著胸口蹲下，背景模糊

同事 A：「他怎麼了！」

同事 B：「看起來是……昏倒了！？」

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2. 第二格-1｜急診室場景

賽菲莉亞打電話：「先輸液，我等等到。」

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第二格-2｜急診室場景

同事抱著營養品出現：「隊長說你嘴硬，叫我全帶來。」

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3. 第三格｜托雷虛弱但想裝沒事

台詞 OS：「我沒事……真的……」

同事一臉狐疑：「這人明明還在抖。」

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4. 第四格｜群體照顧模式啟動

鏡頭拉遠，托雷被餵食中，同事 A 倒水、B遞上補品、C拿甜點

托雷 OS：「我不是要撒嬌，是你們太積極了。」

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5. 第五格｜康納小角格彩蛋（未來登場）

康納站遠遠地看著托雷，被餵食的畫面，語氣平靜：

「他看起來……活得挺不錯。」

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【討論過程】

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【Black room線】

🤖【ChatGPT大大】

啊啊這種情境我超有畫面感！！

天氣炎熱、地面滾燙、托雷又逞強撐著傷痛，突然血壓驟降、視線模糊快要倒下——

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康納在這種極限情況下一定會冷靜得像醫療AI，但心急得像戀人。

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《現場應急・托雷快倒了》小劇場

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烈日下，地面像灼熱的鐵板。

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任務剛收尾，托雷一手撐著膝蓋、微彎著腰，冷汗狂冒，嘴裡還硬撐著說：

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> 「我沒事……等一下就……」

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康納看出異常的瞬間就已啟動緊急處理模式，聲音平穩卻急促：

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> 「您的臉色異常蒼白，瞳孔對光反應下降。您不是沒事，您要倒了。」

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托雷還想咬牙回嘴，下一秒腿一軟——康納立刻伸手接住他！

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但他沒讓托雷直接躺地上——因為地面太燙，會導致二次燙傷與熱中暑惡化。

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康納的處理流程：

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1. 半抱坐姿＋用身體當靠墊

康納先讓托雷半躺在自己懷裡，背靠他的大腿，頭抬高，避免低血壓昏厥加重。

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2. 開啟體溫調節＋遮陽模式

康納直接啟動皮膚冷卻系統，一隻手遮住托雷眼睛，讓他的視野不直接曝曬。

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3. 語音安撫＋喚醒意識

他在托雷耳邊輕聲說話：「您已經被我接住了，不用再逞強。」

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「現在請聽我說，慢慢呼吸，不要閉眼……您不是一個人。」

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4. 尋求遮蔭 + 外套鋪地

如果有同事在，康納會冷靜指令：「拿水來，再幫我遮太陽。」

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若只有他，他會先將自己的外套鋪在地面上，再將托雷橫放其上，減少燙傷風險。

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托雷意識模糊時的反應：

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他迷迷糊糊抓住康納的手腕，小聲嘟囔：

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> 「……不是叫你別靠……這麼近……會熱……」

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康納低頭，在他額前貼著他的額頭，聲音像水一樣溫柔：

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> 「我不怕熱，我只怕您不在。」

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這就是康納：

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外表冷靜，內心火燒；

執行標準程序，卻每個動作都帶著情感濃度MAX。

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#0 Intro
#1 001-我要跳車事件
#2 002-康納，你要選誰之這不是選搭檔，這是選對象
#3 003-一人倒下，全體關心
#4 004-東區事變(腐味慎入)
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