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    Hello, just here to share some of my works. Thank you in advance for taking interest. I enjoy retro gaming, I watch a lot of movie critique videos on Youtube, and I also speak, read, and write in Spanish. I'm into writing stories (science fiction), story games and poems (love/relationships). I love Choose Your Own Adventure style stories. I don't write too often though, only from time to time. I do appreciate any feedback and critiques. Follow me also on: reddit.com/user/X_Caliber1 . I also hang out on r/WritingPrompts. Thanks!
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Writing Prompt #11 Nyxa, The Forbidden Beauty
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[My loyal servants and I just destroyed this pathetic little town. We've slain dozens of people in this place. I tortured hundreds of them with my own two hands. Their screams and pleas for mercy echoing throughout the night. Their blood is scattered throughout the town, splattered on my dress, and dripping off my hands. After putting the town to ruin and leaving it to burn, I heard a faint cry. But each step I took was becoming harder for me. Why? The innocent little whimpers wouldn't let me leave. I returned to the center of the town and found an 8 year old child crying for her mother, who was long dead in the rubble of a collapsed building. Memories of my traumatic past come back to me with the echoes of her cries. I hand her my rose, a symbol for my loyal servants to spare her life. They all saw the rose in the child's hand, and already knew that the child now belonged to me. I extended my hand to her and she quickly took it without hesitation, admiring the rose I gifted her. I took her away with me saying, "My name is Nyxa, little one. I guess you're not afraid of me, huh."]

Contributor of the prompt:  Zuleihat...   Thank you!

Write a response based on the writing prompt. Challenge your writing abilities and see where your imagination takes you.  

Rules: No limit of how long. It can even just be a sentence. You can write anything, as long as it relates to the writing prompt or even just the image attached to the prompt. Rating: G to R... I don't care!

Let others comment on your work and see what you can come up with! ​​​​​​​

[My loyal servants and I just destroyed this pathetic little town. We've slain dozens of people in this place. I tortured hundreds of them with my own two hands. Their screams and pleas for mercy echoing throughout the night. Their blood is scattered throughout the town, splattered on my dress, and dripping off my hands. After putting the town to ruin and leaving it to burn, I heard a faint cry. But each step I took was becoming harder for me. Why? The innocent little whimpers wouldn't let me leave. I returned to the center of the town and found an 8 year old child crying for her mother, who was long dead in the rubble of a collapsed building. Memories of my traumatic past come back to me with the echoes of her cries. I hand her my rose, a symbol for my loyal servants to spare her life. They all saw the rose in the child's hand, and already knew that the child now belonged to me. I extended my hand to her and she quickly took it without hesitation, admiring the rose I gifted her. I took her away with me saying, "My name is Nyxa, little one. I guess you're not afraid of me, huh."]

Contributor of the prompt:  Zuleihat...   Thank you!

Write a response based on the writing prompt. Challenge your writing abilities and see where your imagination takes you.  

Rules: No limit of how long. It can even just be a sentence. You can write anything, as long as it relates to the writing prompt or even just the image attached to the prompt. Rating: G to R... I don't care!

Let others comment on your work and see what you can come up with! ​​​​​​​

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