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    whitefox goddess
    Hi, I’m Whitefox Goddess.

    I write things most people are too afraid to say. My stories are stitched from wounds, my poems bleed a little truth. I’m not here to please—I’m here to feel, to release, and maybe, to remind someone they’re not alone.

    I’m fascinated by human behavior, manipulation, and the gray spaces between right and wrong. I love writing dark romance, psychological twists, and lines that sting a little—because sugarcoating never saved anyone.

    I’m soft-spoken but sharp-tongued when I write. I’ve survived things I don’t always talk about, but somehow they find their way into every word I spill.

    So if you're into raw, poetic chaos with meaning—welcome.
    If not, scroll fast. I’m not for everyone.

    From the Philippines
    Host of “Kape at Katotohanan” podcast
    Currently collecting heartbreaks and turning them into art.

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Kabanata 1: Ang Pagpatay ng Ilaw
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Kabanata 2: Mula Green Room, Pa-Renta Na Lang
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Kabanata 4: Ang Mundo ni Marissa
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Kabanata 5: Kalawang sa Pamilya
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KABANATA 6: Alimura ng Komedya
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KABANATA 7: Tricia sa Jeep
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KABANATA 8: Kagat ng Katotohanan
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KABANATA 14: Ang Buhay sa Buntong-hininga
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KABANATA 15: Drawing ni Caloy
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KABANATA 16: Alok ni Tricia
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KABANATA 17: Balik sa Ilaw
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KABANATA 18: Ang Tunay na Punchline
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KABANATA 19: Isang Bentong, Isang Buhay
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KABANATA 20: Paalam, Pero Salamat
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CHARACTERS

Ben “Bentong” Arciaga
– Isang dating sikat na stand-up comedian na ngayon ay limot na ng showbiz. Nagtitinda na lang ng isaw sa gilid ng barangay basketball court. Dati siyang laging punchline ng mga sitcom at noontime shows, pero ngayong wala na siyang spotlight, tanging pamilya na lang niya ang audience.

Martha Arciaga
– Asawa ni Bentong. Practical, matapang, pero may pinipigil na galit sa asawang di makabitaw sa pangarap. Naglalaba para sa mga kapitbahay para kumita ng dagdag.

Marissa Arciaga
– Kapatid ni Bentong na may autism. Sensitive sa tunog at liwanag. Mahilig gumuhit at manood ng lumang comedy tapes ni Bentong—doon siya natatawa. Si Marissa ang unang nakakaramdam kapag nalulungkot si Kuya.

Carlo “Caloy” Arciaga
– Anak ni Bentong. 17 yrs old. Tahimik, matalino, may pangarap maging animator o filmmaker. Medyo nahihiya sa trabaho ng ama. Nahihirapan sa pressure ng kahirapan at expectations. May soft spot para sa kapatid niyang si Marissa.

Tricia Garcia
– Crush ni Caloy. Maganda, mabait, pero galing sa mas maayos na pamilya. Hindi niya kinukutya si Caloy kahit simpleng buhay nila—pero clueless siya sa tunay na pinagdadaanan nito.


PREMISE / SUMMARY

Nang ma-invite si Bentong sa isang “reunion episode” ng isang classic comedy show, akala niya ay babalik na ang spotlight sa kanya. Pero ang episode ay isang tribute special para sa mga yumaong komedyante—at nilagay lang siya sa segment na “buhay pa pala siya?” para sa comic relief. Nasaktan siya.

Habang pinipilit bumangon sa hiya, binabalanse niya ang pamilya:
– Si Martha na halos bibitaw na.
– Si Caloy na parang unti-unti nang lumalayo.
– Si Marissa na nakakahalata ng lungkot ng lahat kahit hindi ito lubos na nauunawaan.


Ang nakakaantig na twist?
Isang animation thesis film ang ginagawa ni Caloy tungkol sa isang clown na nawala sa entablado pero minahal ng kanyang anak. Sa dulo ng kwento, marerealize ni Bentong na hindi lang stage ang sukatan ng tunay na legacy ng isang komedyante. Kasi kahit isang tao lang ang natutong tumawa o magmahal dahil sa'yo—panalo ka na.

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KABANATA 11: Pagluha ni Martha
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