咳咳......對不起啦,過了這麼久才發這個結語!
因為除了要選出第一二三名外,還要準備一幅畫.......630Please respect copyright.PENANAaJ3pp64u7f
謝謝大家的內心等待!630Please respect copyright.PENANAX8YODOXIFU
這是我第一次辦創作挑戰!謝謝大家的參與......原來各位都很會寫呢!630Please respect copyright.PENANARMqLBUJsdy
希望大家玩得開心!
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以下就是結果!
第一名:烈焰女王《燃燒之心》- Wendy,Dani,Brain
在留言中已經有說過只有一個角色的獨角戲其實很難寫630Please respect copyright.PENANAmyAiX7rXnt
人物的描寫﹑動作﹑情緒變換,語句也很流暢630Please respect copyright.PENANA07FGZEFPNB
蠟燭﹑看書到後面的情節也滿有畫面的!630Please respect copyright.PENANACufGpENNqx
我很喜歡!!謝謝你帶來佳作!
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這個......老人的救贖的確有一股淡淡的哀傷。630Please respect copyright.PENANAaNWBVYrVoE
因為自己小時候的過失令家人意外死去,剩自己一直苟且活著......630Please respect copyright.PENANARN3cQDgTLf
人生最可怕的,並不是災難降臨在自己身上,而是眼睜睜看著身邊所愛的人受苦受難而你卻無能為力。630Please respect copyright.PENANAbe1idUztbr
到最後,老人留下遺書回到兒時故居尋求「救贖」,雖然自殺是不好的......但對九十幾歲的老人來說,好像真的只有這樣才能解脫......630Please respect copyright.PENANAoNqbtH87IC
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這畫面是老人在窗戶前落泊地留下遺書......630Please respect copyright.PENANAEzS45C66uf
嗚......謝謝參與!!!
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畫面描述得十分細緻,女幽靈安妮被告知她已經死亡時慢慢變成少女的模樣也讓人印象深刻。630Please respect copyright.PENANAAZ4xHh4etS
不過......我居然畫錯了!!!630Please respect copyright.PENANA7N4wfsk7B7
安妮應該是綠色的眼睛!!。。。630Please respect copyright.PENANAU98qcWh6X2
之後會再補上綠色眼睛的安妮><JUNO對不起啦。。。。。。
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雪中少年 - SETSUNA:630Please respect copyright.PENANAMybOd9C1j3
據作者說這是一篇同人文,文章簡而精,我雖然沒看過那漫畫,但光從字句能想像到當時的畫面。630Please respect copyright.PENANAQKarjPCNzL
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賽場 - 檸檬綠:630Please respect copyright.PENANABMH80aJyVa
這篇雖然沒有直接描寫主角的種族,但字裡行間也令人聯想。會是有獸耳的人形生物,還是主角只的是隻「披著單薄號碼衣」的狗狗?作者很聰明的選擇性描寫並引起人的想像!
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我在銀河的彼端等你 - CHOPHY:630Please respect copyright.PENANAwgBjyGDFAu
故事內容有點像interstaller的情節,交錯的時間線也需要讀者動腦分析,雖然說字數很多,但看著看著反而覺得後面情節跑太快呢!!後面收訊號那段也滿令人感動呢!!
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人生在所難免,請你成為更好的人 - 面具:630Please respect copyright.PENANAcPgZL9yjnz
文風平實完整,短短一千多字能完整故事結構也不容易!畫面平淡但溫馨,在文中結尾一句交代了比賽的結果。人生在世,是已經出生的孩子,哭著大喊以後一定會更加努力,是成為更好的人。很溫馨的小故事!!
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背叛 - 洛桑:630Please respect copyright.PENANAlLcVRgNl3Z
文章只有兩百多字,簡單的描寫了背叛者的心情和被害者的心有不甘,心理描寫得很不錯!!
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曾經被淹沒- 天也:630Please respect copyright.PENANAvSPbAySmsr
我阿......其實很受不了兄妹那種......嗚嗚......每當看到兄妹檔就會先加20分XD630Please respect copyright.PENANAUDsBDwHBih
咳咳,好。630Please respect copyright.PENANAj19eObPG2d
妹妹依賴哥哥和哥哥守護妹妹的感情描寫得不錯!630Please respect copyright.PENANAlVeC8sJU3k
可是最後是天人永隔......嗚......
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《鬼島:瓦爾克拉斯》- 穹葉:
是PoE!畫面感十足,彷彿就看到那冷眼旁觀的村民完全不甩主角眼看遠方的樣子XDDD謝謝你的參與!!!
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我好像愛上你了... - 仙人掌+果凍(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧:630Please respect copyright.PENANAJ81SMPnJCF
很青澀的初戀,初次愛上別人心裡的患得患失和酸酸甜甜的感覺都有感受出來!最後是大團圓結局......QQ看得出來作者是個佛心而且心靈純潔的人!630Please respect copyright.PENANAgE2lDVrmMW
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燒開水 - 兀心:630Please respect copyright.PENANAxg1brzQQr4
你知道嗎......一開始我還以為是什麼驚天動地的劇情......630Please respect copyright.PENANAdvQCSYqk2l
結果只是燒個開水嘛XDDD?!630Please respect copyright.PENANAhY4HPzczKZ
不過最尾那句:孤獨,但不無趣。也是整篇文章最畫龍點睛的那句!630Please respect copyright.PENANAwHxpAMPtj3
謝謝你的參與!!!!
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以上就是我拖很久的結語啦!630Please respect copyright.PENANAsOE9baqY2U
最近也在著手新的故事,已經開始寫了......不過寫得不太順,希望這裡了了牽掛,能夠專心寫故事!!
有機會我會再辦第二屆的畫面挑戰!630Please respect copyright.PENANA8vzZyvdOee
希望大家再來參加XD!
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另外,有興趣也來看看的的長篇小說,很殺時間的XD630Please respect copyright.PENANAaNK1EAVY34
《沚汐與晨》630Please respect copyright.PENANATZDaFRQz0S
《與龍夢蝶》
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