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這篇是在描述女高中生小偷林若薇,在加入了全為犯罪者組成的「烏山鎮特殊巡邏隊」之後所發生的故事。這個故事是用輕鬆搞笑的風格來寫,裡面也會有打鬥場面。
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我自己還蠻喜歡這篇作品的,對話很活,在修稿的時候也會邊看邊笑。443Please respect copyright.PENANAPyZ7DWdSS9
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希望禿鷹大大能夠盡量說出這一部作品的缺點!吸收作品的缺點並加以改進也是我這個創作新手在現階段唯一能進步的方法!443Please respect copyright.PENANAkwWFXlLXL5
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