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車理小龜
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再一次試試
精彩三回,秀出你最引以為傲的三回劇情!
Issue 23
與她、她、她、她和她的物語
20 惡鬼
與她、她、她、她和她的物語
19 一騎
與她、她、她、她和她的物語
大修了第一,二章
與她、她、她、她和她的物語
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車理小龜 on 精彩三回,秀出你最引以為傲的三回劇情!
@子不語,好的,謝了,那看來還是前兩章做得不夠好的問題
車理小龜 on 精彩三回,秀出你最引以為傲的三回劇情!
抱歉貼錯了,最後一章應該是兩人對打的篇幅才對
車理小龜 on 精彩三回,秀出你最引以為傲的三回劇情!
@子不語,這又涉及到另一方之後會提到的本卷的核心思想,執念的問題,反派死不妥協的執念導致他的強,但又同時也因為執念而敗,到底是放棄/堅持還是另有出路?之後會再次提到,你說的我也想過,但我覺得如果他還有意識而不去選擇戰鬥的話,執念的純度就好像大大下降了…
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車理小龜 on 精彩三回,秀出你最引以為傲的三回劇情!
謝了,其實我的設計思路是反過來,這是一場審判,主角沒法反駁(體現為主角處於下風,任何還擊都被化解掉),最後主角只能夠連審判本身都不認賬才能嬴.....不過看來受筆力所限沒寫出那種感覺…
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車理小龜 on 與她、她、她、她和她的物語
好的,有時想太多沒注意到
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