可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。152Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm6dAIrf8af
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以怪物為主題：152Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdO8Yr0cL2A
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啊！有怪獸！152Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIN4BYw7TI5
哪裡？那裡？152Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCa3b0MU9F3
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就在你你我的時間裡！152Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4pMdeXPVAP
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