可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。117Please respect copyright.PENANA3T14Mv6Iul
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以怪物為主題:117Please respect copyright.PENANAEEABGwon0b
創挑還沒有結果啊!117Please respect copyright.PENANA7lCz38HHem
有了嗎?117Please respect copyright.PENANAxQUUg9xso6
還沒啊……117Please respect copyright.PENANA2jcq0sdpL6
怎麼還沒呢?117Please respect copyright.PENANAZVyBXS2P5Y
怎麼呢……117Please respect copyright.PENANAUQDsQa8AzK
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,117Please respect copyright.PENANAHy6zAUdx47
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。117Please respect copyright.PENANAVEOXIqHFnF
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。117Please respect copyright.PENANAgS5pVey4sI
今天會把報告交上來吧?117Please respect copyright.PENANAEItH1tzicr
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~117Please respect copyright.PENANADFhgH64bzz
啊!有怪獸!117Please respect copyright.PENANAlETMCACV8Q
哪裡?那裡?117Please respect copyright.PENANADEqdFPd3bG
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~117Please respect copyright.PENANApccFkMN593
就在你你我的時間裡!117Please respect copyright.PENANAqNwVM0UzQ7
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。117Please respect copyright.PENANAMrJx6IWa2p
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~117Please respect copyright.PENANAu892oqGSUk
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