可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。140Please respect copyright.PENANA6CXmFL0VJe
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以怪物為主題:140Please respect copyright.PENANApkESCP0kEJ
創挑還沒有結果啊!140Please respect copyright.PENANAMusv8UwX1s
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拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,140Please respect copyright.PENANATQr1frZpYr
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。140Please respect copyright.PENANA1LShn5xzrn
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。140Please respect copyright.PENANALPROZYmGp5
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~140Please respect copyright.PENANAzd6fHhrfZb
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