A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANANuWpshdXqZ
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—469Please respect copyright.PENANA7BmYUf1MFf
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAKVZu2BtSsj
你指標題?469Please respect copyright.PENANAlhtY8f3Bhs
但有時訂標題也很困難~469Please respect copyright.PENANA7DIDtLUeLk
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAZyw8yR01xY
嗯對啊,469Please respect copyright.PENANAm4gz80PgiH
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAyi8pk3GrK9
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,469Please respect copyright.PENANAVQ6CCV4LrR
所以沒有中心思想在。469Please respect copyright.PENANAYdrQBcsLAT
我猜的對嗎?
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAkbtuVmrj2P
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。469Please respect copyright.PENANAvTfLx4ZGhQ
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?469Please respect copyright.PENANA6UzEiI7qCQ
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAts1j8MV7S3
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!469Please respect copyright.PENANAB0rCWXeK4s
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAFQTCUbNugT
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAl03zHWEUD2
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD469Please respect copyright.PENANA3FyIND3SzM
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。469Please respect copyright.PENANArrkiZo9Ptk
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,469Please respect copyright.PENANATxxR59ub6R
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAaOkc2CbX9s
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。469Please respect copyright.PENANAr08GrPyCIK
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。469Please respect copyright.PENANAVLpk3F19nl
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAmFy3Ly1qhm
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。469Please respect copyright.PENANA0oQXF46f26
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAj46dMlis5f
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAGSgCBKkySF
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAwkITr7aL5W
好啊。
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAPGvUPPWjJs
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。469Please respect copyright.PENANAWeUJMuhCGm
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。469Please respect copyright.PENANAnz72ZTAM1i
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。469Please respect copyright.PENANAF0slIZrNe6
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANABpGSeXAqyX
好的,469Please respect copyright.PENANAOKNJTxMdBj
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、469Please respect copyright.PENANAvvASUc3rMF
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAAMaHjC2UOK
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,469Please respect copyright.PENANA4A4OYILaNS
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAiCQ0SNnLB8
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANA9fUwpGNW7E
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。469Please respect copyright.PENANAUOKylMNdaF
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料469Please respect copyright.PENANA2m7WypPj8h
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。469Please respect copyright.PENANASpc1hwzkxC
比如:469Please respect copyright.PENANAbZ7UggbWc2
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。469Please respect copyright.PENANA3dyNfx0oPH
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。469Please respect copyright.PENANA6oWM8YBwLM
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAUWvXqjtIT8
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAiB0Ca9wET2
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANA2weZ3K5HB3
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAM7i6OICA32
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係469Please respect copyright.PENANAcp7suwB8NZ
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAoq9Ptpe9lo
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAGEn8QphawJ
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,469Please respect copyright.PENANA307kfMQy1D
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAwP26TLn8qe
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAvB6ikr9e2t
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:469Please respect copyright.PENANAsDHkgD2Vdy
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。469Please respect copyright.PENANABZRwyOAM4j
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAW2Qb1wPm7T
哦~
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANA4bqtUFGVDx
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:469Please respect copyright.PENANAfQUWALJgty
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)469Please respect copyright.PENANAAotguRI7yZ
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)469Please respect copyright.PENANAmCZO8Dg3HN
的故事
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAnkCN57aCOW
好的、469Please respect copyright.PENANAn6809U0ke7
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANARDtqwKJukK
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAvqicjIjyv0
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANASxjruVmOy9
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAXWQlEffcBb
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAOR2y4u9HOE
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAqbCOcnKFX5
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:469Please respect copyright.PENANAuJu6byWtwD
1.『爭執』469Please respect copyright.PENANAIYu9xdenNM
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』469Please respect copyright.PENANAmWjayle7yf
3.『分手的情人(主角)』469Please respect copyright.PENANAXtgqgiMWSf
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』469Please respect copyright.PENANAUzJVWDvYB0
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANA5HwiTckAQ2
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANA2ktuTx40Lv
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAXctNWGBiPs
那如果加入復仇呢469Please respect copyright.PENANApYCKKtpqAY
搶她大姐的未婚夫469Please respect copyright.PENANAarszC7GvYy
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANA7zS1vvPxQH
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了469Please respect copyright.PENANAxm9LdFjlmS
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……469Please respect copyright.PENANAHp4cTJ866N
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAo2zNVckaMI
好的,了解啦
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAMgL6d9VTl3
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANA8PUgTMiyDi
不一定要有吧~?469Please respect copyright.PENANAuFqyBA00rF
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAQHREDlbyae
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANARI0npw9CUj
比如469Please respect copyright.PENANA6U5xKeQ2eJ
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』469Please respect copyright.PENANAgsjvcxRLsD
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAFO5NcS7IxQ
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!469Please respect copyright.PENANAvwK4fCVC6i
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD469Please respect copyright.PENANAm8jVQWQZOa
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANAgLuAXbnQFF
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 469Please respect copyright.PENANA375mwRHWU6
A君:469Please respect copyright.PENANAVsE9V8zVLR
你好厲害啊!469Please respect copyright.PENANAoiZCQlJN3e
(重新把故事編排)469Please respect copyright.PENANAHGfCC0BTFO
龍晨P:469Please respect copyright.PENANARmMZ3D5fVU
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~469Please respect copyright.PENANAr3ECJ9pL3F