A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAmZcXOPdGAz
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—527Please respect copyright.PENANAajLkWTv7UD
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAwC8Q7IDKR6
你指標題?527Please respect copyright.PENANAZFMObgD2nE
但有時訂標題也很困難~527Please respect copyright.PENANAH7FtK35h04
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAFEktl7wnU1
嗯對啊,527Please respect copyright.PENANAo1CDD9Qm3J
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAlUcOoRJ0aA
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,527Please respect copyright.PENANAjWBaLcekso
所以沒有中心思想在。527Please respect copyright.PENANAPdaU2YlOdm
我猜的對嗎?
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANABWz0bFAvjC
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。527Please respect copyright.PENANAuY2DgtV7A4
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?527Please respect copyright.PENANAaj8w0o0onV
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAeHQZmRDeZL
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!527Please respect copyright.PENANAEF7IcCnQIT
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAidfhINTo8A
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANA5avN0eVVss
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD527Please respect copyright.PENANA8FIzjoXdnu
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。527Please respect copyright.PENANAT93M3NDaUf
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,527Please respect copyright.PENANAv0TbeMiNhN
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAmQu6w3yEt7
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。527Please respect copyright.PENANAtAcerCmFRt
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。527Please respect copyright.PENANAK8rRtYjhsk
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAjr9sQsdBKn
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。527Please respect copyright.PENANAAqL1mxcB4S
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAqqa9z6v7bp
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAWzDdyE1awk
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAxtaPI0vk8n
好啊。
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANA2ejwZyw8ln
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。527Please respect copyright.PENANAbw3y1cSPJw
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。527Please respect copyright.PENANAjkINrtQ4JE
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。527Please respect copyright.PENANA8MtZW4ICPk
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAsdDL4bukaR
好的,527Please respect copyright.PENANATo2xy9bdlJ
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、527Please respect copyright.PENANACkze7RL2BP
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAUvefbq1p5m
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,527Please respect copyright.PENANAO3nQnSRlVJ
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANATGesqrK6tH
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANA1LcjBeAYza
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。527Please respect copyright.PENANAd5cTWKMgnb
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料527Please respect copyright.PENANANIIzd6Asdb
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。527Please respect copyright.PENANAUREz6uCyO7
比如:527Please respect copyright.PENANAJuBw2rIEd8
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。527Please respect copyright.PENANA8LJF3KYqCj
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。527Please respect copyright.PENANANoIbU1DyV9
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAbuudqRftIV
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAf3ud2JtNCD
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAAkKvmW7Txx
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANA7xLnnjiWLt
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係527Please respect copyright.PENANAFfhY4F0qbB
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANA6g9jGCWWTo
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAshwDbnRgrU
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,527Please respect copyright.PENANAhgcLGH4jZs
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAYJtLCyoDNx
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAR9oCNKsnpN
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:527Please respect copyright.PENANAT512PqM2xp
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。527Please respect copyright.PENANAONwmcPBlCR
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAqS8Fft0Y5l
哦~
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAthe1KzSYxY
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:527Please respect copyright.PENANAYFThSD0z3G
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)527Please respect copyright.PENANAOhsD6YuIeG
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)527Please respect copyright.PENANAIOM6Kn4QX1
的故事
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANA3VnJ4qW1FQ
好的、527Please respect copyright.PENANAsAb2wL6dc5
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAcUJrBjbUOL
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAnpaX7lM2c5
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAAkahiTYAsG
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAasfKzzyE9q
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANASaJ0EuXVkg
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAPBJne8z7Zs
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:527Please respect copyright.PENANAM7bcGAWZzR
1.『爭執』527Please respect copyright.PENANAcyfQinFGPD
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』527Please respect copyright.PENANAkyPH5YXcEU
3.『分手的情人(主角)』527Please respect copyright.PENANAtQqyCLY8us
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』527Please respect copyright.PENANAWhmneXunga
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANA0xi6n1qvVG
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAhOqZqAhcuI
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAISpKjNAYDB
那如果加入復仇呢527Please respect copyright.PENANAHzKekAROFk
搶她大姐的未婚夫527Please respect copyright.PENANASpmReG456y
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANA2PmeckEsw1
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了527Please respect copyright.PENANA9qZFYZ393d
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……527Please respect copyright.PENANAItp2Ns4f1L
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAESy2W89h9j
好的,了解啦
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANAYQCdHWVLnM
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAIUMgoRCtZR
不一定要有吧~?527Please respect copyright.PENANAZ8JP5bXjii
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANA3IdTmHihJ3
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAlAYVEQ7iBz
比如527Please respect copyright.PENANAJU2qYdN5qd
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』527Please respect copyright.PENANA1iflrERTUg
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAbAbv9CNRKY
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!527Please respect copyright.PENANAGggSzwdTYH
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD527Please respect copyright.PENANAJiWgT0CsMP
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANA6piSSqtuDy
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 527Please respect copyright.PENANAJBjdmBeasB
A君:527Please respect copyright.PENANASjLK1MCEoe
你好厲害啊!527Please respect copyright.PENANAtZvfqHNEi6
(重新把故事編排)527Please respect copyright.PENANAxEeWS5BWVP
龍晨P:527Please respect copyright.PENANAKT3ognkgpg
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~527Please respect copyright.PENANA2W1QFcxCE1