A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA56TcTGBoXS
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—559Please respect copyright.PENANAD4jMy5Vn6l
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANA97aJ6bh8Qd
你指標題?559Please respect copyright.PENANAtkythh1Y1t
但有時訂標題也很困難~559Please respect copyright.PENANAsrsgPNHZd7
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAes2DW8hUhx
嗯對啊,559Please respect copyright.PENANA8s92h4aI1P
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANApXNnm7v0yF
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,559Please respect copyright.PENANAnthtDhgUTW
所以沒有中心思想在。559Please respect copyright.PENANA3P6evZTeWu
我猜的對嗎?
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA9JERpSVcNZ
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。559Please respect copyright.PENANASRka8UE0cL
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?559Please respect copyright.PENANANWS0KTR8ms
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAG0keJFiyI5
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!559Please respect copyright.PENANAVzJOEDsiBq
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAOn8ly04aid
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAPhkJPooSc0
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD559Please respect copyright.PENANAb47MqfQT95
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。559Please respect copyright.PENANA5tczfOgYKt
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,559Please respect copyright.PENANAzJo1h8Yuim
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA4YAmbeiKvP
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。559Please respect copyright.PENANASzchbPLzQX
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。559Please respect copyright.PENANAkijnmofdZ3
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANA4WvlbWl9Zx
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。559Please respect copyright.PENANA0iSkiOmssB
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAb2sAxDp0HJ
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAAGaDK59KXb
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAAeW6VOgZWL
好啊。
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAqeiiSkZpP8
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。559Please respect copyright.PENANARpQtHkga17
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。559Please respect copyright.PENANAvnh0PrDZas
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。559Please respect copyright.PENANAuahIUpi8xr
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA740cLyHpmZ
好的,559Please respect copyright.PENANADE45wuQmhm
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、559Please respect copyright.PENANAbogZTGMW2b
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAhUQumzOGAE
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,559Please respect copyright.PENANANSylMMnzFk
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAwgOtClufkb
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAuFhPx6J5w7
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。559Please respect copyright.PENANAGouO2r9j8e
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料559Please respect copyright.PENANA28KWTQRpVx
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。559Please respect copyright.PENANACTfXBdmIyz
比如:559Please respect copyright.PENANADsTVJtF7eq
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。559Please respect copyright.PENANAhlexstqb7V
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。559Please respect copyright.PENANAkV9T2DatMd
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAyBt0Zf6DM9
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAaKiS1Z1DHr
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAmFVaIgZ95k
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAMorjKs3ZHD
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係559Please respect copyright.PENANAv81Xe1Caof
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA868kEqFNGK
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANA3eA4ixQQEj
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,559Please respect copyright.PENANA8nnVLlQFwf
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAZuoCO840QG
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAn9uyf2xZcX
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:559Please respect copyright.PENANAxmijfMpMAJ
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。559Please respect copyright.PENANAtsxr6myH2I
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA8FIbWwbpwb
哦~
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAy8zKWL6tmI
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:559Please respect copyright.PENANAg0gUz9bfjw
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)559Please respect copyright.PENANAsue2dpWK4P
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)559Please respect copyright.PENANAUiuySFiIZk
的故事
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAdBotxZ3hw1
好的、559Please respect copyright.PENANA1foHSeplFJ
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAZuQW6Drc0G
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAHDRDQhPo08
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANATo6cue12uL
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAh6RBSFwdFo
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAMRxtwuTJ1M
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAgXSCgNMtvp
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:559Please respect copyright.PENANAurTM4EAn2x
1.『爭執』559Please respect copyright.PENANAmZqyMkbIbn
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』559Please respect copyright.PENANA5oiOrEzahr
3.『分手的情人(主角)』559Please respect copyright.PENANAclQyCKtLAO
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』559Please respect copyright.PENANAILmylkdt7A
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAcnJ4jFgRZj
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAC7rkptM2fN
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAnKWRAbt8VP
那如果加入復仇呢559Please respect copyright.PENANARhTfcAlwrw
搶她大姐的未婚夫559Please respect copyright.PENANAcUD9JQesM5
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANACLoGjWTxqY
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了559Please respect copyright.PENANAauVMkiVYwS
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……559Please respect copyright.PENANAYID9HeqUy6
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAzMnH3dwlju
好的,了解啦
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANA7XLNKyTW3Q
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANA55Y95yqypD
不一定要有吧~?559Please respect copyright.PENANA21NxAd4tgX
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAUiv0zQ9OlK
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAbYmIEDGLSW
比如559Please respect copyright.PENANAtSNWFNoIFP
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』559Please respect copyright.PENANASzFrzeYtl8
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAZoKzYu7zWh
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!559Please respect copyright.PENANAdaL7ScVSpH
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD559Please respect copyright.PENANASAVbkjqAoT
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANA7jwPx6A95I
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 559Please respect copyright.PENANA6O9fl1TdGr
A君:559Please respect copyright.PENANAu2XmrjYeDY
你好厲害啊!559Please respect copyright.PENANAyscFP5xaXH
(重新把故事編排)559Please respect copyright.PENANA7izktW48fW
龍晨P:559Please respect copyright.PENANAjbrCVtWO8T
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~559Please respect copyright.PENANAMg1hd573jD