A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAKy3W7zkYyO
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—471Please respect copyright.PENANAXc2rXe2ojn
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANATjJpCwLnnf
你指標題?471Please respect copyright.PENANA4HFEH6dym7
但有時訂標題也很困難~471Please respect copyright.PENANAwDMVlwcRq4
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANA5B58POUKsk
嗯對啊,471Please respect copyright.PENANAtsXrveeswf
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAkXR4V4bRey
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,471Please respect copyright.PENANAVMvmQpZkUi
所以沒有中心思想在。471Please respect copyright.PENANAra94YCkymZ
我猜的對嗎?
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAskUyPg8jHA
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。471Please respect copyright.PENANAbFFsVmg4zU
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?471Please respect copyright.PENANAQyhjjwpDT2
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAaM2sNO2yET
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!471Please respect copyright.PENANA4VnvUcFO1x
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAHBFNV0ift6
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAaAFhp3HEyo
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD471Please respect copyright.PENANAVBf3COi9Hf
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。471Please respect copyright.PENANAonBDYNfFOL
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,471Please respect copyright.PENANALidKUYCMgx
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAMa3eCo9NXY
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。471Please respect copyright.PENANA2oY7mHiUhw
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。471Please respect copyright.PENANArJvNX0oN0d
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAO2LxyyxNGg
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。471Please respect copyright.PENANA0g23DRlAad
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAaUAI9jgiDn
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAP4Zha4Oo6s
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAblV7eSUNgb
好啊。
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAxB6HXuTdby
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。471Please respect copyright.PENANAtKNse0RXbK
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。471Please respect copyright.PENANAfAnJSBgayH
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。471Please respect copyright.PENANAg7lsq21nDg
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANANXnvUAzXHl
好的,471Please respect copyright.PENANAnSwBeeSIaa
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、471Please respect copyright.PENANAG3jiTcH1Vk
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAGFN4hleqIn
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,471Please respect copyright.PENANAriz2IC8ApF
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANACJAgk31KEZ
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANABlOMDOjkk6
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。471Please respect copyright.PENANAPbIpFraUbv
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料471Please respect copyright.PENANA5xP4mBkUlI
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。471Please respect copyright.PENANA6rT9fK34ve
比如:471Please respect copyright.PENANAn3ZUWSbzhP
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。471Please respect copyright.PENANAhYPveb3gf2
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。471Please respect copyright.PENANACViozcKpCg
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANA9x4ms1Bpx8
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAEzMKAKxLN0
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAEohjjxPdbj
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAzd0aZr9W93
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係471Please respect copyright.PENANAypbgHeo3iW
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANA8vIsLabj1n
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAAJ8TWZFaag
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,471Please respect copyright.PENANAwkiQ0154aT
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAJiKg8LZEQo
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANADljce4U5W2
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:471Please respect copyright.PENANAKm6psucKzK
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。471Please respect copyright.PENANARjBbbSaymu
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANA1Rukd9AyW1
哦~
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAgSWPArh8Ge
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:471Please respect copyright.PENANAtpZzZo7Wut
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)471Please respect copyright.PENANAWY9bXtAXk4
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)471Please respect copyright.PENANADaunJraJNk
的故事
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAgRYyR7fok8
好的、471Please respect copyright.PENANAHIqjO4r0nN
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAJZRMgFlQ9O
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANA9bhR9pxmaV
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANANs3YLhiHvb
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANA3s4lxs2ZtJ
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAZscal3nhwp
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAKKmnDwjgCj
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:471Please respect copyright.PENANAWcBnb3TOyk
1.『爭執』471Please respect copyright.PENANAoxTVpGa7yS
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』471Please respect copyright.PENANAibOQfno2Dz
3.『分手的情人(主角)』471Please respect copyright.PENANAKQDZe42jFa
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』471Please respect copyright.PENANAbaZ1JT8sPo
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAqlWVqKy2MB
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANARoqnmB6qIX
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAyEEPKY2R15
那如果加入復仇呢471Please respect copyright.PENANAJGnVDahfVw
搶她大姐的未婚夫471Please respect copyright.PENANA4m5Z2SFyk3
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAMAbjDlUm1m
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了471Please respect copyright.PENANA3mqdgbIqoi
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……471Please respect copyright.PENANAuX6DjnmXTD
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAKDrfsPwHRS
好的,了解啦
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAi4uSzyRXb4
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANApbwOfmBcYY
不一定要有吧~?471Please respect copyright.PENANAwYcuXNwmof
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAmqP188Xylh
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAyGOthhiPzg
比如471Please respect copyright.PENANAe4gIn5aYeZ
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』471Please respect copyright.PENANAPXvOqU9GEk
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAbQiGImhdzC
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!471Please respect copyright.PENANAzFvJvYfIA6
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD471Please respect copyright.PENANAigXde62IyI
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANAOFZecKWGz3
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 471Please respect copyright.PENANA4Ps1IzPbpL
A君:471Please respect copyright.PENANAuXBM4s1h2W
你好厲害啊!471Please respect copyright.PENANAyFEhEZxLSc
(重新把故事編排)471Please respect copyright.PENANAZ4WP3VK6PS
龍晨P:471Please respect copyright.PENANApg86fCrEu1
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~471Please respect copyright.PENANAZaR4usvMcY