In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16681Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡConTjIKl5C
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 681Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1m7gRBxH7i
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.681Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6DDoi70b7K
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.681Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiu0Dn8CVw4
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!681Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsxnvEYiFMw
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!681Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGo6ZPx9HPb
Well done, Zak!
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