In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16575Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsHjVxvlsLu
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 575Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdVaPKv0msU
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.575Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgn606N8RWB
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.575Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9s9Ud4AHG1
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!575Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDqwCiM6yQY
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!575Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Q4h0c1FoZ
Well done, Zak!
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