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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16577Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkF5ItgymLS
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 577Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtekOrmVFOw
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.577Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9X8sJYbD0u
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.577Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwVMBgH9YmR
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!577Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvPuBnm68Fz
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!577Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFs9YGHUEYD
Well done, Zak!
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