作者妳好816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX3RWB1EMNa
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稍微看了下这本佩姬816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX6GRGL8Dog
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzbDKJtv19X
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbg2eYpCewt
现世一堆东西816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb4QWK5UuPH
其实就很简单一个道理816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ74QlIWa5G1
主角想要被爱816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnNJ6jXk53i
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡat0J2JPVtc
男主卢克爱816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYi8DTInOMS
主角就爱回去816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzTX0AxCsR4
女主伊莎爱816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrKziAti56o
主角就爱回去816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡinZijgILvi
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYVKMRC3sY7
想要被爱是佩姬的主题816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPJgJXVey1V
主角性别不是问题816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8sDkvZLlch
内心冲突不是问题816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg3Py70b8AD
主角被爱就迎刃而解816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGrqBTkioNJ
看不懂这点整部书就看不了816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvQhsKvXLFQ
妳的书乏人问津是这道理816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcZeLJ9z39D
作者妳说主角口是心非816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYUSoIZ9E8p
欸我说这不对816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLn13Mc6I56
这明摆着口非心也非816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMpiuyoYh5M
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn9j22xesHf
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡci7jDVmWqF
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtdUSb6LVUP
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvIYaDR5ITd
为了被爱816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡngYQVOIsV0
连原本的性别都不要了816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoW0pSOEZFl
这主角疯的傻的816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgoj8A0DBz4
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgja6mXXVuu
女主伊莎816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW1K2wvIrTi
单纯的色鬼816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlRlRSyRaAS
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVn216GEbYu
黑化可能
艾德兰816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPIy1404fez
可怜虫阿816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMePwCrEHbN
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnwySshsiLE
妳说解释不够816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJF0tjcbNzt
我到觉得清楚816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoLQNRJEszc
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡggQlWFpfKJ
他为啥强816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqubEYwH8Il
妳啥都没讲816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcu6bxBiuMS
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOqc7MYGiGE
也是除主角外最明白的角色816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg6N7CuIGh4
她就拿来爱主角的816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡayZHb6Bzmx
功能性角色
还有其他许多816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDlCWBBKysO
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSMgPWOX2Ga
可以瞧见妳的苦心816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7EC2Lwowd0
我觉得这没必要816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBJLjlmRxra
好的台词提一次够了816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIIvq20vzxy
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdmUtkCVe7L
我倒嫌设定囉嗦816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8sfWYXh0aL
空白很重要816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA3VvH64CfX
没明白有没明白的好处816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSHssFbPi0h
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyZKHouFmcC
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMNPLRbvEsB
我还会继续看的816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNyVHJvXzWK
确实好看816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbgzsRLVx4a
希望你这能写完816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6msH9uBPJk
能放上起点不816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFt2hB5FC6h
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3atf7c2Mtw
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbKoD59IBlt
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxeQVlNXGAe
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡajo50QBBpe
感謝你的評文816Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqs3MIKY52F
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