作者妳好817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlliKpulgYJ
受到妳的邀请817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡECcMWgNw7p
稍微看了下这本佩姬817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJKYbmKIJTP
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQVkhbsGYIW
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhnSth0zYhJ
现世一堆东西817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQWJ9Id4Ktv
其实就很简单一个道理817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf9CV7MVKxB
主角想要被爱817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpPc8emVHMJ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTylrTO9Oxz
男主卢克爱817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbjWmrceQcA
主角就爱回去817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0tCxUNW0T8
女主伊莎爱817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGnqyNPz7OC
主角就爱回去817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ83X0uNCilx
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYPkylmWFK5
想要被爱是佩姬的主题817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCEfccRsXWO
主角性别不是问题817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6iVjqL2W5d
内心冲突不是问题817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXWGaMpjW66
主角被爱就迎刃而解817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ07jRVjrioV
看不懂这点整部书就看不了817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡii18q6BuHJ
妳的书乏人问津是这道理817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmc7shz8fgQ
作者妳说主角口是心非817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcOzev5570j
欸我说这不对817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLOVCJRBdNk
这明摆着口非心也非817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8V4WM4BLkf
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ46K6DCP34e
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFXPPgIfYsK
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDG40nvyWUp
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOhG4Oe2j5Q
为了被爱817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCU4u3KkdyL
连原本的性别都不要了817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5IHMKZ2vbv
这主角疯的傻的817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpEf5rwBj3l
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmSySfaGtvz
女主伊莎817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl9X9Xi8WJd
单纯的色鬼817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF7eaNxRIQr
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTRCMgjUnrT
黑化可能
艾德兰817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGhdURmVyYz
可怜虫阿817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt2RjkI66zX
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKSNGitZ8l9
妳说解释不够817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgp7fVoUKHL
我到觉得清楚817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ45rbShJCwW
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnhjx8ln2D6
他为啥强817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3CPpjFu2ha
妳啥都没讲817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiAsvWJlT6x
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3lDbP9xmlC
也是除主角外最明白的角色817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi3byMS0bVa
她就拿来爱主角的817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡITnhObSMun
功能性角色
还有其他许多817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡONDI2MuMf0
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPS14XaM9xo
可以瞧见妳的苦心817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXYWPiPwHPW
我觉得这没必要817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjB9aFVdjYl
好的台词提一次够了817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZhPL1YIlxO
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfPzIUesMVg
我倒嫌设定囉嗦817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG9yUbJ3ZUn
空白很重要817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUzaDbZZqOg
没明白有没明白的好处817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ86yM11g6bZ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBJPxAkTKug
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZNO8den47I
我还会继续看的817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwCmsDDGhlk
确实好看817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq6FrQrIbGf
希望你这能写完817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtxycC6DNJY
能放上起点不817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9OZw79QDw1
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCuX73qfaLf
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLacZ6VhwEh
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrUT8tg0vjR
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqu8Qcr0qoj
感謝你的評文817Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdPzaqDQnAK
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