作者妳好817Please respect copyright.PENANAlliKpulgYJ
受到妳的邀请817Please respect copyright.PENANAECcMWgNw7p
稍微看了下这本佩姬817Please respect copyright.PENANAJKYbmKIJTP
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法817Please respect copyright.PENANAQVkhbsGYIW
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西817Please respect copyright.PENANAhnSth0zYhJ
现世一堆东西817Please respect copyright.PENANAQWJ9Id4Ktv
其实就很简单一个道理817Please respect copyright.PENANAf9CV7MVKxB
主角想要被爱817Please respect copyright.PENANApPc8emVHMJ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱817Please respect copyright.PENANATylrTO9Oxz
男主卢克爱817Please respect copyright.PENANAbjWmrceQcA
主角就爱回去817Please respect copyright.PENANA0tCxUNW0T8
女主伊莎爱817Please respect copyright.PENANAGnqyNPz7OC
主角就爱回去817Please respect copyright.PENANA83X0uNCilx
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理817Please respect copyright.PENANAYPkylmWFK5
想要被爱是佩姬的主题817Please respect copyright.PENANACEfccRsXWO
主角性别不是问题817Please respect copyright.PENANA6iVjqL2W5d
内心冲突不是问题817Please respect copyright.PENANAXWGaMpjW66
主角被爱就迎刃而解817Please respect copyright.PENANA07jRVjrioV
看不懂这点整部书就看不了817Please respect copyright.PENANAii18q6BuHJ
妳的书乏人问津是这道理817Please respect copyright.PENANAmc7shz8fgQ
作者妳说主角口是心非817Please respect copyright.PENANAcOzev5570j
欸我说这不对817Please respect copyright.PENANALOVCJRBdNk
这明摆着口非心也非817Please respect copyright.PENANA8V4WM4BLkf
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰817Please respect copyright.PENANA46K6DCP34e
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵817Please respect copyright.PENANAFXPPgIfYsK
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜817Please respect copyright.PENANADG40nvyWUp
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的817Please respect copyright.PENANAOhG4Oe2j5Q
为了被爱817Please respect copyright.PENANACU4u3KkdyL
连原本的性别都不要了817Please respect copyright.PENANA5IHMKZ2vbv
这主角疯的傻的817Please respect copyright.PENANApEf5rwBj3l
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色817Please respect copyright.PENANAmSySfaGtvz
女主伊莎817Please respect copyright.PENANAl9X9Xi8WJd
单纯的色鬼817Please respect copyright.PENANAF7eaNxRIQr
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性817Please respect copyright.PENANATRCMgjUnrT
黑化可能
艾德兰817Please respect copyright.PENANAGhdURmVyYz
可怜虫阿817Please respect copyright.PENANAt2RjkI66zX
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了817Please respect copyright.PENANAKSNGitZ8l9
妳说解释不够817Please respect copyright.PENANAgp7fVoUKHL
我到觉得清楚817Please respect copyright.PENANA45rbShJCwW
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够817Please respect copyright.PENANAnhjx8ln2D6
他为啥强817Please respect copyright.PENANA3CPpjFu2ha
妳啥都没讲817Please respect copyright.PENANAiAsvWJlT6x
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白817Please respect copyright.PENANA3lDbP9xmlC
也是除主角外最明白的角色817Please respect copyright.PENANAi3byMS0bVa
她就拿来爱主角的817Please respect copyright.PENANAITnhObSMun
功能性角色
还有其他许多817Please respect copyright.PENANAONDI2MuMf0
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多817Please respect copyright.PENANAPS14XaM9xo
可以瞧见妳的苦心817Please respect copyright.PENANAXYWPiPwHPW
我觉得这没必要817Please respect copyright.PENANAjB9aFVdjYl
好的台词提一次够了817Please respect copyright.PENANAZhPL1YIlxO
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨817Please respect copyright.PENANAfPzIUesMVg
我倒嫌设定囉嗦817Please respect copyright.PENANAG9yUbJ3ZUn
空白很重要817Please respect copyright.PENANAUzaDbZZqOg
没明白有没明白的好处817Please respect copyright.PENANA86yM11g6bZ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说817Please respect copyright.PENANABJPxAkTKug
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书817Please respect copyright.PENANAZNO8den47I
我还会继续看的817Please respect copyright.PENANAwCmsDDGhlk
确实好看817Please respect copyright.PENANAq6FrQrIbGf
希望你这能写完817Please respect copyright.PENANAtxycC6DNJY
能放上起点不817Please respect copyright.PENANA9OZw79QDw1
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
817Please respect copyright.PENANAwDVmai0c0A
作者回應:817Please respect copyright.PENANACuX73qfaLf
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,817Please respect copyright.PENANALacZ6VhwEh
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,817Please respect copyright.PENANArUT8tg0vjR
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞817Please respect copyright.PENANAqu8Qcr0qoj
感謝你的評文817Please respect copyright.PENANAdPzaqDQnAK
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