作者妳好561Please respect copyright.PENANAXaIy0r6NoB
受到妳的邀请561Please respect copyright.PENANAIpUqGGw9mW
稍微看了下这本佩姬561Please respect copyright.PENANAG57p0V95Ey
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法561Please respect copyright.PENANAWKzbj144O4
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西561Please respect copyright.PENANAGTasr9Y8P8
现世一堆东西561Please respect copyright.PENANAXwJ9EjSYTQ
其实就很简单一个道理561Please respect copyright.PENANAd6WhzbmnHr
主角想要被爱561Please respect copyright.PENANAG7Wk7MyxXc
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱561Please respect copyright.PENANAg52xMAKxRr
男主卢克爱561Please respect copyright.PENANAEYU110JBPx
主角就爱回去561Please respect copyright.PENANAbfrE8mmjAg
女主伊莎爱561Please respect copyright.PENANAGR08oQeSLp
主角就爱回去561Please respect copyright.PENANARQESERAvRz
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理561Please respect copyright.PENANANcNuWhC6lO
想要被爱是佩姬的主题561Please respect copyright.PENANA5ie6KwdfV2
主角性别不是问题561Please respect copyright.PENANAaSzL5ywY1c
内心冲突不是问题561Please respect copyright.PENANAS8TO3JFelv
主角被爱就迎刃而解561Please respect copyright.PENANAD8SzIUnXYO
看不懂这点整部书就看不了561Please respect copyright.PENANA27Y2vxjnpu
妳的书乏人问津是这道理561Please respect copyright.PENANAw8SWuAoYZq
作者妳说主角口是心非561Please respect copyright.PENANAtNpvPfmNhH
欸我说这不对561Please respect copyright.PENANAmhK30jA4z6
这明摆着口非心也非561Please respect copyright.PENANAxOJwxu8vQ0
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰561Please respect copyright.PENANAGhNqBLvjlf
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵561Please respect copyright.PENANAPVCKK1t4Hx
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜561Please respect copyright.PENANAtC7WgPh9Lw
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的561Please respect copyright.PENANAwU0unnvcxD
为了被爱561Please respect copyright.PENANAoA5lAXhmSX
连原本的性别都不要了561Please respect copyright.PENANAW4Lxfcy6F3
这主角疯的傻的561Please respect copyright.PENANAmdMdrSH226
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色561Please respect copyright.PENANAIpEwQ295sa
女主伊莎561Please respect copyright.PENANAJK2odRwLTc
单纯的色鬼561Please respect copyright.PENANAOzoae9nUPD
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性561Please respect copyright.PENANAsiXUxopngy
黑化可能
艾德兰561Please respect copyright.PENANAQNh9rvU2ID
可怜虫阿561Please respect copyright.PENANAeJzUKNgzB0
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了561Please respect copyright.PENANA4EmeIIJ8e8
妳说解释不够561Please respect copyright.PENANAYJa8t8ymUb
我到觉得清楚561Please respect copyright.PENANATl1GwV7aNY
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够561Please respect copyright.PENANAqbBgf6MkCM
他为啥强561Please respect copyright.PENANAkZ2tzTufZu
妳啥都没讲561Please respect copyright.PENANATSKifFQRDD
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白561Please respect copyright.PENANAYlguNOT6E4
也是除主角外最明白的角色561Please respect copyright.PENANA6gVAlx9yNk
她就拿来爱主角的561Please respect copyright.PENANAq8pebS2tC8
功能性角色
还有其他许多561Please respect copyright.PENANAjBWW4pcOtR
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多561Please respect copyright.PENANAiFNWUmzoiu
可以瞧见妳的苦心561Please respect copyright.PENANAnFaR6zNATv
我觉得这没必要561Please respect copyright.PENANAfPrhlh9tz0
好的台词提一次够了561Please respect copyright.PENANAMCdyJUzYL7
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨561Please respect copyright.PENANAyXmc7dUTgf
我倒嫌设定囉嗦561Please respect copyright.PENANAmf7i31P1Bk
空白很重要561Please respect copyright.PENANASEbf7dEJlZ
没明白有没明白的好处561Please respect copyright.PENANAJH6iBOcVwi
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说561Please respect copyright.PENANA1xjobIXsDp
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书561Please respect copyright.PENANAgdA3GCU0Gq
我还会继续看的561Please respect copyright.PENANAuH5eKmHaTo
确实好看561Please respect copyright.PENANALa4LMnytu7
希望你这能写完561Please respect copyright.PENANAFVLl26gNFI
能放上起点不561Please respect copyright.PENANAkQ3f2t4APd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
561Please respect copyright.PENANAyByj7Haz3H
作者回應:561Please respect copyright.PENANAmcuvjQFQbJ
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,561Please respect copyright.PENANA25QFiRee65
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,561Please respect copyright.PENANAbLyJTFy5Ow
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞561Please respect copyright.PENANA2HXOGhQUtR
感謝你的評文561Please respect copyright.PENANAMBBv9OqJBa
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