作者妳好719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtaRZhjctJb
受到妳的邀请719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZaxkaVROYT
稍微看了下这本佩姬719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWYdKQpQ8S7
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcrg6WBICFj
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZfgC80Brdd
现世一堆东西719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeSN68gtQrx
其实就很简单一个道理719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡueq3VKGaTz
主角想要被爱719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvxnP0RiHyl
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmiw3s75lJ8
男主卢克爱719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHcDrQ1qEro
主角就爱回去719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI4cLCWGDeu
女主伊莎爱719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNC6reIzHcQ
主角就爱回去719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXcOvp9X42o
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIasqMOnGU5
想要被爱是佩姬的主题719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT51pdubECG
主角性别不是问题719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY6XYaDt1g6
内心冲突不是问题719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyOphxRxz6F
主角被爱就迎刃而解719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoO11gKFOJl
看不懂这点整部书就看不了719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6OD7Bq6a1r
妳的书乏人问津是这道理719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK7ZDTXsF6s
作者妳说主角口是心非719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRwl0tx1ej4
欸我说这不对719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYbxl5H8SFU
这明摆着口非心也非719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYzg1FTjlsJ
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyDK92NSYEZ
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKJfvJq44Ww
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOn9UVQGXaq
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIGctD0PCv6
为了被爱719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbPH3Ha64xB
连原本的性别都不要了719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOFKm8YQux6
这主角疯的傻的719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIzbMB8pkAg
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4rKv9MD36y
女主伊莎719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbuIiMpmsfI
单纯的色鬼719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpMww54XRtA
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJNpM5Agzac
黑化可能
艾德兰719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmxQg1hX6Ym
可怜虫阿719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj3YwCPZzy7
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk5E3OMaMfw
妳说解释不够719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOzIkvPgMH1
我到觉得清楚719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl9v3CjnYWJ
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡstkMTRTioY
他为啥强719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGtcyvt13RT
妳啥都没讲719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs3uxNeQ5IQ
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Lf0bsfbYJ
也是除主角外最明白的角色719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvdf2VTdIoS
她就拿来爱主角的719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjBRsZPQEuL
功能性角色
还有其他许多719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD1wcPmVPZm
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsXBzTNuY73
可以瞧见妳的苦心719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGHXgOzfacR
我觉得这没必要719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLeprbGlYmq
好的台词提一次够了719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmAhiXRS0b0
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXWWCHsJjKy
我倒嫌设定囉嗦719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJVvb315VCw
空白很重要719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ98EELjtm3k
没明白有没明白的好处719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKcnz1KNuLr
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeEYsqmlpq8
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIDm9D3i4on
我还会继续看的719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgDGNZGCsFi
确实好看719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwbmJszBzJH
希望你这能写完719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBSiuCdNf6R
能放上起点不719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpp9zhkP9qh
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3GyoiJqs4W
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE3LuQYTB0n
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5IZ79VhYyP
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBTlRskJ1rI
感謝你的評文719Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9GPPfGeGUv
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