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受到妳的邀请777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe6UEVUqEOd
稍微看了下这本佩姬777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd79zp1IUoW
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFMjfmKUuq1
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡntlV1PTHIv
现世一堆东西777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3XT4kzS4cG
其实就很简单一个道理777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡet2ZChk1sm
主角想要被爱777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6S8oD4QwzO
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpAdqvii47d
男主卢克爱777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi0clf4RGnU
主角就爱回去777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0JywP96YlP
女主伊莎爱777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoPKBl9ajUv
主角就爱回去777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7RjX0RhXSz
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡySxzzZif3G
想要被爱是佩姬的主题777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbZgKhoGkQA
主角性别不是问题777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLYU3fI6Br7
内心冲突不是问题777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD7G9UcBndo
主角被爱就迎刃而解777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU2HEPSLNtt
看不懂这点整部书就看不了777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPh5jzN0vzW
妳的书乏人问津是这道理777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3wbIwxZwE0
作者妳说主角口是心非777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkGYNRs0T3g
欸我说这不对777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ftIfuyuK3
这明摆着口非心也非777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1fMrgmQbM3
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ22eBzFjX2h
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxySbx4FRS0
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdPXUYH9hBb
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Sd8QFX28L
为了被爱777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcJp2WpOm8y
连原本的性别都不要了777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5RFHCHBDqJ
这主角疯的傻的777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFHSoacGO9Z
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnOo34K6Z90
女主伊莎777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjViVmljAdW
单纯的色鬼777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmZkk7kxZS2
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0x1tG32ItO
黑化可能
艾德兰777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY17cF8KKrs
可怜虫阿777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBiimY7ImRF
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYmj7kzNG2C
妳说解释不够777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs8ML3prpPE
我到觉得清楚777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtlUgKRqQez
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeX278DqdNI
他为啥强777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTP9WkBrwSl
妳啥都没讲777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGRRkCWSVxt
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6sR9hFQ3RY
也是除主角外最明白的角色777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBPFZHRWOtJ
她就拿来爱主角的777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLS4xVojuoI
功能性角色
还有其他许多777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Q4xC95o3I
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeE83oD7LTl
可以瞧见妳的苦心777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkGbul05sY7
我觉得这没必要777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXXVX6UuLhE
好的台词提一次够了777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOl27LcAOMP
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkZQ2d6S68I
我倒嫌设定囉嗦777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZPp5BR0JGR
空白很重要777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTXA2zx0qSj
没明白有没明白的好处777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJzv1i9Bhft
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfzOe9PFKBK
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBJU4VUSgKO
我还会继续看的777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPj1pIcNKSR
确实好看777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ46w29ugq40
希望你这能写完777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFgIikcljQA
能放上起点不777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqodPX3GSPL
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCyvIbhpV1z
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBUCc8N2XMb
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJACQLYTx1V
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS6jxFEePb1
感謝你的評文777Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb6w8hQCKLT
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