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稍微看了下这本佩姬854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxtdZlwKsEB
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0EJKJoMCIK
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDygnX54ZmB
现世一堆东西854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmkTAzLyttR
其实就很简单一个道理854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO8rpdCMgGs
主角想要被爱854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPluRNqgGgo
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGR3WxlUotK
男主卢克爱854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgMrmEHMEG9
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女主伊莎爱854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoGnnSTMkYK
主角就爱回去854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsdKSc1r6fF
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkMpnIglzdI
想要被爱是佩姬的主题854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgkXCXypJmu
主角性别不是问题854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ95RedfkhPx
内心冲突不是问题854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPBYFnRwWeE
主角被爱就迎刃而解854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3VMAQhAXKR
看不懂这点整部书就看不了854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJELPrHWTVI
妳的书乏人问津是这道理854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkulC0YtzN4
作者妳说主角口是心非854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUWcFuwgSLA
欸我说这不对854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhiDEDM18qT
这明摆着口非心也非854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb0JbKxwbH2
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz4yzwoGZP7
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCyPlXspgXV
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf7POJ4ZmoZ
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgYMuGhocI9
为了被爱854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWxP0LKZZnl
连原本的性别都不要了854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVA78sSJPNS
这主角疯的傻的854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDMXJFfuVhg
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpfpm7bfOeh
女主伊莎854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxNwAZcafBl
单纯的色鬼854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW0uanVgvpz
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoEdNDnbzhJ
黑化可能
艾德兰854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡboszYUlndz
可怜虫阿854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVm5RuDEP7h
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMko0OZ43TK
妳说解释不够854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNa3sg0t7WQ
我到觉得清楚854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2aED4b90VF
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu2c2d5szru
他为啥强854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI70OK2MpdB
妳啥都没讲854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvtwHOxwgN9
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXvyS4Ps8dO
也是除主角外最明白的角色854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyFVYPhrAGq
她就拿来爱主角的854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBZ3sK3q9FJ
功能性角色
还有其他许多854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAOOLchQMFK
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGKmqXIFgLQ
可以瞧见妳的苦心854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjHDUPqIGP
我觉得这没必要854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlm76YlvJOH
好的台词提一次够了854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2xkpTRsEZL
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaX4QW96HEU
我倒嫌设定囉嗦854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDure0wDDHL
空白很重要854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvaEtclvKZF
没明白有没明白的好处854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsXv1bYXA6p
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS2zOphB7qa
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkaBxmYGXc5
我还会继续看的854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡab0SHmvyOC
确实好看854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQDay4RKfg7
希望你这能写完854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1U0eblHtJj
能放上起点不854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzmC6feTlAR
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMvfNKsnrFa
作者回應：854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnehX2bdMec
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuy3wZMu87g
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHlI50ze7wZ
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6hrhEjRmWu
感謝你的評文854Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCssThBRqrk
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