作者妳好824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPeUTMwyfEC
受到妳的邀请824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKtJp9huTBI
稍微看了下这本佩姬824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaYDFi2Mvq7
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNtFmINT0Hn
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIiRc6kEJ6F
现世一堆东西824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0BOQcPXxlH
其实就很简单一个道理824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCnFTqUIuFh
主角想要被爱824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZhqDBv8eQD
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjliNTcQOC
男主卢克爱824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Z3ZGMKRLN
主角就爱回去824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9t8ZvVQLq3
女主伊莎爱824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxQkIjUnhJY
主角就爱回去824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡanrX2rBVD1
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoS0CEzuSnj
想要被爱是佩姬的主题824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpuaZjY0fdU
主角性别不是问题824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRpO82s8z4q
内心冲突不是问题824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAeXcyrvpoz
主角被爱就迎刃而解824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQJujSa2PiY
看不懂这点整部书就看不了824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5KAzmorV5O
妳的书乏人问津是这道理824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWLcpME3AEG
作者妳说主角口是心非824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlPblnZ2tCW
欸我说这不对824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2609oaztpX
这明摆着口非心也非824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7rD9DYg24S
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlwmc1QwU21
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAObKBRcDpQ
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOgP0LktRXv
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡptGAd20J0D
为了被爱824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQRnEZ7VoCz
连原本的性别都不要了824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoXBFN9K3Tn
这主角疯的傻的824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjXodjQ8Rce
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgqkWl3NIwa
女主伊莎824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUoCZ4etGsT
单纯的色鬼824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9FOL0sBwb4
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeP4ruTibgG
黑化可能
艾德兰824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQGk8FsnQqk
可怜虫阿824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPBEkbLrC7i
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlssQlu6V73
妳说解释不够824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDnPA1ds3xJ
我到觉得清楚824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxNEhaceL6j
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw9DQMLDEz2
他为啥强824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGRtXjyO7Qc
妳啥都没讲824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4nKVfUby4i
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN2QHSlAjsT
也是除主角外最明白的角色824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRoRoPvYPBW
她就拿来爱主角的824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9FPJPO8htd
功能性角色
还有其他许多824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8w5DVnvq7W
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGC2mpyftcR
可以瞧见妳的苦心824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrsvYMPXkBD
我觉得这没必要824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCayWgnGN6v
好的台词提一次够了824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0yzDaQp3Ql
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkOqQ3fSC7Y
我倒嫌设定囉嗦824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTAYXz1pgay
空白很重要824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ71EfuKlzAy
没明白有没明白的好处824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡON5M2P5vh7
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡktVDuq5coW
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfHOBM3xf5D
我还会继续看的824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmMU4FwzLIl
确实好看824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF3WI3rsVQ5
希望你这能写完824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyV7dQprqKP
能放上起点不824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpv4thT22Am
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ08OnNaS0Dn
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsD9p3ZGt8I
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC7XkUl8jzZ
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjD0hGymP2D
感謝你的評文824Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ3wy1LQsm4
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