作者妳好777Please respect copyright.PENANAgFDE4HAF8o
受到妳的邀请777Please respect copyright.PENANAe6UEVUqEOd
稍微看了下这本佩姬777Please respect copyright.PENANAd79zp1IUoW
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法777Please respect copyright.PENANAFMjfmKUuq1
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西777Please respect copyright.PENANAntlV1PTHIv
现世一堆东西777Please respect copyright.PENANA3XT4kzS4cG
其实就很简单一个道理777Please respect copyright.PENANAet2ZChk1sm
主角想要被爱777Please respect copyright.PENANA6S8oD4QwzO
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱777Please respect copyright.PENANApAdqvii47d
男主卢克爱777Please respect copyright.PENANAi0clf4RGnU
主角就爱回去777Please respect copyright.PENANA0JywP96YlP
女主伊莎爱777Please respect copyright.PENANAoPKBl9ajUv
主角就爱回去777Please respect copyright.PENANA7RjX0RhXSz
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理777Please respect copyright.PENANAySxzzZif3G
想要被爱是佩姬的主题777Please respect copyright.PENANAbZgKhoGkQA
主角性别不是问题777Please respect copyright.PENANALYU3fI6Br7
内心冲突不是问题777Please respect copyright.PENANAD7G9UcBndo
主角被爱就迎刃而解777Please respect copyright.PENANAU2HEPSLNtt
看不懂这点整部书就看不了777Please respect copyright.PENANAPh5jzN0vzW
妳的书乏人问津是这道理777Please respect copyright.PENANA3wbIwxZwE0
作者妳说主角口是心非777Please respect copyright.PENANAkGYNRs0T3g
欸我说这不对777Please respect copyright.PENANA9ftIfuyuK3
这明摆着口非心也非777Please respect copyright.PENANA1fMrgmQbM3
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰777Please respect copyright.PENANA22eBzFjX2h
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵777Please respect copyright.PENANAxySbx4FRS0
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜777Please respect copyright.PENANAdPXUYH9hBb
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的777Please respect copyright.PENANA1Sd8QFX28L
为了被爱777Please respect copyright.PENANAcJp2WpOm8y
连原本的性别都不要了777Please respect copyright.PENANA5RFHCHBDqJ
这主角疯的傻的777Please respect copyright.PENANAFHSoacGO9Z
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色777Please respect copyright.PENANAnOo34K6Z90
女主伊莎777Please respect copyright.PENANAjViVmljAdW
单纯的色鬼777Please respect copyright.PENANAmZkk7kxZS2
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性777Please respect copyright.PENANA0x1tG32ItO
黑化可能
艾德兰777Please respect copyright.PENANAY17cF8KKrs
可怜虫阿777Please respect copyright.PENANABiimY7ImRF
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了777Please respect copyright.PENANAYmj7kzNG2C
妳说解释不够777Please respect copyright.PENANAs8ML3prpPE
我到觉得清楚777Please respect copyright.PENANAtlUgKRqQez
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够777Please respect copyright.PENANAeX278DqdNI
他为啥强777Please respect copyright.PENANATP9WkBrwSl
妳啥都没讲777Please respect copyright.PENANAGRRkCWSVxt
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白777Please respect copyright.PENANA6sR9hFQ3RY
也是除主角外最明白的角色777Please respect copyright.PENANABPFZHRWOtJ
她就拿来爱主角的777Please respect copyright.PENANALS4xVojuoI
功能性角色
还有其他许多777Please respect copyright.PENANA1Q4xC95o3I
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多777Please respect copyright.PENANAeE83oD7LTl
可以瞧见妳的苦心777Please respect copyright.PENANAkGbul05sY7
我觉得这没必要777Please respect copyright.PENANAXXVX6UuLhE
好的台词提一次够了777Please respect copyright.PENANAOl27LcAOMP
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨777Please respect copyright.PENANAkZQ2d6S68I
我倒嫌设定囉嗦777Please respect copyright.PENANAZPp5BR0JGR
空白很重要777Please respect copyright.PENANATXA2zx0qSj
没明白有没明白的好处777Please respect copyright.PENANAJzv1i9Bhft
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说777Please respect copyright.PENANAfzOe9PFKBK
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书777Please respect copyright.PENANABJU4VUSgKO
我还会继续看的777Please respect copyright.PENANAPj1pIcNKSR
确实好看777Please respect copyright.PENANA46w29ugq40
希望你这能写完777Please respect copyright.PENANAFgIikcljQA
能放上起点不777Please respect copyright.PENANAqodPX3GSPL
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
777Please respect copyright.PENANAuhkITaWO2i
作者回應:777Please respect copyright.PENANACyvIbhpV1z
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,777Please respect copyright.PENANABUCc8N2XMb
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,777Please respect copyright.PENANAJACQLYTx1V
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞777Please respect copyright.PENANAS6jxFEePb1
感謝你的評文777Please respect copyright.PENANAb6w8hQCKLT
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