作者妳好752Please respect copyright.PENANAMHWGP7O8Tj
受到妳的邀请752Please respect copyright.PENANAXITVSxNMTg
稍微看了下这本佩姬752Please respect copyright.PENANAfseOlr18sJ
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法752Please respect copyright.PENANAE5A8zfStIk
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西752Please respect copyright.PENANAVgKLpUsU3J
现世一堆东西752Please respect copyright.PENANADnXBcYnEnH
其实就很简单一个道理752Please respect copyright.PENANAgVN6q1O3EP
主角想要被爱752Please respect copyright.PENANAbjHqx5cbHn
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱752Please respect copyright.PENANAboBtH6hXdV
男主卢克爱752Please respect copyright.PENANAvCNjKRzhww
主角就爱回去752Please respect copyright.PENANA9AE2MT9RfN
女主伊莎爱752Please respect copyright.PENANAmWscY2ZQfY
主角就爱回去752Please respect copyright.PENANALjWB7h3onO
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理752Please respect copyright.PENANAIkFG3Sr23G
想要被爱是佩姬的主题752Please respect copyright.PENANAOlXZadnE0K
主角性别不是问题752Please respect copyright.PENANAAhpkfY4X2W
内心冲突不是问题752Please respect copyright.PENANAMcCRqjAtWE
主角被爱就迎刃而解752Please respect copyright.PENANAU7fz98tTUx
看不懂这点整部书就看不了752Please respect copyright.PENANA7tgPzdHPp4
妳的书乏人问津是这道理752Please respect copyright.PENANAtO80Woc01L
作者妳说主角口是心非752Please respect copyright.PENANAFy26DDh5Fo
欸我说这不对752Please respect copyright.PENANA4cBQh3TZDX
这明摆着口非心也非752Please respect copyright.PENANAsmQ4BMdOQh
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰752Please respect copyright.PENANAX8gn9JGbTF
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵752Please respect copyright.PENANAujs9QlKnCn
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜752Please respect copyright.PENANAjYN6tTmcsY
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的752Please respect copyright.PENANADLHJrhtOBp
为了被爱752Please respect copyright.PENANAcPc1FGFqtt
连原本的性别都不要了752Please respect copyright.PENANAWzOoyP2C1X
这主角疯的傻的752Please respect copyright.PENANAMhtUDp5Rit
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色752Please respect copyright.PENANAoQbcg5gsmM
女主伊莎752Please respect copyright.PENANAosqmWkO88C
单纯的色鬼752Please respect copyright.PENANAX3y0GmMZFk
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性752Please respect copyright.PENANA8jtiQI7jHs
黑化可能
艾德兰752Please respect copyright.PENANAa4bIFN2uG0
可怜虫阿752Please respect copyright.PENANACO5xDqV7Ad
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了752Please respect copyright.PENANAYuEGN0XXTO
妳说解释不够752Please respect copyright.PENANAEvnmh24ujR
我到觉得清楚752Please respect copyright.PENANAGKBDIxyi4r
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够752Please respect copyright.PENANAVAFuqnGPua
他为啥强752Please respect copyright.PENANAZCeAqJ57C1
妳啥都没讲752Please respect copyright.PENANAlim9AU26wl
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白752Please respect copyright.PENANAMy83E9ZN3c
也是除主角外最明白的角色752Please respect copyright.PENANAW7XNWTM9gV
她就拿来爱主角的752Please respect copyright.PENANAj43RrqpBLc
功能性角色
还有其他许多752Please respect copyright.PENANAEsoYg9wXDw
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多752Please respect copyright.PENANAUImiEg2W8D
可以瞧见妳的苦心752Please respect copyright.PENANAKCNVnvH0mp
我觉得这没必要752Please respect copyright.PENANAITwu2g8AdP
好的台词提一次够了752Please respect copyright.PENANA8Rs1UKrQ9C
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨752Please respect copyright.PENANAw8fMfOnAGv
我倒嫌设定囉嗦752Please respect copyright.PENANAfU85sQwsnk
空白很重要752Please respect copyright.PENANAdf82FUPc3A
没明白有没明白的好处752Please respect copyright.PENANAriuIHkel1N
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说752Please respect copyright.PENANAolertq37P4
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书752Please respect copyright.PENANAIEuZ37Lztm
我还会继续看的752Please respect copyright.PENANAmBBwMqDd7T
确实好看752Please respect copyright.PENANAZ2YfeYAZjs
希望你这能写完752Please respect copyright.PENANASyfSIXLIS0
能放上起点不752Please respect copyright.PENANA8BNHwNewia
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
752Please respect copyright.PENANAllEOCIpJL6
作者回應:752Please respect copyright.PENANADzrO6gWYkk
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,752Please respect copyright.PENANAxNK9DwpXp6
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,752Please respect copyright.PENANA3PB6rxDXAH
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞752Please respect copyright.PENANAizlK3Av7Py
感謝你的評文752Please respect copyright.PENANACIsooJUmA3
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