作者妳好795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzaA1RYUSyI
受到妳的邀请795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGu0If5EeD0
稍微看了下这本佩姬795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyEpejPXGgu
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQVZGyUtG73
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡErYEQyJX1i
现世一堆东西795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFPG0qEGesb
其实就很简单一个道理795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡddAHGwmIOS
主角想要被爱795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyOWYhQC8u8
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1VNpM9m1CT
男主卢克爱795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8XsodzYPCH
主角就爱回去795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡawM8cWPg1R
女主伊莎爱795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYNDfMrehZG
主角就爱回去795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsSrfF0Azek
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhrGnEGlyL9
想要被爱是佩姬的主题795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzeHey5PlSW
主角性别不是问题795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLmqKfx763z
内心冲突不是问题795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLrEODxu1UD
主角被爱就迎刃而解795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUp4Lv5gyq6
看不懂这点整部书就看不了795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhhWiGyExfR
妳的书乏人问津是这道理795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKv0wrUvNsJ
作者妳说主角口是心非795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrOTxyqOJpQ
欸我说这不对795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpki6CRnsnA
这明摆着口非心也非795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSVNXuLu3v6
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm1ZIw6lQgw
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwpP8d2ggIO
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBIk39CyimL
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0q0TgrlAFm
为了被爱795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrhCFrALI1p
连原本的性别都不要了795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1iq6FLeNY8
这主角疯的傻的795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ999ABlZ7DZ
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCeQ0QY8faM
女主伊莎795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEPpU2eBkuA
单纯的色鬼795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC9URyBCefY
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuRjbo53psl
黑化可能
艾德兰795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxKzZpBR3pY
可怜虫阿795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOyxCahc1Gt
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡml6QUY4Wdy
妳说解释不够795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4SpRIjLjIB
我到觉得清楚795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ02ahwPyoBu
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO9sv7oThdZ
他为啥强795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ82vJYeF1dF
妳啥都没讲795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡERkxisKI0y
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0P6tooha0Z
也是除主角外最明白的角色795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHjcdHaoy3c
她就拿来爱主角的795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpki6ocXpCo
功能性角色
还有其他许多795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa7nc3QofiT
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvQLkk6oBKu
可以瞧见妳的苦心795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJBjgXNscJg
我觉得这没必要795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU8rVI4KA9V
好的台词提一次够了795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNeTdmCBQVN
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK78mmPWbCT
我倒嫌设定囉嗦795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbm5yXAbZhi
空白很重要795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC7X3BGjz4U
没明白有没明白的好处795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdH9w4fL0rJ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTmKTjrJIEt
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu9pJCF9jJr
我还会继续看的795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoy8dwvvbwg
确实好看795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQaME0PT2YT
希望你这能写完795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7h3gzuKHcD
能放上起点不795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp7aaXxJkvr
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf337yFmgmC
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMGu4e5UDmR
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEvuGrSw4J7
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOEvapAnE7r
感謝你的評文795Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ00KX8r6Nih
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