作者妳好752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMHWGP7O8Tj
受到妳的邀请752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXITVSxNMTg
稍微看了下这本佩姬752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfseOlr18sJ
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE5A8zfStIk
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVgKLpUsU3J
现世一堆东西752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDnXBcYnEnH
其实就很简单一个道理752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgVN6q1O3EP
主角想要被爱752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbjHqx5cbHn
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡboBtH6hXdV
男主卢克爱752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvCNjKRzhww
主角就爱回去752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9AE2MT9RfN
女主伊莎爱752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmWscY2ZQfY
主角就爱回去752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLjWB7h3onO
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIkFG3Sr23G
想要被爱是佩姬的主题752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOlXZadnE0K
主角性别不是问题752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAhpkfY4X2W
内心冲突不是问题752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMcCRqjAtWE
主角被爱就迎刃而解752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU7fz98tTUx
看不懂这点整部书就看不了752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7tgPzdHPp4
妳的书乏人问津是这道理752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtO80Woc01L
作者妳说主角口是心非752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFy26DDh5Fo
欸我说这不对752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4cBQh3TZDX
这明摆着口非心也非752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsmQ4BMdOQh
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX8gn9JGbTF
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡujs9QlKnCn
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjYN6tTmcsY
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDLHJrhtOBp
为了被爱752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcPc1FGFqtt
连原本的性别都不要了752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWzOoyP2C1X
这主角疯的傻的752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMhtUDp5Rit
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoQbcg5gsmM
女主伊莎752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡosqmWkO88C
单纯的色鬼752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX3y0GmMZFk
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8jtiQI7jHs
黑化可能
艾德兰752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa4bIFN2uG0
可怜虫阿752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCO5xDqV7Ad
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYuEGN0XXTO
妳说解释不够752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEvnmh24ujR
我到觉得清楚752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGKBDIxyi4r
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVAFuqnGPua
他为啥强752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZCeAqJ57C1
妳啥都没讲752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlim9AU26wl
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMy83E9ZN3c
也是除主角外最明白的角色752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW7XNWTM9gV
她就拿来爱主角的752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj43RrqpBLc
功能性角色
还有其他许多752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEsoYg9wXDw
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUImiEg2W8D
可以瞧见妳的苦心752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKCNVnvH0mp
我觉得这没必要752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡITwu2g8AdP
好的台词提一次够了752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Rs1UKrQ9C
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw8fMfOnAGv
我倒嫌设定囉嗦752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfU85sQwsnk
空白很重要752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdf82FUPc3A
没明白有没明白的好处752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡriuIHkel1N
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡolertq37P4
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIEuZ37Lztm
我还会继续看的752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmBBwMqDd7T
确实好看752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ2YfeYAZjs
希望你这能写完752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSyfSIXLIS0
能放上起点不752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8BNHwNewia
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDzrO6gWYkk
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxNK9DwpXp6
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3PB6rxDXAH
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡizlK3Av7Py
感謝你的評文752Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCIsooJUmA3
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