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稍微看了下这本佩姬718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNWdVWxFE8h
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXOHj3phOk9
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWykfzYC77B
现世一堆东西718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGIUY7jBnSA
其实就很简单一个道理718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcuge94IE3a
主角想要被爱718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU37FoYaYZI
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVrYOFm0Goj
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主角就爱回去718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡecRPUiQy07
女主伊莎爱718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrAogWSGl8a
主角就爱回去718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlvJ5WjAKgG
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvJ6a9Zgwbu
想要被爱是佩姬的主题718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh1ji2A7rhK
主角性别不是问题718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkVHFc6Bbun
内心冲突不是问题718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ21zWaNfXDT
主角被爱就迎刃而解718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2fIwelZXBL
看不懂这点整部书就看不了718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf0EFNEhyka
妳的书乏人问津是这道理718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl2x8tR332v
作者妳说主角口是心非718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGynj49LfuL
欸我说这不对718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIUcJJUeWf7
这明摆着口非心也非718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmbP5MuclLC
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWFpZ8ot99A
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL2HB5mPpHR
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCCjuqNi5Fg
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcqxUdjCMu1
为了被爱718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcUgA2oQjK1
连原本的性别都不要了718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCL8ad9UWEa
这主角疯的傻的718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWWIrHlzcDy
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnOiIwPYanE
女主伊莎718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ65lZjdbkKg
单纯的色鬼718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrdTP8c3DxN
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuZitsYaWKt
黑化可能
艾德兰718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbTLZusN0TN
可怜虫阿718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPKWbBJDNhv
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrdha3wvixZ
妳说解释不够718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOxKAeobBkn
我到觉得清楚718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTHJLe5UaQr
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWgusfnOuKi
他为啥强718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbM6VD99wEw
妳啥都没讲718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdwS8tVITyP
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9xCpYYXHfa
也是除主角外最明白的角色718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhCTzgceP7k
她就拿来爱主角的718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0TBXdJXKTV
功能性角色
还有其他许多718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoGnoUjREpY
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeiid8WVwnr
可以瞧见妳的苦心718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpafqy7GZic
我觉得这没必要718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvSPslitURy
好的台词提一次够了718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdoYRHcflKe
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ928LEM9fcQ
我倒嫌设定囉嗦718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqKfVY0SR2r
空白很重要718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3usTcD4Flc
没明白有没明白的好处718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCJSbbuGbo4
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX4kVdBpYsU
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsS7Ra748zM
我还会继续看的718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj7OFZBgMVj
确实好看718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjNUGYLAOfj
希望你这能写完718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnQ1RvIMdR1
能放上起点不718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡobV7My79NR
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWXJgNmN0rT
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW1DuZ0PuTr
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0yDoyyGMiU
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB92JqPI3KF
感謝你的評文718Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOqiUYs2i1z
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