一、請簡單自我介紹，列出喜歡的作品跟創作類型：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYqhR0UMfQw
你好,我是泗楓,從國中開始寫小說至今236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxm1i44g4WX
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創作的類型偏向奇幻日常236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbnxO2s8BBN
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二、請簡述本次活動想提出討論的作品內容角色設定：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXVc6mpGiMY
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劇情重要衝突與阻礙（請提供作品章節連結）：魔王與勇者方是對立 但是勇者方是不道德的一方236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy8NS7a9WFl
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主角目標與成長：找到魔王並協助消滅勇者方236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhLVk5cg1GV
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想提出討論的開車章節（含預備車）：每一篇的18+內容236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiBLeqBiyAd
自覺開車不順的點（整體論，非特定章節）：開起來感覺像是傳動軸有問題 卡卡的 說不上來哪裡有問題236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnHs6Qda6Fc
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三、你是下面哪個類型的車手？236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzYH6Ur58GO
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◎ 有開車但覺得不太順暢的新米車手236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPMvviufauf
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原本想寫的車但沒開成的篇幅，請寫300字概念大綱，236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHmRN1FrUKL
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原版想加入開車場景的篇幅擴寫，一千字起跳。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkbzv611QNl
突然一陣風括起，我看克萊娜微微顫抖的肩膀，將他們給我穿的西裝外套脫下給她披上，她有些訝異的看了看我後，便將外套往內拉包裹住自己說：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvTdVetyidy
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「謝謝你勇者大人，您真的很溫柔呢。召喚到您真的是我國最大的福祉。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcDVl6jNKZG
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「克萊娜小姐......」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0hCsOOYiD6
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「勇者......克里斯大人。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNhaJO9N0cp
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我輕輕扶起她的下巴，慢慢地親吻她濕潤朱紅的唇。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm2MAoVcnVN
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「嗯，克里斯大人，您下午說的事情......嗯啾，我們去房間說吧。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQDw7QifdPA
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我一邊品嘗著她柔嫩且溫潤的雙唇，一邊將她抱起從一旁小道走回我的房間，將門關上以及窗簾拉上後，我便將她放在床上。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3yC2qLzjGJ
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「克里斯......大人，姆嗯，等我，阿恩～」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOq0DF0DSp6
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「沒事，我幫妳脫吧。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVANyNpcfkq
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我將自己的衣服褲子瞬間解開脫掉後，便上到了床，一邊持續的親吻一邊利索的將她的禮服後的拉鍊往下拉，此時她傲人的雙胸挾帶著兩朵白峰上的紅暈及小巧紅潤的尖頭。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj3R8B3kSlh
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看到後我便順勢的從她白皙的頸部一挑逗至她敏感且柔潤的雙胸。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZhAS8jPN0a
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「啊～克里斯大人，乳頭不可以，嗯......啊嗯，不可以咬啦～」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVVluRdRFFe
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用門牙輕輕的左右咬著她並且持續像是吸卡住珍珠的粗吸管一樣用力，一隻手搓揉另一球之外，另一隻手緩緩的伸到她敏感且似乎剛剛有處理過、摸上去還有些渣人的陰毛處。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPLwxRjWzP5
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「啊嗯，這樣吸不會有母乳的～，除非......」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvffx6r4dps
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她很大方的打開了大腿，我的手也停在了她的小穴門口，她的手撐著她的大腿，嬌喘的說道：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7dbh6ly7yB
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「克里斯大人能把你雄偉的肉棒放入這個淫亂的小穴裡......」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡze3sfazzVQ
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「嗯？我沒有聽清楚妳的需求喔，我沒有打算讓妳懷上我的小孩耶，我只想吸這對該死又舒服的奶子，妳最好在詳細的描述一下妳的需求比較好喔。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1AcRWdJtwA
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我撐起身子，看著她嬌喘且淫亂的表情，我笑著一邊說一邊用早已勃起很久的肉棒貼近她的肉穴附近來回的轉，就是不插入。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQsSDyWhRL8
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看著她似乎很著急但是也不知道要說些甚麼，而她要說話時我便一嘴親住她的唇，並且將舌頭粗暴的伸進她的嘴裡一直攪和著。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ33le1YSVL
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「嗚嗯......啾......哈啊......哈啊嗯～克里蘇.....大人......嗚嗯！啾.......嗚啾......哈啊哈......克利斯大人，我.......我......嗯～」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJgfMNdxRLH
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「妳不說清楚我怎麼知道妳要做甚麼呢？克萊娜小姐？」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpn4hg9RTJm
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我伸著蛇頭緩緩的離開，並從她的舌上拉出一條長長的細絲，她像是失了神的說：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡByK0WHp2ni
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「克里斯大人......您真的......很厲害呢......人家已經......去了好幾次......明明都還沒插入......嗯嗯～克里斯大人，您的手指！啊嗯～～」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxhy90BSn5T
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「是喔？我確認看看？」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe02FNu2mMy
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沒等她說完我便將兩隻手指緩緩的滑入她的肉穴之中，然後在裏頭一上一下的往前撫摸著。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5UW7Ljii77
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「等一下克里斯大人，我才剛去，啊嗯！那裡！不行！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUb6GUhtZwa
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突然食指碰到一個點，她便叫了出來，並且噴流出很多透明色的液體。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2JBxtjpbbg
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「齁齁～看來是被我找到了喔～克萊娜小姐～」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ3XrAe3q7M
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我挪到她小穴的前方，撐開她的大腿，用肉棒抵著她的肉穴門口說道：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpwmYsqXGmB
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「克萊娜小姐～我～進來囉～」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSGAKnKIwx8
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「等......等一下克里斯大......喔嗯！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKx0eTSX4Lw
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我一口氣往裡面一頂，龜頭的感覺是頂到了一個肉壁的感覺，但是我的肉棒還有一些些在外面。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHzraH75PCh
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「嗯～看來是高潮到子宮下垂了，這該怎麼辦才好啊克萊娜小姐？」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfft1S4XQbc
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「啊嗯......克里斯先生，我想歇會兒可以.....姆嗯！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVBU6wb3Hi0
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「當然是不行啊，妳要幫我想想看怎麼讓我的老二呆在妳的小淫穴裡，不然我的老二露出來的部分可沒地方擺啊！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5AsJMgXyv2
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我一邊說一邊抽插著，並且在剛剛我摸到她敏感的部位我還適時地用龜頭邊的皺褶去頂，她的表情從原本很享受變得全身無力，現在的她已經是成大自行躺在床上，像是洩了氣的人偶一般。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQyw2lOhNEr
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「欸妳這樣我都還沒玩夠妳就坍了，不行，得想想辦法。門外的女僕會治癒術的進來一下好嗎？」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN40Ax7t2bc
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一個看上去年紀約二十初的女僕小姐走進來，淡定的說：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXGsjVgl2a
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「請問有何吩咐？勇者大人？」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFNSVXxrpLt
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「給克萊娜小姐上治癒或是回復術，她失神了。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKqe96bGlRG
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「等......等一」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxv14icuSf5
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克萊娜似乎想說甚麼，我便將她抱起，呈互相對坐的姿勢，我抱著轉向女僕說：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXsJLu784ih
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「ＯＫ，可以連我都一起放喔。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrHxpjHSwPd
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「好的，大治癒術！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6j0pVukGde
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施展完後，我感覺剛剛因為跳舞跟對克萊娜前面的動作所耗的體力都全部恢復，而我也發現克萊娜正緊緊的抱著我，並且在床上的腿還努力的撐著，似乎很怕一失去支點就會被頂穿的感覺。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTdy8W2lt2i
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「克萊娜，我覺得我們似乎很合得來耶，妳的肉穴、胸跟唇真的都超棒的。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNUFMGrnwVI
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「是......是嗎？謝謝勇者大人的愛戴，但是我身為大祭師，明天還有一些公事需要處理，所以今天就先這......等等克利斯大人，現在不可以起身！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdq9cAGohoX
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我抱著她站了起來，緩緩移動到窗台旁的牆壁，我用手抵著她兩隻腳跨著的地方，她則是緊緊的抱著我說道：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSXbDrzRaiZ
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「克里斯大人！拜託您我想要休息，啊嗯啊嗯～啊嗯，嗚嗯.......啾嗯......哈啊......克里斯.......大人......不要......拜託您.......」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXVSwOIGfN3
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我一邊抽插著她一邊將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡不斷攪弄。236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5BqjMfAk6E
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最後，我感覺要射出來前，我坐回床上，她的腳正想要放在床上時，我便連她的腳跟身體一同抱住，她用失神又詫異的表情看著我時，我便輕輕的在她耳邊說：236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ3DpNfkbdD
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「妳想要的寶寶汁來囉，不要漏接了。」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEIEoUzlCWD
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「等等，現在射的話我會.......嗚啾嗯！」236Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe23K0OSiBu
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