一、請簡單自我介紹，列出喜歡的作品跟創作類型：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwvdTsOf3s9
你好,我是泗楓,從國中開始寫小說至今252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡglp1mus2e4
目前喜歡的作品是男子高中生的日常252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbYrHpl0kBR
創作的類型偏向奇幻日常252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYekPlNk4Se
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二、請簡述本次活動想提出討論的作品內容角色設定：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9HtMa1EMgF
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劇情重要衝突與阻礙（請提供作品章節連結）：魔王與勇者方是對立 但是勇者方是不道德的一方252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7gCgLBvRJv
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主角目標與成長：找到魔王並協助消滅勇者方252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBCwRlgYBLj
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想提出討論的開車章節（含預備車）：每一篇的18+內容252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFiJVXqEbuO
自覺開車不順的點（整體論，非特定章節）：開起來感覺像是傳動軸有問題 卡卡的 說不上來哪裡有問題252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGoAc61d864
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三、你是下面哪個類型的車手？252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzbRyANK9mK
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◎ 有開車但覺得不太順暢的新米車手252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLuuJ7beti0
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原本想寫的車但沒開成的篇幅，請寫300字概念大綱，252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHeEkBwVmJL
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原版想加入開車場景的篇幅擴寫，一千字起跳。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM2wTJnJxge
突然一陣風括起，我看克萊娜微微顫抖的肩膀，將他們給我穿的西裝外套脫下給她披上，她有些訝異的看了看我後，便將外套往內拉包裹住自己說：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfQ5OMr7UWk
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「謝謝你勇者大人，您真的很溫柔呢。召喚到您真的是我國最大的福祉。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWBTm3VYhw1
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「克萊娜小姐......」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ76SPajq1YA
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「勇者......克里斯大人。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ8cW8vD6HA
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我輕輕扶起她的下巴，慢慢地親吻她濕潤朱紅的唇。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2iXyUGTtHC
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「嗯，克里斯大人，您下午說的事情......嗯啾，我們去房間說吧。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡycFCV5ckVv
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我一邊品嘗著她柔嫩且溫潤的雙唇，一邊將她抱起從一旁小道走回我的房間，將門關上以及窗簾拉上後，我便將她放在床上。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlbrGUWOHyl
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「克里斯......大人，姆嗯，等我，阿恩～」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7IktnqOJcb
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「沒事，我幫妳脫吧。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMww4vt6A6h
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我將自己的衣服褲子瞬間解開脫掉後，便上到了床，一邊持續的親吻一邊利索的將她的禮服後的拉鍊往下拉，此時她傲人的雙胸挾帶著兩朵白峰上的紅暈及小巧紅潤的尖頭。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAMC2fLSleL
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看到後我便順勢的從她白皙的頸部一挑逗至她敏感且柔潤的雙胸。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZZSwILCVnl
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「啊～克里斯大人，乳頭不可以，嗯......啊嗯，不可以咬啦～」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgdgr29HgrH
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用門牙輕輕的左右咬著她並且持續像是吸卡住珍珠的粗吸管一樣用力，一隻手搓揉另一球之外，另一隻手緩緩的伸到她敏感且似乎剛剛有處理過、摸上去還有些渣人的陰毛處。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm50B9ylzFt
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「啊嗯，這樣吸不會有母乳的～，除非......」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfcfrEAjAwo
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她很大方的打開了大腿，我的手也停在了她的小穴門口，她的手撐著她的大腿，嬌喘的說道：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNbUjIoc22Z
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「克里斯大人能把你雄偉的肉棒放入這個淫亂的小穴裡......」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqCbS6toLNK
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「嗯？我沒有聽清楚妳的需求喔，我沒有打算讓妳懷上我的小孩耶，我只想吸這對該死又舒服的奶子，妳最好在詳細的描述一下妳的需求比較好喔。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ3lAggzSbb
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我撐起身子，看著她嬌喘且淫亂的表情，我笑著一邊說一邊用早已勃起很久的肉棒貼近她的肉穴附近來回的轉，就是不插入。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNzKYiInxnu
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看著她似乎很著急但是也不知道要說些甚麼，而她要說話時我便一嘴親住她的唇，並且將舌頭粗暴的伸進她的嘴裡一直攪和著。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGbx8gmx2iA
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「嗚嗯......啾......哈啊......哈啊嗯～克里蘇.....大人......嗚嗯！啾.......嗚啾......哈啊哈......克利斯大人，我.......我......嗯～」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh3NgZ6glFu
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「妳不說清楚我怎麼知道妳要做甚麼呢？克萊娜小姐？」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8RRVpL3zRh
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我伸著蛇頭緩緩的離開，並從她的舌上拉出一條長長的細絲，她像是失了神的說：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDgoGTy0pKv
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「克里斯大人......您真的......很厲害呢......人家已經......去了好幾次......明明都還沒插入......嗯嗯～克里斯大人，您的手指！啊嗯～～」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhYH85s1yjR
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「是喔？我確認看看？」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYi0jo3gPXm
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沒等她說完我便將兩隻手指緩緩的滑入她的肉穴之中，然後在裏頭一上一下的往前撫摸著。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTC1T0AwseA
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「等一下克里斯大人，我才剛去，啊嗯！那裡！不行！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsuabo9p7eQ
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突然食指碰到一個點，她便叫了出來，並且噴流出很多透明色的液體。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcnXDeJkPv0
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「齁齁～看來是被我找到了喔～克萊娜小姐～」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqRAg9IWRCY
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我挪到她小穴的前方，撐開她的大腿，用肉棒抵著她的肉穴門口說道：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo9DC5PWobq
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「克萊娜小姐～我～進來囉～」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYLa0Ru7F1X
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「等......等一下克里斯大......喔嗯！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡobaPfajCYR
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我一口氣往裡面一頂，龜頭的感覺是頂到了一個肉壁的感覺，但是我的肉棒還有一些些在外面。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCEpS0QfrN8
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「嗯～看來是高潮到子宮下垂了，這該怎麼辦才好啊克萊娜小姐？」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpU0LQXb80A
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「啊嗯......克里斯先生，我想歇會兒可以.....姆嗯！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR6cDeeHPMO
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「當然是不行啊，妳要幫我想想看怎麼讓我的老二呆在妳的小淫穴裡，不然我的老二露出來的部分可沒地方擺啊！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsCqgHbEpIW
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我一邊說一邊抽插著，並且在剛剛我摸到她敏感的部位我還適時地用龜頭邊的皺褶去頂，她的表情從原本很享受變得全身無力，現在的她已經是成大自行躺在床上，像是洩了氣的人偶一般。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw7QfESPV4v
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「欸妳這樣我都還沒玩夠妳就坍了，不行，得想想辦法。門外的女僕會治癒術的進來一下好嗎？」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡznE0nhxnER
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一個看上去年紀約二十初的女僕小姐走進來，淡定的說：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfzAhuTK9zv
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「請問有何吩咐？勇者大人？」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsrL2fEE605
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「給克萊娜小姐上治癒或是回復術，她失神了。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOJUkhP09Gl
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「等......等一」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4p4rf9RMEK
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克萊娜似乎想說甚麼，我便將她抱起，呈互相對坐的姿勢，我抱著轉向女僕說：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCeWaOQigsa
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「ＯＫ，可以連我都一起放喔。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH4GLcWDA46
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「好的，大治癒術！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRj4VUiQfDx
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施展完後，我感覺剛剛因為跳舞跟對克萊娜前面的動作所耗的體力都全部恢復，而我也發現克萊娜正緊緊的抱著我，並且在床上的腿還努力的撐著，似乎很怕一失去支點就會被頂穿的感覺。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXeZr8qCVSk
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「克萊娜，我覺得我們似乎很合得來耶，妳的肉穴、胸跟唇真的都超棒的。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7M7ZGshquz
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「是......是嗎？謝謝勇者大人的愛戴，但是我身為大祭師，明天還有一些公事需要處理，所以今天就先這......等等克利斯大人，現在不可以起身！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ70rTEj61Qi
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我抱著她站了起來，緩緩移動到窗台旁的牆壁，我用手抵著她兩隻腳跨著的地方，她則是緊緊的抱著我說道：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm3JOSgtMDI
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「克里斯大人！拜託您我想要休息，啊嗯啊嗯～啊嗯，嗚嗯.......啾嗯......哈啊......克里斯.......大人......不要......拜託您.......」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4YauyPyGJx
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我一邊抽插著她一邊將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡不斷攪弄。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrCY4tqrbvh
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最後，我感覺要射出來前，我坐回床上，她的腳正想要放在床上時，我便連她的腳跟身體一同抱住，她用失神又詫異的表情看著我時，我便輕輕的在她耳邊說：252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2kuhxnNR44
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「妳想要的寶寶汁來囉，不要漏接了。」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYDHxkv4KyM
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「等等，現在射的話我會.......嗚啾嗯！」252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiuARNz7LiN
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我用力的往她子宮一頂，精子就像尿急憋了五分鐘一樣找到廁所時用力尿出來的感覺樣，然後我再她說完前便再次將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡，我看著她的表情從失神到整個眼球都翻白了過去。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN2bKZubrdh
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放下她後，將老二拔出來時，小穴因為內外壓力差的關係把一部份的精子吐了出來。我看到這個景象後，便嘆了口氣。252Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVAVigdZlDS
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