Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡxfRbCCPYjN 維尼

"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡ49HVSYwDvl 維尼

"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡHFWvhFkMZi 維尼

"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡpiz0bv1t8m 維尼

"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡKiMlpNgbnQ 維尼

"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡTlihyXJkFB 維尼

"By all means."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡVHVL8dCh3d 維尼

"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡTTxeKnhhvn 維尼

"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡOOL3CYJg1n 維尼

"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡVqw18QqUvp 維尼

"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡQqnxoi2xys 維尼

"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡErNW86uUxp 維尼

"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1171ＰＥＮＡＮＡYIu5cUcGff 維尼

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