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No Plagiarism!Hh2ZplOv7HNu3CBgDkaUposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡSkTUQ2ByE8 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡM3MotZy6YH 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡbUQSxWsp6h 維尼
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"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡh1Ynzp7mvK 維尼
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"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡK4QFku8nlf 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡClQq67fhUU 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1110ＰＥＮＡＮＡRGe9wJkQya 維尼
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