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No Plagiarism!IdRHPp59e9J5bk5GOuMCposted on PENANA Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1032PENANAiTLk6euhI2 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1032PENANAPqb3blxP7u 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1032PENANA8EURnMH9Ec 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1032PENANA6aKY8icKXA 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1032PENANATtY4sxeBOb 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1032PENANAqoGnosYXLM 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1032PENANAvMg6eiSHZi 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1032PENANAIsjkw6ms9H 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1032PENANAIiK8Bjcf4R 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1032PENANACa6sU7QENG 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1032PENANAlYCYOQJvJQ 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1032PENANA4Br2JZ5Uq3 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1032PENANA9PJgfH16I8 維尼
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