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No Plagiarism!RYByxCvlNYuE8qa1r1c1posted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡTuU1PtRsW0 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡEmlvRy0eZP 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡgWXcy21Xfi 維尼
"I'll be fine."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡE7610mIPkW 維尼
"If you say so."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡdhP5cMQuC5 維尼
"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡcFnRsuKO6G 維尼
"By all means."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡmiVw0IBKld 維尼
"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1P5AKTH7Qg 維尼
"I'll do my best."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡJVNbgiLgjj 維尼
"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4uWbJvihnR 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡxQMj95pqpM 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡVItsgcaOUd 維尼
"I trusted you, and you lied to me."8964 copyright protection1140ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6rZvAoPKcl 維尼
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