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No Plagiarism!FM2IoaycQt6YsV5RKm9Dposted on PＥNAＮＡ Chapter 1.03: September 20, 20158964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4DYruSHRRh 維尼
"I've finished reading your manuscript."8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡsR5d744ptS 維尼
"Really? Weren't you going to study for your geophysics test tomorrow?"8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0qBvrBSkw2 維尼
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"Don't you want to hear what I think of your story?"8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9blUzCgIcn 維尼
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"I agree with Susy. The writing style is too lighthearted for the actual story. You should darken the tone."8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡEk7sX6jasw 維尼
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"Also—I think her assassin friend's character is a tad underdeveloped. He has so much potential as a character."8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1XAIA31wRg 維尼
"I'll look into that. Thanks, Eru."8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡjORbIYhI6K 維尼
"Anytime, Kenny. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to study for that test tomorrow."8964 copyright protection1113ＰＥＮＡＮＡAJwX0ItiYA 維尼
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