Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7Vtb5TPI54
As I did with my previous contest, I’m going to be adding comments to each submission.313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVGLBT8gPif
Grammar: 5 points313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYwvCNyJtL5
Creativity: 10 points313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsq7FTVspNm
Emotion: 5 points313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdaYE9HW3iH
Complying with the rules: 5 points
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ09YTOdVYT1
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaD01vF4EpL
#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq71TCoZorA
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLz1BNTKIB6
Total: 20.5 pts
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN7COzkGduI
#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDBPTrUfc2J
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6yLcIRWpdV
Total: 19 pts
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhcDhH3btHP
#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdBmtcC3Ach
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡapYDQfWmUh
Total: 23.5 pts
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhISCPP867t
#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6qFGuz0PMV
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4vQK43QtHo
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDhYfyNFdYp
Total: 20 pts
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYZKRVrfz7s
#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNCjeZdlISg
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbpwGWAuxzD
Total: 21 pts313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWXAyYBJQJX
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHPZ8K6Rbio
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUuLZbzKw2I
Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjwOUM6C4RV
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrFaHwxRBPN
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFZTikn94W6
Never stop writing,
Julia313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjU3BRidBWB
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF9CzjelV4V
313Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDceHzZPyaS
