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第六屆《假如DSE作文不限時》故事比賽後記

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May 28, 2024

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2948236996655d62b8c1ad6.81336428-45239.png 大家好，我是GingerBean 薑豆。

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作品《羚羊》在這邊~

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終於、終於趕上了！大概是在一個月前想著要參加這次第六屆《假如DSE作文不限時》故事比賽，然後因為一籃子因素影響，再加上故事劇情和結局都一改再改，結果就是拖到死線前幾天才正式完成。

254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh0cJ2Brvva

關於承諾，最近我有很深感受。簡單而言，情況就是別人答應過我的事，最終沒能做到之餘，更甚的是整個人也消失不見。

既然做不到，或者不確定能否做到，一開始就不要隨口答應啊。

結果換來的是失落、失望，以及絕望，讓我不再相信任何人。

可是，一個人做錯了，等於整個世界同樣壞透了嗎？

我知道不是的，世界的確很壞，也許有99%壞了（？）聽起來確實很糟糕，但同時代表著有1%的人和事是美好的。

為了那渺小的1%，就算我還會怕，還會擔心同樣事情再次發生，我仍然希望我有能力再一次相信。

我選擇相信。

這就是《羚羊》的故事。

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為甚麼會名為《羚羊》呢？原因超級簡單，就是因為DSE其中一個指定人物名稱為「幼羚」，我覺得這有點兒老套嘛，於是只保留了「羚」單字，再來中間情節提到了遇見羚羊，故事結局以生物本能作終結。

我想這算不上甚麼新穎的聯想，但感覺也挺適合的，於是決定採用了。

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至於以「承諾」為主題的羚羊，為甚麼會是一篇有年齡差的愛情故事呢？

提起「承諾」，我首先想到的是一輩子的承諾，亦即是婚姻。

如果一段關係當中，二人出現了年紀差，到底有沒有可能一起走下去呢？

男方比女方年長，這倒是不難想像，因此這篇故事便嘗試以女方較年長為主軸。

個人認為，真愛絕對不受年齡限制，前提是較年輕一方的心智得要成熟一點，二人才有可能順利溝通吧。

羚與家寶互相許下承諾的方式，不是親吻而是擊掌high five，那是因為近來聽的日文歌曲當中常常有ハイタッチ(hi-touch)一詞，聽起來很有趣很有活力，我喜歡這詞語，因而選了這方式作為他們二人獨特的溝通方法。

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這次《羚羊》的後記大概就是這樣，我要回去~~痛苦地~~加速寫BLACK BOX了，再見~

感謝各位！！！٩(✿∂‿∂✿)۶

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去年的DSE創挑作品：一次令我百感交集的聚餐：美食與美食家

P.S.到底上年腦袋是出了甚麼毛病，才會寫出這篇作品來呢？

~~真想稱讚一下自己~~(⊙ꇴ⊙)

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