這篇其實是用來參加哈皮舉辦的活動比賽而寫的！287Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Y5JVTFdNM
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有關比賽的評語，很遺憾當天有事外出忙，沒辦法聽到評審的評語。
然後找到了評分的圖287Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ570K2ltEpl
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老實說，要改進的地方不少……
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