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(from a guitarist/songwriter)

feverdreamwriting

Apr 21, 2023

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I gathered every puzzle piece

put together what I needed

to my surprise you left, never to apologize

(climax) you told me "not a big deal"

I rebelled and broke up your seal

not once did I get to cry

no time to cry (chorus transition)

I loved you, I still do

left me to drown in "something new"

and it's all your fault (fault)

attached myself, "I won't let go"

but I can't stand this #### no more

and it's all your fault (fault)

(chorus end)

bottle up the demons in my head

trying hard to put myself to bed

your image haunting my mind

I let you take over my dreams

my body's tearing at the seams

I'll never get to cry

no time to cry (chorus transition)

(CHORUS)

(falling notes)

you never said goodbye (softly)

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