靜倚窗邊，天清夜、一杯三酉。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNfwHk5ITC9
斟玉液、引河金瀑，順流滿斗。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡonDlCuGMP6
醞釀醍醐醲醥酌，淘澄混沌溫淳酒。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYv1OEcqQnY
水晶醆、醁映見南冥，尋垂柳。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCVK19ckscC
旗居左，廚處右。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4BPnTGudEF
醺陋室，薰迂叟。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIQpg8Dl2Li
望穹蒼渺渺，驀然抬首。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡokpb3We2HZ
朱雀翱翔離故土，白頭酩酊思知友。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLONLxll1VQ
醒醉間、抱朗月長終，隨風走。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIAfOH4Ck2s
註：465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEQR5qYKG3E
[1] 三酉：酒。因酒字是三點水與酉字組合而成，故稱三酉為「酒」。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnraGlUJ7xc
[2] 醞釀：製酒。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp6KExQOVSx
[3] 醍醐：美酒。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvvnnj8kcBe
[4] 醲：酒味醇厚。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXN8HjomUuC
[5] 醥：酒清。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEy6XGGnAXA
[6] 淘澄：將物品放在水中淘洗澄澱，以除去雜質。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf411xGtwg4
[7] 混沌：模糊不清的狀態。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA4VDw16RHW
[8] 溫淳：滋味濃厚。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡscyDgmLtlU
[9] 醆：酒器、酒杯。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSl15JyvPNV
[10] 醁：美酒。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPLIseU3In4
[11] 冥：幽暗處。這裏指夜空。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzBn5t9wli0
[12] 垂柳：夜空中的柳宿，亦暗指依依之情。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbVssgYGkXa
[13] 旗：酒旗星官，屬柳宿。古人幻想是酒館外以作招徠的旗幟，或造酒之官。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdSrmlnkZ6y
[14] 廚：外廚星官，屬鬼宿。古人幻想是皇宮外的廚房。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc9VlAtEq0d
[15] 醺：感染、暈染。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4RWazguhK6
[16] 陋室：簡陋的房子。唐．劉禹錫《陋室銘》：「斯是陋室，惟吾德馨。」465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP9FqYKr2xs
[17] 迂叟：迂拙的老人。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk0laloR7sm
[18] 酩酊：飲酒大醉的樣子。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcp5xmvO8si
[19] 知友：知心的好朋友。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH7O8ci0CN2
[20] 抱朗月長終：宋．蘇軾《前赤壁賦》：「挾飛仙以遨遊，抱眀月而長終。」465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY8GBSuuWbR
賞析：465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRuVn5NNsLf
柳宿是二十八宿中，南方朱雀七宿之一，古人的幻想中，柳宿位於朱雀的頭部，形似垂柳的八星就是朱雀的鳥喙，同時，亦包括酒旗星官，象徵造酒之官，故有醞釀醍醐之句。垂柳的另一邊，則是屬於鬼宿的星官，外廚。有酒有食物有垂柳作風景，就成為了我這首詞的創作靈感。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Myw5zRexG
一個人在寂靜的夜晚，自斟自飲，自有一番感觸。斟着美酒，看其由瓶中緩緩順流而水，注入杯中，再慢慢趨於靜止。澄清的酒面，由混沌而變清，倒映着夜空的星宿，方便我尋找南天夜空中柳宿的蹤影。柳在傳統文學中暗喻依依之情，便以之起興。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8VJ0xBwOE6
剛好柳的左右有酒有食物，跟我一樣，有酒有肉，酒肉之香，醺醉陋室，薰陶我這迂拙老人。我驀然仰首，望向渺渺穹蒼，只見天上的朱雀翱翔天際，飛離故土南天；我這個白頭老人則酩酊大醉，思念着以往的知心好友。就在這醒醉之間，我就如朱雀一般隨風而走，仿傚蘇東坡抱明月而長終。465Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWRZtHQbSFh
