大家好:283Please respect copyright.PENANANCMYUXDqzs
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好的小說通常會跟詩詞一樣,散發一種韻味,吸引讀者閱讀。283Please respect copyright.PENANAxwoL3R83ps
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那該怎麼樣才能營造出這樣的韻味呢?283Please respect copyright.PENANAwEWcKyVqlt
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根據多年的閱讀與寫作觀察,我發現具有韻味的小說一定是文意通順,句子精簡好讀!而要做到這樣的韻味,首先要修掉習慣性的贅詞以及同義詞語。這樣做可以使句子通順易讀,進入讀者心靈的力道也會更直接!283Please respect copyright.PENANAEQgTkHEmfW
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聽到或者看到這裡,也許您會疑惑那些詞語是需要進行修改或者刪除的?283Please respect copyright.PENANAwBm654mdnJ
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我的心得是除了平日多閱讀有助修辭外,最簡單的辦法是您其實可以透過朗讀的方式去修改自己的文章。只要是朗讀起來有卡卡些微不順之處都是可能需要修改的地方喔!283Please respect copyright.PENANAqlsBbN3BiH
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這就是今天與大家分享的寫作心得。希望能幫助到對修辭有疑惑的朋友!感謝大家今天的收看與收聽。謝謝大家。283Please respect copyright.PENANAhBTAQeWDe5