No Plagiarism!oCqTTUzSUC8zWoF83UVLposted on PENANA 未看先說:8964 copyright protection333PENANAonAWNUDdjD 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAvzpISsk3Tu
8964 copyright protection333PENANA77KolnCSPz 維尼
這是我指定心得的最後一篇,以後大概也不會有人指定。畢竟,這種閱讀記錄似的心得,應該沒多少人會要。扯遠了……我本來是想說帆帆的。8964 copyright protection333PENANAPpCXynuiH0 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAU4wQXjuXtN
8964 copyright protection333PENANAUCyNDiHjDm 維尼
我認識帆帆的時候是跟蝦蝦一起,也不知道是不是因為這樣、我老覺得她們像雙胞胎,而且是感情很好的雙胞胎。聽說她們還有一起寫文?有時間去翻來看,最近忙著寫中秋賀文——不是小熊那個。8964 copyright protection333PENANAmteq8zimP8 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAKkMV3EhKkM
8964 copyright protection333PENANAoxLeDMxMs6 維尼
說到中秋賀文,它就是心得晚的元凶!最近趕它、差點忘記我心得還沒寫。我記得“離離”也還沒寫完,今天應該能寫完這篇吧?希望。8964 copyright protection333PENANAyTe7W4Mexu 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAlTQRD3n87s
8964 copyright protection333PENANAZQwC6QVwf2 維尼
8964 copyright protection333PENANAiM0famRT7w 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANA2s2IAHKY0Q
8964 copyright protection333PENANARiaMfRseZr 維尼
《離離》——逆水千帆(#1~10,只有十篇、應該很快?)8964 copyright protection333PENANAcNgvraD0JJ 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANALZRxarOstr
8964 copyright protection333PENANAUw5M2iJr7n 維尼
簡介:還沒看內文時的想法——我比較喜歡《予良辰》8964 copyright protection333PENANAP462o8pwI7 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAsI6GudN1Dw
8964 copyright protection333PENANASCh3gtCXtp 維尼
#1:個給是什麼?8964 copyright protection333PENANA0LvNWlAZgh 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAWCIbrbyM0f
8964 copyright protection333PENANADzHjAW9hMy 維尼
小情侶?我以為只是要轉學那個的損友。8964 copyright protection333PENANA1LTffUk52a 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAzXFA91jQx0
8964 copyright protection333PENANAK0KkoqDHHm 維尼
跪在大腿兩側……一個人怎麼跪兩個地方?(我後來想了想,是跨跪嗎?)8964 copyright protection333PENANASgrhVdRDYl 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANABE1rHHuIGb
8964 copyright protection333PENANAFKdw2JowoZ 維尼
“他們的吻綿長而深情”<=我感覺像少年也回應了8964 copyright protection333PENANAysK4dcw3a4 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAY9X32QkTBB
8964 copyright protection333PENANA8xSZySUris 維尼
#2:……開頭我就想吐槽,既然說了陽光溫暖、用“刺眼”好像怪怪的?刺眼不療癒吧?8964 copyright protection333PENANADUHdaMWUoQ 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAhbwNdG5U7V
8964 copyright protection333PENANATscbEcBm1W 維尼
南城是雨城?一個地方應該不至於氣候相差太多,所以是兩個地方?轉學順便搬家?8964 copyright protection333PENANAj0JQE8IBBS 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAr7XrHjUC5b
8964 copyright protection333PENANAPZU39jiLNf 維尼
大衣那句好長,會斷氣。8964 copyright protection333PENANAesRE8Ui7lP 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAwjK52pvP0p
8964 copyright protection333PENANA1O1NIo9kkR 維尼
……邊走邊玩手機算中二病?8964 copyright protection333PENANAkerIvlUGOg 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANApCTFzD8xyy
8964 copyright protection333PENANAIBVA9MrFsy 維尼
什麼是“很抓馬”?8964 copyright protection333PENANAN2cm4W8enQ 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANA75EG6pvLVP
8964 copyright protection333PENANAMqqV8NzJFi 維尼
為什麼要固定治療+吃藥?前面沒說過啊?8964 copyright protection333PENANA4IgoCglWxJ 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAHgQ71S5yHO
8964 copyright protection333PENANAPnLS0Wr3ms 維尼
#3:溫暖不定的陰霾……?可以解釋一下意思嗎?8964 copyright protection333PENANAwb0KjYEsvt 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAJ1BdmJ4kTO
8964 copyright protection333PENANAug5cIlEmFm 維尼
很×臉?我猜是很不要臉,可是這是國文課嗎?字不懂、意思也不懂,理解錯怎麼辦?8964 copyright protection333PENANARbjqhF2RTZ 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAxGIRmRhE1e
8964 copyright protection333PENANAazPBnxj0kd 維尼
會考<=非台灣地區不好理解吧?8964 copyright protection333PENANAXtudO8QvzX 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANA361DO7poHl
8964 copyright protection333PENANAknAPxPqJAZ 維尼
#4:(舉手)請服務生分開醬料是為了大白鯊?(這個比較好記)可是他們認識不到一天吧?會不會太了解了?8964 copyright protection333PENANAhPbAhUv3SN 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAYRPtfs3EBp
8964 copyright protection333PENANAbQEh8636a6 維尼
#5:一來就是心聲?阿晨是誰?小勞是什麼?8964 copyright protection333PENANAdNf2OciIWI 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANARMZ05fdrHj
8964 copyright protection333PENANAED0VmKbesd 維尼
咦?是訊息啊?可是,是誰給誰啊?(我那段看完才搞清楚誰傳給誰,順便搞清楚三個人關係)8964 copyright protection333PENANAz1yfmIRrEO 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAVi7TH3Pg3z
8964 copyright protection333PENANApC5GgiSJnY 維尼
權烯?這又是誰?8964 copyright protection333PENANAT7WnIlJnOI 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANA4GZu8U7L0X
8964 copyright protection333PENANA2RiGgXVMnl 維尼
口嗨是什麼?又一對男男?這是現代校園、沒私設吧?男男頻率會不會偏高了?正常不是應該男女?8964 copyright protection333PENANA3blioMVeHC 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANA7ercULlgCE
8964 copyright protection333PENANArksHjpRmTG 維尼
跳電那個……又要斷氣了。8964 copyright protection333PENANA2kwSpZQycY 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAr9rasMJVtP
8964 copyright protection333PENANA8MAanGYAMS 維尼
……都恐懼了,還有空“凝神細看”?8964 copyright protection333PENANABghtgmPUxw 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANALqHtqqOs8d
8964 copyright protection333PENANAF32W5jGPPM 維尼
用“水”拍人……我沒跳片場吧?8964 copyright protection333PENANA6fRSXySOSO 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAIViyEUgjQq
8964 copyright protection333PENANA1jyKXMP5xU 維尼
#6:……一口氣說完真的不會斷氣嗎?8964 copyright protection333PENANA0S73gVYrB2 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAeE28sgw7if
8964 copyright protection333PENANAcCSmsB1O30 維尼
#1~6:感覺還不錯,可以給個瑕不掩瑜的四星。8964 copyright protection333PENANAySvzGaMFrO 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAsyr5YVeSw2
8964 copyright protection333PENANAV0rghFqZmx 維尼
#7:沒看作話的話、我完全不知道這篇在說誰。然後,作者你好清楚菸喔,有抽嗎?8964 copyright protection333PENANA7r1NVoKocF 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANABu8ZloBhhx
8964 copyright protection333PENANAcVpvifD5tw 維尼
#8:為什麼打架可以打一章?然後……我看不太懂這章到底寫什麼,我只知道他們打架了。8964 copyright protection333PENANAau6hixfuTU 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANANjVhb7r1FI
8964 copyright protection333PENANA9FEjGEgekB 維尼
#9:打架的後續處理,好像沒什麼劇情?我還是不知道為什麼打架……8964 copyright protection333PENANArzYc1fMNyi 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAHnZihue2az
8964 copyright protection333PENANAkxwpN4rjKX 維尼
#10:假條,沒什麼好說的。8964 copyright protection333PENANAjwN6Uo5Wj4 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAghubZWmnRO
8964 copyright protection333PENANAxtYgtKvXL4 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAn38ZevqVNW
8964 copyright protection333PENANASLbvvakzUw 維尼
337Please respect copyright.PENANAiRQJmTAkBF
8964 copyright protection333PENANAsYKXNopI25 維尼
整體來說,我覺得作者敘事清楚,劇情也很清楚。不過偏執的大白鯊他爸、感覺不會這麼簡單放過大白鯊。還有,文中不少髒話,個人不喜歡髒話啊……8964 copyright protection333PENANAe44pGaFG1r 維尼
216.73.216.82
ns216.73.216.82da2