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這是我指定心得的最後一篇,以後大概也不會有人指定。畢竟,這種閱讀記錄似的心得,應該沒多少人會要。扯遠了……我本來是想說帆帆的。8964 copyright protection291PENANApFdmYIwD0A 維尼
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我認識帆帆的時候是跟蝦蝦一起,也不知道是不是因為這樣、我老覺得她們像雙胞胎,而且是感情很好的雙胞胎。聽說她們還有一起寫文?有時間去翻來看,最近忙著寫中秋賀文——不是小熊那個。8964 copyright protection291PENANAurRfrRspnp 維尼
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說到中秋賀文,它就是心得晚的元凶!最近趕它、差點忘記我心得還沒寫。我記得“離離”也還沒寫完,今天應該能寫完這篇吧?希望。8964 copyright protection291PENANAkQUQ8Ye8lL 維尼
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《離離》——逆水千帆(#1~10,只有十篇、應該很快?)8964 copyright protection291PENANAhc5VdB3NJt 維尼
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簡介:還沒看內文時的想法——我比較喜歡《予良辰》8964 copyright protection291PENANAnqHNMtD32J 維尼
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#1:個給是什麼?8964 copyright protection291PENANABNRAXH4nh9 維尼
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小情侶?我以為只是要轉學那個的損友。8964 copyright protection291PENANAhh4mtKX5Jj 維尼
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跪在大腿兩側……一個人怎麼跪兩個地方?(我後來想了想,是跨跪嗎?)8964 copyright protection291PENANA2xvu68YhCE 維尼
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“他們的吻綿長而深情”<=我感覺像少年也回應了8964 copyright protection291PENANAhav2IvE23J 維尼
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#2:……開頭我就想吐槽,既然說了陽光溫暖、用“刺眼”好像怪怪的?刺眼不療癒吧?8964 copyright protection291PENANAT6ZmRE9zAo 維尼
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南城是雨城?一個地方應該不至於氣候相差太多,所以是兩個地方?轉學順便搬家?8964 copyright protection291PENANADCE63I8OF9 維尼
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大衣那句好長,會斷氣。8964 copyright protection291PENANA8JMZPwnXQE 維尼
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……邊走邊玩手機算中二病?8964 copyright protection291PENANAA3MvgQ9t5j 維尼
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什麼是“很抓馬”?8964 copyright protection291PENANA4t2GcjfcLb 維尼
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為什麼要固定治療+吃藥?前面沒說過啊?8964 copyright protection291PENANA7bkzWvzda0 維尼
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#3:溫暖不定的陰霾……?可以解釋一下意思嗎?8964 copyright protection291PENANApWhZSmmCTi 維尼
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很×臉?我猜是很不要臉,可是這是國文課嗎?字不懂、意思也不懂,理解錯怎麼辦?8964 copyright protection291PENANA6YowGFyC6Y 維尼
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會考<=非台灣地區不好理解吧?8964 copyright protection291PENANAPm4xERd9Eb 維尼
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#4:(舉手)請服務生分開醬料是為了大白鯊?(這個比較好記)可是他們認識不到一天吧?會不會太了解了?8964 copyright protection291PENANARNsVPk9NRk 維尼
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#5:一來就是心聲?阿晨是誰?小勞是什麼?8964 copyright protection291PENANAO0P9L1hHS5 維尼
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咦?是訊息啊?可是,是誰給誰啊?(我那段看完才搞清楚誰傳給誰,順便搞清楚三個人關係)8964 copyright protection291PENANA1VQwW8yrzE 維尼
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權烯?這又是誰?8964 copyright protection291PENANAtbq6HK77Yw 維尼
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口嗨是什麼?又一對男男?這是現代校園、沒私設吧?男男頻率會不會偏高了?正常不是應該男女?8964 copyright protection291PENANAAnm52tN5dP 維尼
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跳電那個……又要斷氣了。8964 copyright protection291PENANA8SlHX2XUMp 維尼
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……都恐懼了,還有空“凝神細看”?8964 copyright protection291PENANAAUVE2dvooZ 維尼
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用“水”拍人……我沒跳片場吧?8964 copyright protection291PENANAv61CCvSe4V 維尼
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#6:……一口氣說完真的不會斷氣嗎?8964 copyright protection291PENANAB82o1f0C36 維尼
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#1~6:感覺還不錯,可以給個瑕不掩瑜的四星。8964 copyright protection291PENANAJySL1BvLQn 維尼
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#7:沒看作話的話、我完全不知道這篇在說誰。然後,作者你好清楚菸喔,有抽嗎?8964 copyright protection291PENANAAjZ7wMjG1s 維尼
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#8:為什麼打架可以打一章?然後……我看不太懂這章到底寫什麼,我只知道他們打架了。8964 copyright protection291PENANAnAC7DX7U0f 維尼
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#9:打架的後續處理,好像沒什麼劇情?我還是不知道為什麼打架……8964 copyright protection291PENANAQp5j9NIQrt 維尼
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#10:假條,沒什麼好說的。8964 copyright protection291PENANAr1AE3m4Upp 維尼
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整體來說,我覺得作者敘事清楚,劇情也很清楚。不過偏執的大白鯊他爸、感覺不會這麼簡單放過大白鯊。還有,文中不少髒話,個人不喜歡髒話啊……8964 copyright protection291PENANArOm7cjrq8r 維尼
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