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No Plagiarism!XtytqYGA4vk4TUEeNcFmposted on PENANA 分享心得,我看寫文得聽相應的音樂寫,8964 copyright protection198PENANAwBnRmQoZls 維尼
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原因:113.4.28 ,為這些音樂想出故事這則創挑,我又很手欠的參加了。8964 copyright protection198PENANADnm5LzZGUs 維尼
(因為第5首聽了不久,忽然想起鼓面軍那一段,就又忍不住了,這也不是重點,為了裁切使不要過於突兀,我邊聽著音樂邊改文,8964 copyright protection198PENANAEYaX6jcj4Z 維尼
因此發現,有音樂的時侯,寫得入心(我心啦 ! )多了.!8964 copyright protection198PENANAx2jxSSmUJ2 維尼
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烽火臺煙起了!8964 copyright protection198PENANAz4tYdQdRCr 維尼
他估量著寧武關再過為雁門關,此些軍馬被驅往雁門關去,但雁門主帥的帳內軍師心機陰沈,料會勸住主帥按兵不援。8964 copyright protection198PENANAq2j4dsA02w 維尼
踱到窗邊抬起厚布窗遮,暗計這一路風雪不停,若由老營堡援近雁門關,人馬不敢帶多,且人馬到了,會不會屆時只有遍地雪中殘骸,倒癱淌血的馬?8964 copyright protection198PENANAFUyzBRCsdM 維尼
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縱能趕上,至多能做也只是護殘兵脫離險地,勢不能挽。8964 copyright protection198PENANA1DPabz7iij 維尼
挾雪利風在窗外呼呼嘯捲,他回身交了令牌:「左右帶約四十人吧,叫上十名鼓面兵,馬備鼓面。」8964 copyright protection198PENANA7HyQXHw8pW 維尼
邁開大步:「一起吧!」8964 copyright protection198PENANA1Gd0FEiXWI 維尼
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跟來的是四十二個,貼身隨從何順堅持要跟也是隨他,算上自已是四十四人。8964 copyright protection198PENANA6tSs5kBs0q 維尼
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他走出軍營手上皮套翻袍上馬,紅袍隨烈烈寒風捲提在縞白的雪上,隨著個個紅袍上馬,一片艷紅綻在冰白地,壯美帶血腥。8964 copyright protection198PENANAEqXrEc920K 維尼
他舉臂向後側臉回望,隨來的或青稚或半老,開了口道:「多小心。」8964 copyright protection198PENANAFJpyr1phvk 維尼
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眼向前轉回,臂一撤,四十四匹馬撒蹄往崗上,住那舉煙的鋒火臺去,紅棕色馬鬣隨風賁張,識途的三名老兵領著,在雪中馳近半夜,他心在算——8964 copyright protection198PENANAHe9JNmZzya 維尼
這雪太利,凍久了自己人都難保安,夾緊馬腹一鞭往後,又向旁出聲:「棒!」8964 copyright protection198PENANAnl3Iy0XvqO 維尼
何順將鼓棒交遞上來,他將鞭換持過鼓棒,「镗镗镗镗達達」8964 copyright protection198PENANAmyA9z9qmGm 維尼
「镗镗镗镗達達」,四面鼓併響了起來,以此節奏,馬群奔蹄加快,飛轉進枯如森墨的黑皮樹林內。8964 copyright protection198PENANAVVxx0VUV2b 維尼
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當初答應了妻子絶不涉險,如今已經不是第一次成謊,好運氣會在那一次用完?他心盤著…。8964 copyright protection198PENANAoYKg66A7pD 維尼
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又馳約一時辰,果然見一面賀字軍旗,歪歪倒倒而來。8964 copyright protection198PENANA8zYbvU1Yx6 維尼
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陸謙寬估量著此與OO關間為OO關,但主帥帳內軍師心機陰沈料會勸住按兵不發,暗計這一路風雪不停,若由此地援去,待軍力到大勢已定,至多能做也只是護殘兵脫離險地。便不帶太多人馬,叫鼓面兵馬上都備鼓面。何順堅持要跟也是隨他。在雪中馳了半夜,果然見一面賀字軍旗歪歪倒倒而來,8964 copyright protection198PENANAsViVKrHbaX 維尼
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是不是差很多,但你可能會說癈話,改寫自然會不一樣!8964 copyright protection198PENANAlmvUzebemF 維尼
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聽著音樂時心情跟著有起伏、有幽迴,你才會想寫得起伏幽迴。我是這個意思的。8964 copyright protection198PENANAeDmrFXsmPG 維尼
分享給精益求精,好求更好的諸位。8964 copyright protection198PENANArA4RS6kebj 維尼
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本人則矢志在終結爛尾樓並 勿再造新殃 而已!8964 copyright protection198PENANAfgeiWYu0re 維尼
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