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短文：恐怖的驚歎號通貨膨漲

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接續上一篇，描寫強烈的情緒當然就少不了驚歎號。

一般來說驚歎號是這樣用的：

小美看到朋友來了，非常高興，急著下樓迎接，不小心摔了一跤。

「啊！好痛！」

因為是描述情緒的符號，自然是要放在產生情緒的人的對白中。

如果作者寫：

小美看到朋友來了，非常高興急著下樓迎接，不小心摔了一 跤，好痛！

這樣就會有點違和，因為痛的應該是小美而不是作為旁白的作者。

以上還不算嚴重，因為敍述者原本就可以深入角色內心，比較不妙的是以下的寫法：

我看到我朋友來了！我好高興！我衝下樓去迎接，結果跌倒了！好痛啊！

相信讀者看了只會有個想法：你好煩！

驚歎號既然是用來修飾強烈的情緒，就不能用得太頻繁，否則就會創作出一個沒事大呼小叫的角色，再多情緒都不值錢了。

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