
【類型】【天火系列】星落之國,#西方奇幻 173Please respect copyright.PENANApchcF3MU6a
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【篇名】【天火系列】星落之國173Please respect copyright.PENANAIyasJWYvF5
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【核心概念】173Please respect copyright.PENANALSNTr5cjzb
「星落所指,吾之所歸」
我看到一切,但我埋藏於心。星辰落下,何處才是我的歸屬?這是偉大帝國陷落的前奏,這是諸神造物的自毁,這是最後的神權。
我是哈維.米提拉,但這不是我的故事。173Please respect copyright.PENANA3unhZTIrs6
【動機】想知道讀後感、想增進文筆173Please respect copyright.PENANAZBpBhz3hiq
【範圍】隨意173Please respect copyright.PENANArlNHGb9gj9
【問題點】隨意173Please respect copyright.PENANAjPMIUP70Kb
【著重面】故事閱讀感受與角色塑造形象173Please respect copyright.PENANAA24jHgMT8Y
【評論類型】閱讀心得,技巧交流173Please respect copyright.PENANAUB5LHAWbUO
【想對評論者說的話】幫冰喵拍拍手