《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMAunEMqTj1
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡutdWqeCMFp
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF0779CzJEh
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuqZwsMwsuZ
而是是人在食用時能入口即化225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtk2uOa7WkT
225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdcDXBUWliV
「嘗試把心臟調慢」225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq04l7lw2AM
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl56ybJ0uDO
使人不會因為時間的洪流225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl3JDDvb1Lm
失去了炙熱225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPNcR31XSak
225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡedPZ2UyH4P
詩名為《夏，冬眠》225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVfDhOeNU3o
但夏季怎麼會有雪225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvCUKndb1NL
令人加以反思225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzpy1v16gO0
雪季不該有的畫面225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlEmPnqHsgG
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtGJIlZ2gg0
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或許225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS474uvbSDT
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsR7YWPF3Oz
即便是來年225Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3McV2WxsmI
之後的每一年都依然如此
