《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3civo9QhN9
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYWvEAAbQ2t
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIDsaGDe5Qo
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUZcVduLFMX
而是是人在食用時能入口即化219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1j4NCX03zi
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBU4YVpM0qN
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBrpZ26SLDA
使人不會因為時間的洪流219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡngaic3n7UY
失去了炙熱219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUqGMmtIPgv
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2yfmTZlq3s
但夏季怎麼會有雪219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpi98RnC3v0
令人加以反思219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡydZJXfjEA7
雪季不該有的畫面219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbhAc7iHka0
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUQfjhNE4Gs
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或許219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMaY3rz8thg
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUOqa3fRpV9
即便是來年219Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy2jMyBfRSH
之後的每一年都依然如此
