《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuMqhUx2n59
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2mTGzVd3oX
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRQg7h3p6o3
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTYT2TszUQB
而是是人在食用時能入口即化268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0DeIjkuORE
268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTQsnFZvTic
「嘗試把心臟調慢」268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY8GevRHtAR
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa0YAvDkGea
使人不會因為時間的洪流268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdkecoXBqMR
失去了炙熱268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDZ1mOz00kN
268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYTWS2Nvsdu
詩名為《夏，冬眠》268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVHnXzEp3ks
但夏季怎麼會有雪268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4er9XOh8Vk
令人加以反思268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4QRuJUHJRs
雪季不該有的畫面268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR3koS3B9XB
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6n5u0vUZs4
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或許268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfC3vs192ZC
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdO1ujq5orM
即便是來年268Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRX9LKZhkIr
之後的每一年都依然如此
