《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJyYE86OyRN
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDPAegzGxa9
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgA8k4BWNWr
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8NkdmNMhP2
而是是人在食用時能入口即化198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlvTSJksv83
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnbADKuHqzo
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsEFOwNq6Rj
使人不會因為時間的洪流198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfRonusmjog
失去了炙熱198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdxbVe2hU3h
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW9NNU0hXpk
但夏季怎麼會有雪198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm7t9VUs5WM
令人加以反思198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrtsm5iPqlm
雪季不該有的畫面198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd2jaQIaoF2
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡenylqrYVPA
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或許198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbHVKwQA0Mx
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGpzGKQMiZ
即便是來年198Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡglYGGRZaQD
之後的每一年都依然如此
