《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧216Please respect copyright.PENANA91XxBnddvN
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍216Please respect copyright.PENANAAj8bbUSSPz
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)216Please respect copyright.PENANAqfpeSP7YMY
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單216Please respect copyright.PENANA5yEJu6M8iQ
而是是人在食用時能入口即化216Please respect copyright.PENANA15u9gN68XT
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」216Please respect copyright.PENANAKeNQM8WwMb
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久216Please respect copyright.PENANApP4fVBEZcE
使人不會因為時間的洪流216Please respect copyright.PENANALD0Otq7BvC
失去了炙熱216Please respect copyright.PENANA8BGSPrh208
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》216Please respect copyright.PENANAP1nGZM0isE
但夏季怎麼會有雪216Please respect copyright.PENANAWZBQA94ErY
令人加以反思216Please respect copyright.PENANApTy0BIGy02
雪季不該有的畫面216Please respect copyright.PENANAcMPWLBma8e
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏216Please respect copyright.PENANABEctVnhThf
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或許216Please respect copyright.PENANArzk3M6exZV
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣216Please respect copyright.PENANAsVpozV9UxA
即便是來年216Please respect copyright.PENANAQ6itvL5NgP
之後的每一年都依然如此