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主題走向(單看簡介):奇幻、愛情類型。看下來很像校園日常,純友誼不存在吧。8964 copyright protection19PENANAeNoyhOqhzK 維尼
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評語:前面沒有說清楚會以為在奔跑的是男的,不知道作者是有意還是無意整體的你都是用「你」。8964 copyright protection19PENANAHJjyde2To3 維尼
優點:整體意外的好看(可能有冰山系學長加持),讓從來不看校園愛情的我看下去了。中間忽然冒出老司機語言整個無語。8964 copyright protection19PENANAxu3zxfg6ys 維尼
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