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主題走向(單看簡介):愛情bl、師生類型。看了簡介才知道是BL,劇情感覺還不錯,但是作者好像都把劇情都寫光了。8964 copyright protection5PENANAqK1v9yJfuT 維尼
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評語:雖然看了簡介劇情還不錯,只是作者全放出來沒有驚喜了。8964 copyright protection5PENANAPUQz08P21m 維尼
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吸引度:簡介出賣了劇情,因此沒有吸引到。8964 copyright protection5PENANAQuxEysH7Ij 維尼
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