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她的臉上露出了一抹微笑,嘴角微微揚起,眼睛也跟著彎了起來,看起來非常開心快樂。8964 copyright protection57PENANAHqYXZMWnUh 維尼
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她嘴角輕揚,眉眼彎彎,神色顯得異常愉悅。61Please respect copyright.PENANAklVZqqEdsA
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「嘴角輕揚」、「眉眼彎彎」、「神色愉悅」,三者都在描寫開心的神情,略有重疊。可依風格選擇保留兩項即可。8964 copyright protection57PENANA2DMLgEdgLP 維尼
**「異常愉悅」**語氣稍正式,若想走柔和路線可以替換成「滿是喜色」、「帶著歡意」之類的詞。8964 copyright protection57PENANAHmJVY5xKcH 維尼
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範例一(簡約柔和):61Please respect copyright.PENANAeRfUjx0BVM
她嘴角微揚,眉眼間滿是喜色。8964 copyright protection57PENANAT7M5zdsEde 維尼
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她一笑,眉眼彎彎,神情恬然喜悅。8964 copyright protection57PENANAZpSNBYTBUe 維尼
範例三(保留你原本的語感,小調整):61Please respect copyright.PENANAPjpIgKNFSl
她嘴角輕揚,眉眼彎彎,整個人透著歡喜。8964 copyright protection57PENANA6tsbmANI5h 維尼
二.原句練習題:8964 copyright protection57PENANAAu7S9qHxqa 維尼
凌晏如站在窗邊,靜靜地站著,什麼話也沒說,只是默默地望著窗外的天空和雲朵。61Please respect copyright.PENANA14KD4MiRAJ
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凌晏如神色沈靜如水,只是靜默地望著窗外冰冷皎潔的月光。61Please respect copyright.PENANAOgg3DMZ55s
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**「神色沈靜如水」**語意完整,形容恰當,可保留。8964 copyright protection57PENANAknM9K8h6ks 維尼
**「靜默地望著」**與「神色沈靜」語義有些重疊,且「靜默」與「望」常連用,可簡化。8964 copyright protection57PENANAlYoAYlHKz2 維尼
**「冰冷皎潔的月光」**畫面有,但「冰冷」與「皎潔」在語氣上可能稍有衝突:一個是觸感(冷),一個是視覺(潔白明亮),可以選其一或換句話更貼情境。8964 copyright protection57PENANAnvlEe2b5iN 維尼
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範例一(簡潔內斂):61Please respect copyright.PENANATke8w16Eze
凌晏如神色沈靜如水,凝望著窗外的月光。8964 copyright protection57PENANACqQ2ky24D8 維尼
範例二(詩意版):61Please respect copyright.PENANAgklXpIrF2I
凌晏如神情澄靜,望向窗外皎潔如霜的月色。8964 copyright protection57PENANARbHbLhkBe9 維尼
範例三(保留冷感):61Please respect copyright.PENANAe5gL8n1hx0
凌晏如神色如水,靜靜凝視著窗外冰冷的月光。8964 copyright protection57PENANACIt1CGm7AX 維尼
範例四(古風柔化版):61Please respect copyright.PENANA7I7EPv5Baz
凌晏如眉目寧靜,望著窗外清冷如霜的月華。8964 copyright protection57PENANAiFQ8YStsow 維尼
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