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情斷之時

過客 過客
Oct 18, 2024 165 1 Min Read 384 Words
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回來呦

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悄悄地

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一個擁抱

一支折柳

一聲保重

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望

你遠去的背影

期待

再相見時

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殊不知

是最後一次告別

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我不在意

流言蜚語

我不相信

你有新歡

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誰知

竟成了真

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如今

白鬢已橫生

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我恨

君負我

我卻不願負君

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只得含淚

賦詩

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回首夢中故人影

夜闌珊時淚濕枕

驚覺朱顏已消逝

妾斷腸時君無情

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故事背景：女孩與男孩皆出身窮苦人家，從小便是青梅竹馬，更是互許終生，後來男孩不願女孩與他一起過三餐不繼的日子，於是外出考取功名。

但這一去，卻永無歸期。

十年後，女子得知男子有了新歡，可是不願相信，這一等又是數十年。

如今，青絲成雪，流言成真。

男子負了女子，女子恨自己軟弱不願負男子。

只能自己流淚....

詩（翻譯）：今晚夢見了你，枕頭濕了，是眼淚。

時光飛逝，驚醒時發覺，自己已經不再年輕貌美。

這些日子，我沒日沒夜的哭，肝腸寸斷時，你早已將我遺忘。

（「你」是男子，「我」是女子」

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寫完之後發現，似乎可以寫成小說欸！

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今天段考完，看到這個創挑很久了，很想挑戰看看。

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小女子洗耳恭聽！

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