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#3

WHO AM I?

Bulbul

Jun 8, 2025

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1 Min Read 215 Words

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I talk so nice

But they call me rude

I live with a blemish

But everyone thinks I'm selfish

When I care for others

They ride over me

When I look back the path

I've got nobody

But who are you

Who came to my life

When I stopped caring

Why are you still with me

When I seem very boring

I'm afraid to trust you

Will you break my trust?

If you will

Then please leave now

I can no more tolerate

My trust being broken and broken and broken

By one or the other

Without even a single friend

Can my life be better?

Who am I?

Who wishes for a friend

But is afraid to trust

Who am I?

Who lost her hope

But yearns for one

Who am I?

A fish trying to swim on the land?

Who am I?

If you know then please tell me.......166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdm1tXa0KfS

P.S - I know this is not tragic for most of you. You might have been in a worse situation but still I guess this is tragic at least for a handful of people like me. I'm not sure about a story but since you didn't mention whether we have to write a story or something else I came up with a poem. I hope I didn't break the contest rules. If I had wasted your time, then I'm very SORRY!166Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvQtt4ZbYSL

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